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ohmigod i found my first try at advanced boards on wcrpg in 2011
By: wolfie Date: June 3, 2014, 8:18 pm
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THIS IS HOW I USED TO WRITE. I NEED HELP.
b]Character Name:[/b]Sunsong because,when sye was little,she
only played in the light of the sun. Her mother discribed her as
the sun's song,or kit of the sun.
Character Age:she is 12 moons old.
Gender:She cat :)
Alliance:uhhhh.....thunderclan
Rank:Warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences): pretty slender she cat. She is
a golden tabby. She looks a bit like a tiger,only darker yellow
stripes. She has lominous amber eyes. Her coat is short furred.
Her long whiskers look like rays of light.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own
section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are
additional requirements):she is bright,sunny. She always looks
on the bright side of things. She is always caring towaeds her
clanmates. She is a vicious fighter,and scary when angered. She
is loyal to her clan. She is always there when you need her. You
can trust her with anything.
---Likes (at least 3):The sun,the forest,kits.
--- Dislikes (at least 3):when twolegs arrive,rain,cloudy days
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):strong,fast,agile,excellent
fighter.
---Weaknesses (At least 3):Hard to pounce for her,acts before
thinks,and gets scared of thunder
History (8 or more sentences):She was abandened as an
apprentice. Her clan mates thought of her constantly.
Thunderclan was willung to let Suhsong in. So Sunsong,Sunpaw at
the time,became a warrior of Thunderclan. She earned it.
Thunderclan took pity on her. Out of tha pity,blossomed a
beautiful strong she cat. Thunderclan added a favoured warrior
to their ranks.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Sunsong ran
through the woods. Her pretty face bright as she trailed a
squirrel. Her instincts kept her going,giving her endourance.
Sunsong happily kiled the squirrel thanking starclan for its
life.
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Re: ohmigod i found my first try at advanced boards on wcrpg in
2011
By: wolfie Date: June 3, 2014, 8:20 pm
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SO MUCH HELP.
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Re: ohmigod i found my first try at advanced boards on wcrpg in
2011
By: dawnfire111 Date: June 3, 2014, 9:45 pm
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oh my gosh wolfy xDDD
i love this. i'm...i'm going to cry.
actually, some of the things you worded sounded pretty advanced.
everything else is just...
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Re: ohmigod i found my first try at advanced boards on wcrpg in
2011
By: wolfie Date: June 3, 2014, 10:36 pm
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NO.
/spasms and flails
please don't even go there and don't praise this ;v; it's sooooo
bad
"uhhhhhh thunderclan"
OHMIGOD.
/gasps for breath
/heaves
/dies
/revives
OHMIGOD/
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Re: ohmigod i found my first try at advanced boards on wcrpg in
2011
By: Raven` Date: June 4, 2014, 3:28 am
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my only problem with this is the commas.
ooohhh the commas...
lol<3 its adorable otherwise<3
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Re: ohmigod i found my first try at advanced boards on wcrpg in
2011
By: wolfie Date: June 4, 2014, 6:35 pm
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i crey so hard bby
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