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The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Nilas Date: July 28, 2012, 7:12 pm
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All applications must be posted in a reply to this thread. All
applications will be read thoroughly and will be picked with
extreme discretion, there is a very slim chance you will be
accepted.
There are 2 spots remaining.
[code]
Steam Name:
Steam ID:
What is the Jedi Order?:
Brief summary of the Star Wars Universe:
Character Name:
Character Age:
Character Species:
Character Backstory:[/code]
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Doodlemaster Date: July 29, 2012, 7:15 am
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Nilas Date: July 29, 2012, 10:19 am
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Declined. Your application lacks proper grammar and punctuation
throughout its entirety.
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Doodlemaster Date: July 29, 2012, 3:52 pm
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Vantus Aeon Date: July 30, 2012, 5:26 am
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Snazzy Date: July 30, 2012, 6:34 am
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[quote author=William Stark link=topic=674.msg2660#msg2660
date=1343643985]
Steam Name: William Stark
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:49014850
What is the Jedi Order?: The Jedi Order is a peacekeeping
organization consisting of force-users called Jedi. The Jedi are
guardians of peace and justice in the universe, and are aligned
with what is called the "Light Side of the Force." The Order
embodies all that is good, and is all that stands between the
Sith--wielders of the dark side of the force.
Brief summary of the Star Wars Universe: The Star Wars universe
is the immense, sprawling representation of human creativity and
imagination. Within the Star Wars universe, there are galaxies
upon galaxies--a vast expanse populated by both good and evil.
Each and every living being is connected through the Force--a
greater power that binds all life together. From the sandy,
desolate landscape of Tatooine, to the populated cities of
Coruscant, the universe that makes up Star Wars holds limitless
potential and infinite adventure for those who embrace it.
Character Name: Vantus Aeon
Character Age: 25
Character Species: Human
Character Backstory: Vantus Aeon is the son of Kannis Aeon--a
renowned Jedi Knight who was killed by the former Jedi Master,
Count Dooku, during Dooku's fall to the Dark Side. Vantus was
secretly born on Dantooine, after Kannis had fallen in love and
impregnated woman named Azaela--breaking Jedi code. Vantus was
raised on the plains of Dantooine by his mother. When he was 18,
Azaela was gravely wounded from an attack by raiders. Before she
died, however, she told Vantus the truth about his father and
who he was. After taking revenge on the raiders, Vantus gathered
enough credits to travel to Tatooine--the planet that his father
had died on. It is currently unknown whether Vantus also
possesses Force-sensitivity.
[/quote]
Denied - Four paragraphs Minimum
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Snazzy Date: July 30, 2012, 10:22 am
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[quote author=Doodlemaster link=topic=674.msg2653#msg2653
date=1343595124]
Steam Name: TheDoodleMaster's Girlfriend
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:37772968
What is the Jedi Order?: The Jedi Order is an ancient monastic
peacekeeping organization unified by its belief and observance
of the Force, specifically the light side
Brief summary of the Star Wars Universe: The sith and the jedi
have been battling for years. The sith for power over all
planets and the jedi for peace in the world, But the Sith keeps
coming back even though they experience more death then the
jedi.
Character Name: Jessa Virai
Character Age: 25
Character Species: Twi'lek
Character Backstory: Jessa Grew up in a village in Alderon. Most
of her people were enslaved, but the people in her village were
not. Jessa's village had a connection with the sith, Their
village gave them some food to not be enslaved. That deal was
broken.
The sith raided her village, the people who ran were killed. Her
father had a ship just outside the village. They ran and ran,
Jessa 's father fell to the ground as she looked behind her, a
blast mark lies on his head. She finally got to the ship but
before the door shut she was clipped in the leg.
She piloted her plane to tatooine, There she crashed 13 miles
from the city. She hauled herself out of the ship and then
dragged herself across the burning sand, There she found the
city.
Jessa doesn't want revenge, She just wants the sith to burn
down. They controlled her by fear, Thats about to change.
[/quote]
Pending - Very weak Background, you have two days to redo.
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Doodlemaster Date: July 30, 2012, 10:40 am
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Snazzy Date: July 30, 2012, 10:44 am
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[quote author=Doodlemaster link=topic=674.msg2666#msg2666
date=1343662828]
Steam Name: TheDoodleMaster's Girlfriend
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:37772968
What is the Jedi Order?: The Jedi Order is an ancient monastic
peacekeeping organization unified by its belief and observance
of the Force, specifically the light side
Brief summary of the Star Wars Universe: The sith and the jedi
have been battling for years. The sith for power over all
planets and the jedi for peace in the world, But the Sith keeps
coming back even though they experience more death then the
jedi.
