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#Post#: 37082--------------------------------------------------
get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptypromises
dies!]
By: black rose Date: December 9, 2013, 7:18 pm
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Emptypromises had known this was coming for the past few days.
Most people would think it odd, but he was slightly looking
forward to it. When it happened, he would be able to be free of
worries. Then once he felt up to it, he could possess a
different cat and lead a new life. The tom knew that he was
leaving Phoenixfeather alone when she hadn't even had her kits
yet, and he felt terrible about it, but he couldn't stop it.
Streamflow would be heartbroken, because he knew she still had a
crush on him.
He had set out early that morning, heading back to the broken
RainClan camp. It was where he had lived this life, and it was
where he wanted to leave it. It was now noon, and he was laying
in his old nest, nose buried in his paws, waiting. Eppy could
feel himself dying, and he didn't care. One reason he didn't
mind was that now, he remembered so many things about his first
life; his name had been Falloutpaw when he died. His fur what
pure white and he had red eyes; an albino. His fur had been
short, and he had been a shy, quiet cat.
The tom remembered how, when he was Falloutpaw, he had been
close friends with someone named Sinisterpaw, who had actually
been his lover in that life. The cat even remembered what she
looked and acted like. Sinisterpaw had been a red tabby with
bright blue eyes and a white stripe down her back. She had a
bobbed tail and long fur. She was taller than he had been. She
was a sarcastic, fierce, feisty cat and he had loved her for
that. But then he had been killed and become who he was now.
The thing he remembered best about this life was Phoenixfeather.
So many memories had been of her, since she was who he spent
most of his time with. Her and Deliriadreams. The tom knew he
should have treated Pheo better; he felt he had let her down,
and Deli had told him he would. But it was okay, because he knew
he would forget all of this soon. The one thing in both of his
lives that he would never forget was that one cat that had
always seemed to be watching him, looking out for him.
She watched him now, even as he died. Emptypromises forced
himself to remember everything about her. In both lives, her
name had been Guardian. A fitting name for her, as whenever he
was doing something that could get him hurt, killed, or worse,
she had stopped him without him even realizing it. Just that
feeling of someone watching had gotten him anxious when he was
about to do something stupid. Guardian had been a silver, wispy
kind of cat with cloudy gray eyes.
As he felt himself slipping away, he finally saw her for the
first time since he died last time. "Hello again," her eerie
voice sounded. Her mouth didn't move, but he knew it was her.
She touched her nose to his and purred softly, "It's time for
you to go, Lord." He nodded, not knowing why he responded to the
name. He vaguely remembered her calling him the same name last
time he died. So far, he didn't understand why, but maybe he
would later on. I know, Guardian, he thought, just as he finally
died.
#Post#: 37085--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: puddincat Date: December 9, 2013, 8:49 pm
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Ugh, tracking. I had a bigass post then my phone did some weird
shhit and my hard work was deleted p.q
#Post#: 37088--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: black rose Date: December 9, 2013, 8:58 pm
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D8
bump
#Post#: 37092--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: puddincat Date: December 9, 2013, 10:11 pm
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I'll just summarize it xD
Streamflow was collecting moss and she found a lot so she
decided to bring it to the warriors den and replace the moss.
She saw Eppy napping and felt sad because she remembered what he
told her. Then oh my gosh he was actually ded!!1!11 she creyed
and wuz rly sad. She didn't even get 2 say bye. "Luv u," she
whispered quietly, first time evar.
#Post#: 37101--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: Raven` Date: December 10, 2013, 4:56 am
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Pudding...
That was the most beautifulliest thing
I can't even grammar right now
And track cuz I'm still thinking how to bring in Pheo.
#Post#: 37102--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: black rose Date: December 10, 2013, 5:08 am
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wut is dis 'grammer' you speek of??/?//?/?
bump
#Post#: 37103--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: Raven` Date: December 10, 2013, 5:46 pm
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xDDDDD
The young female known as Phoenixfeather was gathering the last
bit of herbs around the territory. She fastened them in a leaf
wrap, which she had slung across her shoulders. She saw this
kind of thing with the twolegs, and finally thought of using it.
She began to pink the last bits of watermint near camp when the
scent of death reached her nose and faint sobbing touched her
ears. A frown fell upon her face and allowed curiousity to show
her the way.
She avoided the debris that no one bothered to clean up and
followed the small little path. First, all she saw was
Streamflow's bluish gray tabby pelt. Worry started to carve
itself into her face as she pulled herself closer. "Stream?" She
asked from about a foxlength away. "Whats wrong?" She asked,
before pulling herself closer. To the point where she saw the
unmoving brown pelt. Pheo blinked and was to scared to take
another step forward, but did so anyways.
The medic stared down at Emptypromises's body, tears threatening
to spill out of her eyes already. She wanted to scream; she
wanted to cry. But now... she just couldn't. Her throat was to
dry to even speak, let alone scream. And the tears that
threatened to spill just stayed back and blurred her vision, as
if blurring her vision would help any more with the sadness that
was creeping on her. Pheo ripped her eyes away from the dead
body, looking up at Streamflow. Finally, she croaked painfully.
"What happened?"
#Post#: 37106--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: Jstar Date: December 10, 2013, 9:41 pm
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The small apprentice shaped body dashed to the scene. The small
she-cat was known as Mazedpaw(Or mazey not sure yet). She stood
by Pheo, and brushed her friend's pelt, whispering slightly, "IM
so sorry.."
#Post#: 37107--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: puddincat Date: December 10, 2013, 11:11 pm
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She turned around to face the other medic, tears in her own eyes
as well. "I--I can't believe he's actually gone," she murmured,
half to herself.
Should she tell her about what he told her or no
#Post#: 37109--------------------------------------------------
Re: get along with the voices inside of my head [open, emptyprom
ises dies!]
By: Raven` Date: December 11, 2013, 3:41 am
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Pheo attempted to wrap her tail around Mazey protectively,
focused on Streamflow. "I don't want to believe it, Stream..." a
few tears leaked from her eyes as she wished and hoped for Eppy
to jump up and yell 'surprise!'
Uhmmm idk honestly
If pheo finds out that eppy was keeping secrets from her
It could make the plot interesting
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