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Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: evening
Date: August 15, 2013, 10:08 pm
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[center]Alas another one of the romantics was present. But her
love story was not sad nor hopeless. Her love story was already
done! When she had first met Icestar, she thought him to be a
good for nothing full of himself but really really REALLY
handsome blood red eyed albino tom. After they started meeting
more and more, he got warmer and took small baby steps out of
his shell. Soon she knew she was in love.
So she confessed, but Icestar was scared of commitment so he
denied her. She ran away with a quick good bye totally
embarrassed, but he caught up and confessed too, then they made
loved. Now she was pregnant with his kittens! Yay! But no, not
yay. He was a leader, and she was a medic! Also, he was from
Frozenclan and she was from Rainclan!
When she had her kittens, she knew it wasn't going to be easy.
When she got fatter, the other medics would know. She hoped they
would understand and wouldn't rat her out. When Glitterglue had
been pregnant and did not tell anyone, she knew it was
forbidden. So she shut her mouth. She hoped they would do the
same.
When they were born, she would keep half without telling them
and the other would be with Icestar. She was ashamed for
Starclan knew of course, but she couldn't help being struck by
Cupid could she?
Anyways, back to the present. Rain hit her ferociously from
every direction. It was quick and sharp, and she felt pain on
her skin. She winced every time she was hit and as she walked
forward with much effort. With almost closed eyes she worked
hard to keep them open. She spotted Streamflow and put her last
surge of energy before padding over to her.
The Rainclan medic was terribly worried, many cats could drown,
catch a cold and die from these horrible storms. What in the
world was Starclan doing while misfortune was brought to them
like this? We're they abandoning the clan? She hoped not.
But first things first, they needed to find a safe and protected
area, away from the harsh gust of winds and frightening dark
waves that could swallow up a cat in moments. What if their was
this one certain cat who did actually get drowned by the dark
cold water and nobody would care? Nobody at all! Not even their
own family. Including the mother, the father, the sisters, the
brothers.
She wondered that if she was that certain cat who got eaten by
the water, would she be missed? Would cats cry over her? That
was the most scary part of dying. Would Icestar miss her? Or
would he just moved on to another mate? He wouldn't even be able
to see their kittens if she died now. She didn't even have
family though. Of course, she did and they are much closer than
she thinks but she didn't know.
She shuddered at the thought. And she also shuddered because she
was freezing cold. But at least the Rainclanners had thin fur so
they would absorb all the water. She tried to shake as much as
water off her pelt and made sure she didn't shake it close to
any other cat. She quickly and quietly finally made it to
Streamflow. She pressed her pelt against the fellow medics for
warmth to each other.
"Is everyone-cough-alright? Are you alri-cough-alright?" She had
to shout over the wind and rushing currents, and her coughing
wasn't helping. Having had white cough before, she was still
very weak and hoped she didn't catch white cough again.
All the herbs would be gone to waste, they would all be washed
away. So no matter how sick a cat or animal was, they wouldn't
be able to cure them. Being a medic was the hardest job in
Fairytales opinion. Just having to stand there and watch a cat
die, it pained the silver tabbys heart. And even worse, they
were once her clanmate, who she had shared a den with as a
kitten and apprentice and ate together, sharing tongues.
The medic shook her head not wanting to think of those things.
It made her even weaker to think bad thoughts and slight tears
brimmed in her eyes. She thought of Leo, Fallingstar, Pheo,
Glitterglue, all her clanmates who she couldn't find in the
large crowd right now. It worried her. But once again, she shook
her head of bad thoughts and tried to think of happy thoughts.
Okay. Happy happy happy. Aha! Kittens! Little cute kittens who
would be playing and then getting dragged away in the river. No!
Okay happy happy happy. Families! Knowing they love you and care
about you gives you painful thoughts watching them die. No!
Happy happy happy. Friends! They always have your back but will
die without herbs. Oh Starclan this is making me more sad. She
just shut out all her thoughts happy or whatever and just
walked.
