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       Week One submission 
       By: akollevoll Date: June 11, 2018, 12:09 am
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       Here's the first submission from my feature comedy script.
       Technically, it's 15 and a half pages, but I didn't want to
       leave y'all on a cliffhanger :)
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       Re: Week One submission 
       By: Kate Doughty Date: June 17, 2018, 3:15 pm
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       Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here!!
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       Re: Week One submission 
       By: monaghanjk@comcast.net Date: June 21, 2018, 12:17 pm
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       Good run-up to the inciting incident reveal, although perhaps a
       little long. We know our Monica now, and we've at least met the
       supporting cast. Lots of potential here, Annaliese!
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