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a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: Raven` Date: July 18, 2013, 10:11 pm
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[center][size=8pt][color=white]Name:
[s]Phoenixkit[/s] - Phoenixpaw - Phoenixfeather
Age:
She is currently six and a quarter months old.
Gender:
Female.
Clan:
RainClan.
Appearance:
When you first see this young beauty, you could see that she
went through some hardships in her life. The tips of her ginger
fur are black and burnt beyond repair. It matches perfectly with
her somewhat amputated ear, which is cut perfectly to a slant.
Her pads, sadly, are also burnt and are still a bit raw.
Wait, I'm not finished! Don't walk away yet! You don't walk away
when the show just started, do you? I didn't think you did.
Alright, well, lets continue. Deeper into Pheo's fur. Once you
get close enough to her, you can see that her fur is soft and
plush, along with the color of ginger and the pattern of tabby.
Though, her tail and paws break all of that. Her paws are still
a ginger color but don't have the tabby pattern, and are a pale
ginger. Her tail, on the other hand, is completely white. Her
tail does look a bit weird with the singed black fur, but its
how she chose to keep it.
Now, her facial features are what make her out of the ordinary -
unless if you consider a sliced ear and permanently singed fur
in the ordinary. Her eyes are round with a soft orange-brown
color filling the iris - amber, if you will. Her pupil is like
the one's of a snake, slits touching top to bottom. Around her
eyes, nose, the bridge of her nose, and her muzzle is a lighter
ginger. Not as light as her paws, but pretty light. Her face is
the only place her fur is not singed, just to say. Her muzzle
isn't smushed against her face like some cats', but its still a
bit close to her face. Her teeth are like pearls, hence the
words 'pearly whites'.
Personality:
Now, Pheo isn't the nicest cat. She isn't the smartest or the
easiest to get along with either.
Let us start with the bad side of her, so we can end off with a
good note. Phoenixpaw, as stated before, isn't the smartest,
nicest, or easiest to get along with. There's no excuse for any
of that. Other than the fact that no-one is a goody-two-shoes
and she is still learning things as she grows up. She might as
well be dubbed Albert Einstein. Well, the female and kitty
version of Albert... That is, if she does get that smart. Um.
Yeah, let's continue. Another flaw to add to her list is the
fact that shes stubborn and sometimes goes overboard with her
determination.
But determination can also be something great, right? Just think
in debates. Without determination, you would never win! And, if
you haven't noticed, we're on Pheo's good traits, which there
aren't many that are out of ordinary. She is kind, sweet, and
nice when an injured being and/or kit is around, or any other
time needed. She can be a bit smart if she puts her thoughts to
it, but other than that... Nope. That's it.
History:
Phoenixpaw's history... Well, ain't it something? Lets start
from when shes born to now.
Phoenixpaw was born to two loving parents but with the name
Phoenixkit. Sadly, she had no siblings. And because of that, her
parents doted on her ever since she was born. Yet, they were
never around when she actually needed them. Like when she fell
and scraped herself up. Her mom and dad were out at that point,
and she relied on others to help her.
Just a month after she was born, her parents went missing.
Warriors made the young female believe that they died of black
cough when she went to sleep, when they really left her side and
ran away. Either that for they were slaughtered by a badger. It
was never really confirmed on which. Little Phoenixkit then
started to cling to others, dubbing them family. Mostly, it was
cats like Deliriapaw, excitable with a purpose. But any cat that
accepted her was good enough.
Now, skip forward a month or two, and here comes Fallingstar's
training session. The young female never really thought about
herbs, but she didn't really like the idea of physically
fighting. So, she thought it would be better to try out and hope
for the best. Even if she didn't get the part, she would hold
her head high. To her luck, Pheo answered enough questions
correctly and gave a good enough answer for the last one, and
became a medic apprentice!
Though, that's not where her story ends. I mean, it won't end
for a while. But its still the beginning. Pheo, the day after
she was chosen, entered her new den with the intent on learning
something new. What she wanted, though, was for Streamflow to
teach her, because Fairytale was to uptight. It seemed just a
few moments later, though, that Fairytale stopped being uptight
and started being fun... Weird, huh? Anyways, her, Pheo's,
'sister' walked in with a scrape, and Fairytale decided to make
a little quiz out of it, after yelling at everyone.