( 839 words. Wrote on iPad, so sorry for mistakes )[/center]
#Post#: 20976--------------------------------------------------
Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: puddincat
Date: August 15, 2013, 10:16 pm
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Moments after sitting down with Partystreamers Streamflow heard
her co-medic's question. Stream was fine, but she didn't know
about Fairytale. The poor thing, she looked sick! "I'm okay,"
she called quietly, and walked over to her friend, trying not to
step in too many puddles. It was almost impossible though, with
the insane rain.
The medic attempted to shelter Fairlytale from anymore rain,
though that was probably stupid anyway. "I wish we had some
herbs here," she grumbled. But the stuff she'd been collecting,
if any remained on the island, were just yarrow and poppy seeds,
not really good for Fairy's condition. Plus they'd just be as
soggy mess. So the medic would have to suffer for now.
There was no way she was going to let the storm batter them
without trying to do something about it. Streamflow thought of
ways they could escape or even stop the rain. The river was
blocking them from the rest of the territory, so going to camp
wasn't an option. Even if they managed to knock down one of the
scrawny trees on the island and use it as a bridge it was
probably to flimsy for many of the cats to get across. Also she
wasn't even sure if it would reach that far; the river was
expanding every minute.
Maybe they could all burrow under the river? It was a wild idea,
and Streamflow chuckled to herself at how that could possibly
work. They'd drown for crying out loud! Hmm. Think, Streamflow!
The medic decided to step up and call a meeting of sorts to
discuss how to get out of this. She sure didn't want to sit in
the rain all day. Or night. It was kind of hard to tell how long
they'd been out here.
"All cats marooned on this delta, RainClan or otherwise, come
here! I really don't want to be out here all day and you
probably don't either. Shall we discuss how we're gonna get dry
again? Besides just waiting and catching pneumonia, of course."
She doubted if anyone could even hear her soft voice above the
wind and rain, or see her through the thick grass, but she hoped
at least one or two cats would. She sat in silence and waited
for any response from her friends.
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#Post#: 21022--------------------------------------------------
Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: FancyCat.
Date: August 15, 2013, 10:35 pm
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"Rain dance, Rain dance, la la la la la la!" She she sang while
bouncing in circles, rain pounding on her pelt. This cat, she
didn't care if this turned into a hurricane, she would still be
happy. Her siblings were quiet and lazy, while Party was hyper,
giddy, happy, energetic, the exact opposite. There were many,
many words to describe this she-cat. Also, despite her amazingly
hyper personality, Partystreamers was quite beautiful.
She kept hopping about in the pouring rain. "In the rain, and
I'm just fine, do da! Do da!" She kept singing and singing,
keeping an happy attitude despite the bad weather overhead. She
paused her hopping and singing and shook off her soaking wet
pelt, water flying everywhere. But it did no use, a few seconds
later, Partystreamers was just soaked again. "No matter!
Sometimes being wet is fun! It's like the Earth is giving you a
shower!" She let out a giggle, then started hopping around the
Rainclan camo again. "No wonder this place is called Rainclan!"
She joked as she hopped in wide circles.
This cat, she was widely popular for her giddiness throughout
some clans, some cats didn't really like it. But why? She would
wonder. Why would anyone hate her? She's delightful! But
sometimes can get a little annoying. She had a mate, Tigermarks,
who loved her for her beauty and giddiness, and she loved him
back, always. "I wonder where Tigermarks is? Is he getting wet
too?" She wondered to herself, pausing again. "Should I go back
to him?" She had a nice voice, it was high and a bit low, the
tiniest bit that's not even noticeable of regalness in her
voice.
"I'll dry him off when I go back home!" She giggled and
continued her happy rain hopping, with her occasional singing,
and that's what Partystreamers is like in bad situations. She
finds the fun in it, if there is any.
#Post#: 21033--------------------------------------------------
Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: Raven`
Date: August 15, 2013, 10:45 pm
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Unlike the cats around her, Phoenixpaw was enjoying the storm.
Well, the coolness of it, at least. She didn't like the harsh
winds that threatened to bowl her over or how hard the rain
pelted on her poor ginger fur. But the medic apprentice thought
about nicer things, like Fairytale was trying to do, and made it
feel like the rain was falling slower to her. Although it was
just her imagination taking control, it was calming her and not
turning her into a nervous ball of fur.
