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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Hartzalcotl Date: July 24, 2010, 9:40 am
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lol, wait until Darkrow comes and overthrow yours xD I haven't
seen him lately tho...
Bro!!! Where are you~? - Hartzalcotl's echoed words
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Tooth Date: July 24, 2010, 9:49 am
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~mod~ified.
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Hartzalcotl Date: July 24, 2010, 10:08 am
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lol, too many "protective" words in the characteristics. You
still haven't merged Haru's info to Mazie's description. You can
use the form if you have any info about the particular familiar
called Haru, not the Haru itself.
^ Maybe that sounds a bit complicated?
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Tooth Date: July 24, 2010, 10:24 am
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[quote author=Hartzalcotl link=topic=7.msg69#msg69
date=1279984096]
lol, too many "protective" words in the characteristics.[/quote]
I'll change that
[quote]You still haven't merged Haru's info to Mazie's
description.[/quote]
and I still am not planning on this.
[quote] You can use the form if you have any info about the
particular familiar called Haru, not the Haru itself.[/quote]
"the particular familiar called Haru" is exactly what I'm
saying. The Haru could be some sort of animal, but it isn't
this Haru.
[quote]^ Maybe that sounds a bit complicated?[/quote]
Yes, it sorta does.
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Hartzalcotl Date: July 24, 2010, 10:36 am
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@^@ I'm being confused by my own words... Let's start from this.
Hope doesn't sound complicated... T-T
Is "Haru" the name of this kind of particular familiar, or it is
a name, given to this particular familiar by Mazie?
If it is the name of this kind of particular familiar. Then I
still can not accept "Haru" because it's info is leaning toward
Mazie, not a general info about this kind of particular
familiar.
If it is a name, given to this particular familiar by Mazie,
then you can put "Haru" info in Mazie's description. I still
need general info about this kind of particular familiar,
though.
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: coolcat101s Date: July 24, 2010, 1:18 pm
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Places
Name: Moon Island
Location: Moon Island is about 5 miles south of Korika
Description: The island is shaped like a crescent and is
separated into three regions, the Tribal Lands, the Temple, and
the Tundra.
Places
Name: Tribal Lands
Location: Is located at the southern tip of the crescent
Description: This is the only part of the island that people
live, it is filled with rivers and lakes that have a variety of
fish. This part of the island is far enough away from the north
pole that plants can grow, mostly pines and other evergreen
trees.
Places
Name: The Temple
Location: Is located in the center of the crescent
Description: This is considered the most sacred place on the
island. Not only is it a temple dedicated to Luna (see Religion)
it is also the warmest place on the island, tropical flowers and
trees can grow there. Even with the warmth and plentiful food,
nobody lives at this part of the island. The only people allowed
to go are the keepers of the temple (not even they live at the
temple), the healer, and if necessary for the healing process
the person being healed. The temple is very large and made of a
rare crystal known as a Moon Crystal
HTML http://www.mineralminers.com/html/rkxp276s.jpg
that only forms
on the islands tundra. Nobody knows who built the temple or how
but whoever they were, they had amazing architectural skills.
Their biggest accomplishment must have been the main corridor;
there in the center of the room is a fountain (see things) that
aligns with the full moon perfectly which can be seen because of
the skylight. On the ceiling there is mural of the moon both in
physical form and spiritual form.
Places
Name: Tundra
Location: Is located at the northern tip of the island
Description: Is completely covered in snow and ice, no plant
life, nobody lives there and the people are the keepers of the
temple, who are there to mine for Moon Crystals to repair the
temple if it gets damaged.
Places
Name: Healing fountain
Description: A fountain
HTML http://sidselnelund.files.wordpress.com/2007/07/klaus-weber-1-drohojowska-philp10-21-05-1s.jpg<br
/>that reflects the full moon, it is made of Moon Crystal and
located in the temple. The water is said to have healing powers.