Pheo thought the quiz was over and attempted to treat
Deliriapaw, though got yelled at by Fairytale. Being young a
wild, Pheo retorted back until she won. Well, it didn't seem
like she won when Fairytale thought it was nice to demote her
for arguing. Phoenixpaw, to this day, still doesn't like the
idea of that. Oh well. On the day she was demoted, the young
female ran out of camp with tears, and listened to cats call her
name and others argue with Fairytale for being 'horrible' and
such.
The small kitten stopped crying when she neared a twoleg place.
It was a small campground with twolegs all over the place.
Though, even when they noticed her, she continued to stay
nearby, due to the fire. It could'ave been because her name
derived from a fire-dwelling creature, or it could'ave been the
fact that it was sparking and shiny. She attempted to bring the
fire home on a stick, but only caused a part of the forest to
catch fire, and permanently burnt a tree and her fur.
The young female grew up after that day, and continued for her
position back. She attended the 'medic for a day' with
Streamflow and Lionkit and the little training with Glitterglue.
She also had secret training with Streamflow, Lionkit,
Silentpaw, and Stygianpaw. Another thing she did was get
approval to be Fallingstar's apprentice if she couldn't fall
back on being a medic apprentice.
Fast forward a month or two, a few days before she became an
apprentice, and Pheo approached Glitterglue to become her
apprentice. Luckily, Glitterglue said yes and promoted her on a
full-blown meeting. What an exciting feeling! Now look at that.
We're where she is now. Shes in her new den, smiling and
laughing with her friends, nursing Fairytale back to health,
growing closer to those she hurt before. Everything she wanted
came true. Now hopefully nothing horrible happens.
Relationships:
Deliriapaw - She refers Deliriapaw as her big sister, and would
shove deathberries down the throat of anyone who hurt her.
Glitterglue - Glitterglue is her mentor, and she considers
Glitterglue like a distant adopted mother.
Literaturepages - Literaturepages and her didn't really get
along, but it was like a big big brother thing.
Owlfeather - She rarely talks to the adviser, but Owlfeather is
like her big big sister.
Fairytale - Fairytale is her frenemy. The two, I don't expect,
will see eye to eye.
Glittercry kittens - She considers all of them little
acquaintances.
Fallingstar - She admires Fallingstar and everything she does.
She, even though shes growing up to be a medic, sometimes dreams
of becoming Phoenixstar with Fallingstar's help.
Emptypaw - Another frenemy. She and Emptypaw don't see eye to
eye either, but both share something in common - Deliriapaw
Lionpaw - Lionpaw secretly has a crush on her, though Phoenixpaw
only notices it as best friends.
Silentpaw - Silentpaw is a good friend of hers, though she
doesn't expect for that friendship to last long since she,
Phoenixpaw, 'stole' Silentpaw's spot.
Stygianpaw - Stygianpaw is a good friend of hers as well, and
she wants to help her buddy become a part of the medic team.
Streamflow - She admires Streamflow just like she admires
Fallingstar. She wants to be like her in the medic department,
excitable and fun.
Lunarpaw - Lunarpaw is a newer friend of Pheo, though she still
considers Luna an acquaintance.
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Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: Raven` Date: July 21, 2013, 8:33 am
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bump~!
#Post#: 14933--------------------------------------------------
Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: puddincat Date: July 26, 2013, 8:20 pm
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Nice bio c:
There're a few errors in there, though.
This one just made me laugh, I'm sorry: "Her teeth are like
pears, hence the words 'pearly whites'"
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Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: Raven` Date: July 26, 2013, 8:40 pm
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i was typing fast okay ;w; xDDD
Anyways, bump c:
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Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: puddincat Date: July 26, 2013, 8:46 pm
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Much better. Only other things I found wrong are a couple of
missing apostrophes.
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Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: Raven` Date: July 26, 2013, 8:52 pm
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I'm not kidding when I say that apostrophes will be the death of
me.
Can you hint on where one or two of them are? Or am I going to
be punished by looking for them all? o3o
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Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: puddincat Date: July 26, 2013, 8:56 pm
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Wait lemme find em...
One in personality, one in history, and in appearance there's
one in the wrong place. {Hint-- cat's is shupposhed to be cats'}
:3
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Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: black rose Date: July 26, 2013, 11:12 pm
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The others are shes that are supposed to be she's.
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Re: a phoenix is born from the ashes { phoenixpaw - done }
By: puddincat Date: July 27, 2013, 11:47 am
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Yup
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