The small female sat down near the entrance of a cave, eyes
trained on the medics and other cats in the distance.
Deliriadreams was here as well? That wasn't great, to be honest.
The two weren't on speaking terms, and all because of Sibuna,
the rotten trash that decided to go to far with her adopted big
sister. Yet Phoenixpaw didn't see Deli being sort of jealous
when she heard of the ginger femme and Emptypromises. It was a
type of jealousy, wasn't it? It was probably her, Deli, thinking
that she, Pheo, was ditching her for the tom, which she wasn't.
So what if she was dating Emptypromises? It shouldn't of changed
her relationship with Deli that much. Deli was basically dating
Strangledfox, but barely told Pheo anything. But Pheo told
everything to Deli. If anything, the MA should have been
furious, to be honest. Like, seriously? The daughter of two dead
cats sighed and shook her head. Her and Deli were so close,
though! They were like real sisters! How could the Sibuna sl.t
change so much in so little time?
Phoenixpaw was going to give Deliriadreams a piece of her mind
when she got to speak to her.
Why did life have to be so complicated, though? There were
plenty of times where the female couldv'e taken the easy road
down - she couldv'e avoid relationships entirely. She could've
became invisible completely and not even become medic
apprentice. She would only be known as the annoying kitten that
nobody cares about. That was a somewhat good title for her, if
she laid low for a while. Okay, if she laid low forever. But who
could ever do that?
After a few moments, the female waved her paw in the air to
signal the two medics, blinking furiously. "Hey! Guys!" called
the drenched femme, smiling. although it did bruise her skin
quite a bit, the rain didn't feel painful to her. It was all a
trick to the mind. Either that or she was so numb she couldn't
feel crap if she wanted. "Over here!" she called to them, eyes
narrowing slightly.
For a few moments, she believed that she was speaking to mud
covered rocks. It was an amusing thought, to be honest. She
could've gained enough brain damage from the storm to actually
be talking to mud covered rocks. Or she could've just gone
insane. Either way, she was talking to Fairytale and Streamflow,
or she was talking to a stack a stones... Something was better
than nothing?
No. Not even that little saying was going to cut it. The female
wiped her eyes and focused them at the moving shapes, just
barely seeing their movements. Good, she wasn't going to be that
crazy medic that the kits go to for stories. "I found a cave!"
she called again, rearing onto her hind legs and flailing some
more. "Its better than these rotten trees!" she mewed honestly.
The trees here were horrible.
[ 585<3 ]
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Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: wolfie
Date: August 15, 2013, 10:52 pm
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Deliriadreams stood in the center of the rainstorm, looking down
at her paws and shuffling them. She wasn't big on family this
time around. She flicked her ear in the direction of Phoenixpaw
and flattened her ears afterwards, sighing sadly. So much for
being happy. Maybe she should just cry now, the rain would cover
her. The silver tabby didn't even care that she would most
likely get sick. If she died, maybe it was for the best. The
deputy sighed and looked up at the rain storm, frowning a little
And blinking her eyes. As she looked over at her silky fur, she
saw it was pushed against her body and she looked like a
trembling rat. But she refused to get under cover, she'd rather
stay outside, out of everybody's way. Deli frowned and li down
on the wet ground in the rain, sneezing every once and a while.
She was beginning to feel numb... Was that good? Or was she too
cold to realize that her brain was getting frozen by the second?
Either way, the silver deputy stayed outside.
Short and lazy D:
#Post#: 21086--------------------------------------------------
Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: black rose
Date: August 15, 2013, 11:15 pm
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Speak of the devil.
It was bad enough he was here at all. But what was even worse
was that two cats he liked were here. Oh, and that he was dating
a cat that was close friends to both of them, and she was also
here. He was upset she was here, because this wasn't a nice
place to be, especially with the rain and the raging river which
was impossible to swim through at the moment. Most likely she
was in camp, and that was good. He pushed her out of his mind
and looked around. Immediately he saw Deliriadreams and then
Streamflow and held his breath. No, he didn't want to be here.
He didn't want to be here at all.
