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Chapter 2
By: Gerald Date: May 16, 2013, 11:05 am
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'Stay alert, men!' Sonja said. She brought 3 members with her to
check out the citadel. 'I don't think anything will
happen......' One of them said. 'Don't be relaxed. I can feel
that something is coming.' She pulled out her whip. 'Call the
head guard. Tell him to bring someone to the entrance. You,
please guard the portal. Anyone who enters the citadel is a
hostile. Inform me asap if anything happened.' That member went.
The head guard brought 5 men to the entrance, while 2 members
stayed with sonja in the keep. 'We are wasting our time....'
'Quiet, Sam! I told you to stay...' Before she finished, the
citadel shook. Sam and sonja fell down, and the other guy was
hit by a fireball and got blown away. 'Holy.....' Sonja tried to
get back up, but she got got hit again and fell back
down.'Surrender, you cowards!' 'You...Beckan!' Sonja grabbed her
whip, but Beckan smashed it away and pushed her back to the
floor. Another guy in black armor pressed her so she couldn't
get up.
Meanwhile at the citadel portal, David, the clan member who was
guarding the portal, was surrounded by 4 enemies. 'Damn
it...Sonja was right, you guys...' before he finished, a guy
charged towards him with his sword. David quickly blocked it
with his dragonfire shied. The other 3 guys charged too. 'Give
up, kid, you are outnumbered...' 'Shut up!' David rose his
shield and pointed it at one of them. 'Eat my dragonfire,
noobs!' As he finished, fire was shot out from his shield and
hit one of them. His armor was caught on fire and he fell down
immediately. 'AAaaaaaarrrrhhhhh! Water! Give me water! Get the
fire off me! Nooo!' His voice fell and the body remained unmoved
and silent. 'No! How dare you!' The remaining 3 men charged
again. David blocked one of them and knocked him to the floor.
'Eat this!' Another stabbed David's back. David fell down.
'You....damn it..' He fainted. 'Let's get to the entrance quick
and meet up with the others!' the 2 remaining men rushed to the
entrance, leaving David and 2 dead bodies behind.
At the entrance, the head guard and 5 soldiers were fighting 3
heavily-armed hostiles.' Tiga was right! The citadel is in chaos
now! We must get to sonja!' the head guard shouted while
shielding himself from the heavy attacks of one of the enemies.
The other soldiers were fighting the 2 other fierce enemies. 'I
am going to end this, once and for all!' said the head guard as
he slashed his sword against the enemies. He fell down. At the
same time, the other soldiers finally defeated their opponents.
They quickly rushed to the keep to meet up with sonja.
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Yay for Chapter 2
By: KaunLeon Date: May 16, 2013, 8:18 pm
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I see you tried to write some action scenes, nifty. Yet, maybe
you can try to grab one part that is important and write it more
detail? I don't know, you can try.
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Re: Chapter 2
By: Gerald Date: May 17, 2013, 8:33 am
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These are just some early fight scenes, not really important, so
I didn't put much details :p
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K
By: KaunLeon Date: May 17, 2013, 9:16 am
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Okie donkey I shall wait for more then.
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