Monster
Name: Nixie
Species: Water Element
Description: Water Elements look as though they are made of
pure water and can take any shape. Nixie prefers the shape of a
water dragon. Water Elements tend to avoid people (usually the
only time they interact is when the Water Elements are keeping
balance), though Nixie appears fond of one human named Selena.
Water Elements are often referred to as “The Keepers of
Balance” they are both the punishers and the caregivers.
They not only hurt (and in the worst cases kill) people who
cause unbalance, they also heal and protect the insistent. Water
Elements are made of water so they don’t eat anything and
nothing eats them, their only real threat is being drunk by a
person or animal.
Location: Most Water Elements stay in the temple, Nixie is the
only Water Element that lives in the Tribal Lands.
Things
Name: Moon Crystal Necklace
Description: A Moon crystal that was given to Selena when she
was a baby, it has been rumored to be from Luna herself, for it
was cut more perfectly then humanly possible. Later
Selena’s mother put the crystal on a silver chain so
Selena could wear it as a necklace
HTML http://www.crystallight.com.tw/pi/988_L1.jpg
. It is said to
contain life energy that Luna gave to Selena.
Religion
Religion Name: Lunesta
Worships: things in nature, life, their main deity is the moon
goddess Luna who is said to be a healer and giver of life
Description: It’s a Lunite tradition that, because Luna
is a goddess, their leader must be a woman and because Luna is a
healer, their leader is also the tribes healer. The Lunites
believe in respecting nature.
Spell Name: Heal
Magic Type: water
Spell Power: heals anything((small and take little power, good
for healers with no experience)External and internal bleeding,
diseases, bruises,(big heals only experienced healers)bone
fractures, mutilation, various special conditions) unless it was
caused by fire and it can not bring the dead back
Description: (see above) works in small(1 person)
medium(several people) or large(everyone in an area)
Character Name: Selena
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Description: Selena
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/>is short for her age, standing at 5’4” and weighin
g
in at 95lb. She has very pale skin and light blonde, almost
white, hair that goes to her shoulders; she has light blue,
almost gray eyes. She normally wears a white strapped dress that
goes to her knees, and when she isn’t at the temple she
wears a white fur shawl (passed down the generations from healer
to healer since the beginning) along with a pair of matching
white boots. The most important item that she wears is her Moon
Crystal necklace.
Characteristic: Selena is calm and determined, she's always
ready to help someone in need. She is adventurous and, unless
she’s working, she willing to make mistakes. She rarely
gets mad and when she does its at herself.
She has never really fought anyone in her life but often spars
with her friend Cerys (she worries about Selena’s safety
and wants her to be ready if she ever does have to fight). When
she is sparing she uses intelligence and strategy to win, not
force. She always fears for others, if in a real fight she would
be the one to take a blow for her friends, the only person who
has ever beat her is Cerys.
History: When Selena was a baby she was given a Moon crystal it
was cut more perfectly then humanly possible, some even say it
was Luna herself who gave it to her while her mother (the healer
at the time) was trying to wake her up from the sleep she was
in. When her mother returned, Selena was awake for the first
time in her life but she was also different, her once brown eyes
had become a light blue that was almost gray, her skin was pale,
and her black hair had become so blonde it was almost white. She
was changed and the tribe knew she was destined for great things
when they saw the small crystal glow in her hands. Later
Selena’s mother put the crystal on a silver chain so
Selena could wear it as a necklace. Selena noticed that water
seemed to react when she was extremely mad or sad, but she had a
pretty normal childhood up until she was 10 years old, that was
when her mother began training her to be the tribes leader and
healer. She began to visit the temple regularly, that’s
where she met and befriended a Water Element named Nixie.
Selena’s mother died when she was 12, Selena then had to
take her mothers place as healer and leader. Since Selena
hadn’t finished learning the ways of healing from her
mother she had to teach herself. She had a little help from
Nixie, who taught her the healing powers of the crystal. She has
now learned all the normal healing methods (most involving herbs
from the temple) and the crystal healing methods, all she has to
learn is how to heal with water.
Side: She does not take sides, but she will protect her people
and her allies.