Heading over to Pheo, the long-furred brown tabby decided to go
in into the gave she'd found. Then saw Deli. She was going to
get sick if she stayed there. Emptypromises switched direction
to go and sit beside her. He decided he'd tell her now. it
didn't matter, since she was pretty much dating Strangledfox.
Sitting beside her, he didn't move for a bit and just let his
thoughts engulf him. Pushing the thoughts away, he murmured for
just her to hear, "Y'know, I used to have a crush on you until
you started choosing Strangledfox over me. I wanted to tell you
sooner but I know you like him."
Eppy then just stared at the ground, not saying anything else.
It was a terrible time to tell here, but he'd wanted to get it
out of the way. Laying down, he wrapped his tail around her and
pressed against her side to keep her warm. Biting his lip, he
rested his head on his paws and waited for what she would say.
There were lots of things she could say, but he just hoped it
wasn't something mean. Cleaning his brown fur, he twitched his
ears. All he could do was wait now, and wait he would.
Because they were kinda stuck here because there was really
nothing else to do.
[[346 words cause i'm lazy]]
#Post#: 21095--------------------------------------------------
Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: wolfie
Date: August 15, 2013, 11:23 pm
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Deli blinked her eyes open and listened to him speak. 'I liked
you'. She opened her eyes fully and looked at him. "You liked
me?" She furrowed her brow and flattened her ears, looking a
teeny bit sad. Now she felt like a bully, and there's he was,
being nice to her. Ugh. Too nice. She bit her lip and shook her
head. "I-I didn't know..." She shivered and covered her eyes
with her paws, crying slightly. "I'm so, so sorry, Eppy." She
flattened her ears and kept crying, whimpering. She didn't know.
She didn't know. And she felt REALLY bad. The silver cat said in
between sobs, "Empty, if you plan on being more than just
boyfriend/girlfriend with my sister, just so you know, both your
kits will be REALLY cute, and you'll be my brother." She laughed
slightly, but kept crying, pressing closer to Emptypromises. "I
really hope you forgive me. For everything. I was being a total
clueless butt."
Is even lazier.
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Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: black rose
Date: August 16, 2013, 12:15 am
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He nuzzled her. "It's okay Deli. I didn't mean to make you sad.
I just wanted you to stop hating me," Emptypromises said kind of
quietly. His ears pricked up. "I'm not sure what'll happen.
Everyone is upset with it... I know Storypaw and Streamflow are
sad, and I know you were upset with it, and I'm pretty sure a
lot of the others were, especially Lionpaw. I feel so bad about
it..." When she finished, he purred quietly, "Well, I guess you
ARE a butt." His weak attempt at a joke. The tom was horrible at
jokes, and pretty bad at cheering people up.
#Post#: 21220--------------------------------------------------
Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: FancyCat.
Date: August 16, 2013, 12:35 am
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Party paused again and looked around, nobody seemed happy,
everyone was ignoring her happiness. "Hey everyone! It's just a
little rain!" She laughed. She shook off how she was being
ignored a little and kept hopping, pounding through muddy
puddles, which made some parts of her pale grey and white
striped fur have pathces of brown appear on it.
She shook off the mud that wasnt caked onto her fur and kept
going, she then coughed and lost her balance and fell down with
a high-pitched grunt. She got back up, but a other cough escaped
her throat. "I can't hop like this!" She sneezed and sat in the
wetness. Party may be mostly giddy, but she wasnt when she
didn't feel good.
She couldn't see well in the rain and looked around for the
figures of cats. She coughed multiple times and once done, she
tried to look for a dry place. She could never go back to her
camp now, back to Togermarks. At least not now, she's gonna have
to wait until it was dry enough to travel home.
"I hope Tiger's ok..." She sighed before a single cough broke
free from her throat, she curled up, her bushy tail covering her
face, rain pounding on her back and flank, a trembling
Partystreamers has lost her happy for now, and for the first
time ever.... Regretting something.
She regrets that she came here today, it's not safe to go back
home now. "I'll be home soon." She murmured through her tail,
then coughed again.
#Post#: 21343--------------------------------------------------
Re: Private for 500 word post challenge rpers only
DIR By: wolfie
Date: August 16, 2013, 3:30 pm
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Too lazy to reply so bump
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