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       ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED]
       By: wolfie Date: July 18, 2013, 1:33 pm
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       [color=forestgreen][sub]Name: Jurisdictionjudge [Jury]
       Age: 18 moons
       Gender: male
       Clan: SerpentClan
       Appearance {{Must be at least four sentences}}: Jury is a
       regular sized cat with big paws. I actually quite like
       describing Jury, because he is SIMPLE. Jurisdictionjudge is
       actually just black with amber eyes. His whiskers are long, and
       his tail is normal length, and then he's got his scarf. His
       scarf is rather large, and so it makes himself look bigger,
       because Jury is always unsatisfied with the way he balances out.
       He wanted to be a muscular Medicine Cat! Obviously, that will
       never happen. Anyway, Jury's scarf is a dark forest green, and
       it trails across the ground; He's learned not to trip over it.
       Personality {{Must be at least four sentences}}: His
       personality? An annoying meanie if you don't know him very well.
       He doesn't very much like anyone he doesn't know, but if you get
       the chance to warm up to him, you get a good friend for life.
       Like Jury and Guilt, for instance. One pair that won't
       [probably] get seperated. [I mean, they're best friends! And..
       fiancées... eve] But if you anger him when he's NOT your
       friend... oh ho ho, you have another thing coming for you.
       Prepare to die early.<3
       History {{Must be at least three sentences}}: Jurisdictionjudge
       was a regular cat in the Clan, grew up to be a warrior. And then
       he found out he was a wimp. Ooooh, yes. Jury was much better at
       plants than battle moves, and I guess that's how it should be.
       Jury the Surgeon. Hm. Anyway, the black tom quite liked hunting
       even after his promotion to Surgeon, but he never had the time
       to hunt. Oh well.
       RELASHONSHIPS:
       Guilt: He's getting married to him. So, first gay couple on the
       site!<3
       Flickeringstar: Neutral.
       Innocence: He sort of treats her like a little sister/big sister
       thing.
       #Post#: 14934--------------------------------------------------
       Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED]
       By: puddincat Date: July 26, 2013, 8:23 pm
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       Pretty good, but there are a few choppy fragments you could
       combine to make a full sentence. Other than that, I like it!
       Also, there's a period missing somewhere. ;3
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       Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED]
       By: wolfie Date: July 26, 2013, 8:42 pm
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       bump<3
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       Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED]
       By: puddincat Date: July 26, 2013, 8:47 pm
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       Better! Appurroved!
       #Post#: 14957--------------------------------------------------
       Re: ORDER IN THE COURT [Jury's bio FINISHED]
       By: wolfie Date: July 26, 2013, 8:49 pm
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       Yayy
       /locking my bio
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