Weapon(s): none she is a healer, the closest thing she has to a
weapon is Nixie, who would protect Selena at any cost
Magic(s): none yet but she will have water and earth
People
Name: Lunites
Description: They are the people that live on Moon Island and
are friends and allies with the Nimaki people who live on
Korika, often trading with them. The Lunites usually have pale
skin and black hair. Almost all their food comes from fishing in
the bountiful rivers and ocean.
location: Tribal Lands of Moon Island
(It's longer then I thought it would be )
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Falcon Date: July 24, 2010, 9:12 pm
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-[s] Ringring is encircles the earth through north pole and
south pole, so did you mean near the southern side of Ringring?
Then, west or east? <<< need to talk with the mapmaker later
about this. [/s] Let's say this: Wonderland is off the West
coast of RingRing, north of Korika
- [s]Done myself. But that leave me a question. Means that any
non-Wonderlanders will get green mark on their body? It's
sounded stupid, maybe I can guess what is the answer...[/s]
That's right. Anyone who's not a Wonderlander gets a green mark
on their bodies once they step onto the continent and it
disappears once they step off of Wonderland
- [s]Is that for teh magic? Should I edit them myself? xP[/s]
For now, that's it ^^;
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Hartzalcotl Date: July 25, 2010, 3:45 am
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@Falcon: Okay, I have moved the info myself. Then I will wait
for your magic, because that's the only one I can't accept yet.
@coolcat: Moon Island, Tribal Lands, The Temple, Tundra and
Lunesta are accepted.
- About Moon Crystal Necklace, what I got from the description,
I think you can put it in your character's description ( without
the form ). Unless the description is like this:
[quote]A Moon crystal that was given to the Lunites leader. It
has been rumored to be from Luna herself, for it was cut more
perfectly then humanly possible. It is said to contain life
energy that Luna gave to the Lunites leader.[/quote]
Or something like that.
- About Nixie... What I need using the form is the general info
about the monster, in this case, Water Element. Nixie's info
part can be put together with your character's description,
without the form, of course. And...
[quote]their only real treat is being drunk by a person or
animal.[/quote]
I think you mean, threat? *shot for being a vocab nazi*
- About Healing Fountain, I think is more like a place than a
thing. A thing from what I know is something that we can bring,
or move. We can't move a fountain, can we?
- About Heal, what kind of injury or something like that, it can
be used on? External and internal bleeding, diseases, bruises,
bone fractures, mutilation, death ( if this one included, I will
reject it. It's too godlike ), various special conditions ( like
petrification, paralyze, etc ) or anything like those.
- About Lunites, please use People form, from the first post.
Not from Tooth's post. xD
- About Selena, man, I love your character >A<b [s]It's love at
a first sight! *shot several times*[/s] Just put the ones what I
want you to put together int her description and she will be
accepted. And...
[quote]She is adventures and...[/quote]
Do you mean, adventurous? *shot for being another vocab nazi*
That's all for now.
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Falcon Date: July 25, 2010, 10:23 am
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Magic
Spell Name: Absorb
Magic Type: Lightning
Spell Power: Normally small
Description: Absorb/is a spell used when a person absorbs
electricity from various electrical things
Magic
Spell Name: Discharge
Magic Type: Lightning
Spell Power: Can be medium or large. This normally does damage
to use user, however
Description: Discharge is a spell used when a releases stored
electricity from various places on his or her body (ex. arms,
legs, chest, etc.)
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Re: Submissions for the Encyclopedia
By: Hartzalcotl Date: July 25, 2010, 10:36 am
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Haik, accepted and will be moved to Grimoire shortly.
@coolcat: Well, a bit near from what I expected, gehahaha...
Meh, just say that I accepted them, but I will modify them a
bit. Do you or you don't mind? 'coz it's your own idea after
all. You can start posting in the RP and I will tell you what I
modify in my post if you let me.
Edit: Hey, I added Rigas and Rimlus, regions on Ringring.
Nothing on them for now.
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