Character Name: Veronica Hearth
Character Age: 21
Character Species: Miraluka
Character Backstory: Veronica grew up in Alpheridies, She was
more of the girl who pranced around the meadow hearing water
drip drop as she sat there listening. She could feel the force
in her hands, She wanted to learn more about this mysterious
thing urging her to pick up the rock and see if it levitates.
Her dad was a jedi, She didn't see him much, When she saw him he
would teach her all about the force and how it works.
One day she was pouncing around the meadow, She could feel
herself being pulled towards an object. She slowly walked up the
stairs to the temple. There she met a part of the jedi council.
She was always strong with the force, But alas she was too young
to help with the sith.
A few years later when she was ten she could levitate rocks as
if it was nothing, She wanted to do more though. She slowly grew
stronger with that one rock everyday, She would lift it up at
toss it then catch it like magic. She slowly started growing
into a real jedi, She just couldn't see it at the time. She
finally got her first blade, She practiced new moves on the
dummy everyday, Flips to backslash the dummy, Summersalts and
sliding on the ground forward to the dummy and hitting the
dummy's legs.
Her Dad had to leave home for a long time, She came along with
him to tatooine. A few years later in Tatooine she is now twenty
one and ready to fight the sith. But One scary day, Her dad was
captured by the sith and tormented, She heard his screams. She
couldn't do anything about it. Those dreams still haunt her
today...
[/quote]
Denied - Very uncanon, she just lol-learned how to use the
force? Some of the GROWN UPS could barely even use the force.
And nice, "My Dad/mom died, feel bad for me story."
[color=green]Apply in 5 days.[/color]
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Re: The Jedi ~ Applications
By: Vantus Aeon Date: July 30, 2012, 2:41 pm
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Steam Name: William Stark
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:49014850
What is the Jedi Order?: The Jedi Order is a peacekeeping
organization consisting of force-users called Jedi. The Jedi are
guardians of peace and justice in the universe, and are aligned
with what is called the "Light Side of the Force." The Order
embodies all that is good, and is all that stands between the
Sith--wielders of the dark side of the force.
Brief summary of the Star Wars Universe: The Star Wars universe
is the immense, sprawling representation of human creativity and
imagination. Within the Star Wars universe, there are galaxies
upon galaxies--a vast expanse populated by both good and evil.
Each and every living being is connected through the Force--a
greater power that binds all life together. From the sandy,
desolate landscape of Tatooine, to the populated cities of
Coruscant, the universe that makes up Star Wars holds limitless
potential and infinite adventure for those who embrace it.
Character Name: Vantus Aeon
Character Age: 20
Character Species: Human
Character Backstory:
1)Vantus Aeon is the son of Kannis Aeon--a renowned
Jedi Knight. Kannis was turned to the dark side by the former
Jedi Master, Count Dooku, during Dooku's fall and the fall of
the Lost Twenty. Vantus was secretly born on Dantooine, after
his father had impregnated a woman named Azaela. His love for
her was great, but he knew that none could know of it. By being
in love, he was breaking Jedi code--which greatly discourages
passion (a utilization of the Sith). It was shortly after his
son's birth that Kannis was turned on the planet of Tatooine.
Corrupted by his own master.
Vantus was raised on the plains of Dantooine by his
mother. They lived in relative peace in the beautiful
environment. Their credits were essentially earned by seasonal
farming, but Vantus also worked as a speeder and ship mechanic
in a nearby town. He had a knack for fixing up any kind of
vehicle. This gave them the means to survive during snowfall,
when nothing would grow but cabbage and Dorian passion fruit.
The night before Vantus' 18th birthday, he was working
late on a merchant ship's engine. On his way home in his small
speederbike, he noticed fire beyond the hills in the direction
of his farm. He raced home for somewhere inside he had known
that it was indeed his farm burning. This was not natural, as
winter had come and fires could not start on their own in such
temperatures. He dismounted and dashed inside the burning house
to find what he had feared most. He shouldered his mother out of
the fire and set her down in a patch of grass where snow had
melted.
Azaela was gravely wounded--a large puncture in her
stomach that was caused by a vibroblade. Vantus knew who had
done this. Rodian bandits had been at large in the area.
2)Before she died, however, she told Vantus the truth about his
father and who he was. Swelling with anger, Vantus had located
and killed the 4 Rodians armed with only a fusion cutter. Vantus
gathered enough credits to buy a small ship, which he fixed up
himself. His primary destination was Tatooine--the planet that
his father had died on.
It is currently unknown whether Vantus also possesses
Force-sensitivity.
[Was unaware of a 4 paragraph requirement. The small amount of
text does not mirror my ambition. I looked at the other apps and
it seemed that you may have preferred straight and to-the-point
stories. I hope that you may reconsider.]
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