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Out Of Character Thread!
By: Mascii Date: January 17, 2013, 12:45 am
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Plotting space! ;D Anything here is seen to be Out Of Character
automatically. A place for plotting, questions, feedback, and
randomness. :3
I think I should add Natalie's profile later on...I don't think
I've ever had her as an official forum character, or written her
a profile...it'll be odd!
Here are some of the notes I have on plot order. If you have any
questions or want to stir things up a bit with a character or
something, let me know. :3
[quote]
BAND SCENE
Natalie/Yukito reconciliation (Yukito friendzones himself)
Erin scene – Veritas concert (Zinnia overhears Reese and Yukito
talking)
Bassist leaves
Yukito comforts Erin
Middle Scene Thing
Yukito gets his guitar back
More development for Natalie, as well as Amane/Daniel, and
possibly Lilith and Reese, I hope! Feel free to add in here if
you can! Please!
SCHOOL SHOOTING
Lilith goes in for surgery, Amane/Daniel are waiting just
outside
Zinnia enters the school, following Yukito inside
Zinnie Injures Amane/Daniel in her attempts to kill Dr. Marcus,
also injuring Dr. Ramsey in the meanwhile
Marcus runs away, with Zinnia in pursuit(? They go to a more
open area?)
Clarence/Yukito team up and take Zinnia down
AFTERMATH
Extra scenes can be placed here~! ♪
Scene with Hal/Dr. F about Yukito – Hal becomes enraged(?)
Scene between Daniel/Amane at the hospital
Zinnia wakes up from the sedatives to find Marcus there, he says
he has a way to remove the gun Enhancement from Zinnia,
mentioning papers at his house that could do so
Zinnia makes her attempt at an escape from the school infirmary,
and runs into Natalie. Natalie wants to help Zinnia find the
papers at Marcus' house.
Yukito joins(?)
[/quote]
I kind of think we should avoid starting the main plot until we
have the characters and the way they speak to and relate to each
other a little more understood, however. So if we could make up
a couple 'fake scenes' between especially Zinnia and the other
characters, Yukito/Erin and Clarence/Natalie, I think it will
help a lot!
EDIT: Aww...look...and old family tree I did for one of our old
plots!
HTML http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j110/MaskedNicci/Unused%20Bits/characterfamilytreenola.jpg
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: Mascii Date: January 26, 2013, 4:26 pm
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Okay, GG! I'd like to go over the concert scene with you, if you
don't mind! You can start with Erin and the band stuff, then we
can have a Yukito/Erin scene where they're talking
post-band-drama? The way I have it in the novel, Erin has a
large chunk of her POV (which can be a post for you) then it
goes to Reese/Yukito scene(which will be a post for me), then we
can have Yukito/Erin talk? :) Does that make sense?
And after the Reese/Yukito talk, would MissM be okay with a
Reese/Zinnia scene, perhaps? Or one of my other characters, if
you'd like. Lilith is actually a candidate for this, too..
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: GGJ5 Date: January 26, 2013, 9:47 pm
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Sure! Did you want to do that first, with the concert, or did
you want to do the random plot interaction stuff first... or
does it matter in this case? XD Since we've written them before?
idk... -sleepy GG-
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: Mascii Date: January 26, 2013, 10:21 pm
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Either way works, I think. Maybe we could start the concert
scene with Erin/Yukito and the snippet of Reese/Yukito, then
Reese or Lilith will have a scene at the concert with Zinnia or
any other character. And then we could either have a separate,
isolated scene with some of the other characters (Amane? Daniel?
etc?) that haven't gotten much focus. Maybe? :)
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: GGJ5 Date: January 26, 2013, 10:53 pm
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Always Daniel. Always.
:'D
Do you want me to start a thread/opening post for concert, then?
If so, I'll probs do it tomorrow between Epic Grading Sessions.
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: Mascii Date: January 26, 2013, 11:01 pm
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Feel free to start a thread! You don't have to have a
description or a picture, but it makes it easier for us to
reference back to it later, imho. :) So whichever.
Let's do Daniel/Erin! :D
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: morethanmusic Date: February 8, 2013, 12:50 am
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Only got a chance to make Hal's profile so far... Sorry I'm so
far behind everybody :-\
I'll make Clarence's profile when I get a chance. Because I know
you're all DYING to see my big brute around here. ::)
If possible, Mascii, even if you don't end up needing it for
your story at all, I'd like to work out Hal in the aftermath of
the shooting. :D
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: morethanmusic Date: February 18, 2013, 11:23 am
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Yooooooo! I'm gonna add Clarence, and I have two other
characters I could add besides him... Eva, who I plan to have
enhancements done on her eyes, and Phoenix, who I'm still
deliberating on an enhancement for... should I plan to add them
both or just one?
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: GGJ5 Date: February 18, 2013, 7:41 pm
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All I know is Phoenix is a cool name, yo. ;)
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Re: Out Of Character Thread!
By: Mascii Date: February 19, 2013, 6:42 pm
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MTM: I have a plot planned for Clarence/Natalie. We should have
it at school or at one of their houses. You game?
GGJ5: I think we are going to end up moving Yukirin to the
Ramsey home, if that's alright with you. I know I messaged you
in detail about it, but I wanted to clarify that here. :) The
posts are finally getting longer and more detailed....FINALLY!
Everyone: Reese and Natalie are currently open for interaction
at the coffee shop! Zinnia? Clarence? Anybody else is good, too!
:) I know they don't have their profiles up yet, but I will have
them up very soon...maybe this weekend?
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