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IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Lil Date: November 11, 2013, 3:35 pm
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[center]jasper was at the tribe of falling flowers's old camp,
sifting through the debris for any survivors. he wasn't part of
the tribe, but he decided it was the least he could do to try
and find anybody stuck under a fallen den or something.
but something - no, somebody was on his mind. her name? breaking
dishes all night.[/center]
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Raven` Date: November 11, 2013, 3:47 pm
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"Jasper?" The silver egyptian mau tipped her tired head to the
side. She had stayed up the night before, planning the
formations for the move. Kits, inside. Warriors, outside.
Apprentices... she didn't even remember. "W-what are you doing-"
she cut off on a yawn, blinking. "-here?" She finally got out
the question.
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Lil Date: November 11, 2013, 4:08 pm
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[center]he whipped around, baring his teeth, before relaxing and
letting out a relieved sigh. he smiled. "jeez, you scared me,
night!" he purred, padding over. "i'm searching for survivors
just in case. it's the least i can do after you all have been so
hospitable."[/center]
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Raven` Date: November 11, 2013, 4:31 pm
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Night gave a small smile. "I'm sorry, then. To scare and bother
you." She dipped her head slowly and brought herself a bit
closer to him. "Found any yet? Or, any cats at all?"
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Lil Date: November 11, 2013, 4:37 pm
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[center]his breath caught in his throat as she stepped closer.
"i-it's fine. and no, i-i think everybody made it out." he
choked out.[/center]
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Raven` Date: November 11, 2013, 4:51 pm
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Night didn't notice his slight hesitation. She smiled a bit
brighter, tail flicking back and forth. "Oh! That's wonderful!"
She purred, before returning back to her reluctantly tired form.
"Its sad to think that this place is gone, isn't it?" She asked,
changing the subject. That was a little quirk Night had when she
was tired - she could never stay on one subject without a good
reason. "Well, assuming you enjoyed your stay here." The
egyptian mau sat down and curled her tail around her paws.
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Lil Date: November 11, 2013, 5:00 pm
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[center]he frowned, worried lines cutting his face. "you should
get some sleep. you don't want to lead your tribe to an unknown
land like that." he said, before staring her in the eye. "you
know, i could guarantee you find a great home." he said slowly.
{ what he means is using his power, which i asked about in a
thread. not sure if you saw it. }[/center]
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Raven` Date: November 11, 2013, 5:08 pm
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( link or quote please? C: powers and stuff are free now. So all
you have to do is post that you are giving so and so a power,
etc )
Night sighed. Sleep actually sounded nice. But not when a whole
Clan is depending on every move you make. "I can't sleep,
Jasper." She mewed before catching his eye. She felt the fur on
the back of her neck raise slowly, giving herself goosebumps.
"Maybe later, when everyone else is. But not now. There's still
to much planning to be done - and I'd hate to say this, but I'd
rather not leave any one, even Spotted Path, in charge of
organizing anything. I... don't want them to worry themselves."
As he continued, she sighed, eyes leaving his and directing
themselves to the ground. "I... I... I hope you're right." She
murmured.
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Lil Date: November 11, 2013, 5:17 pm
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[center][quote author=LIL ❇
link=topic=1600.msg32823#msg32823 date=1381584558]
[center]a very long time ago, sabre-tooth tigers ruled the
world. they were cruel to the domestic cats, the 'lower ones'.
the domestic cats were their slaves.
but then a brown tabby by the name of casper rose up and started
a rebellion. he and his rebellion overthrew the sabre-tooth
king, amadaeus. the domestic cats threw their kind in a pit,
where they would exist until the end of their species.
when casper died, he told his mate, nytrix, that a
gray-and-white cat with deep honey-golden eyes would be born and
be dubbed jasper. he said that the sabre-tooth tigers will try
to rule oveer the world, and jasper will be the savior. he will
have the power to create things with his mind. but will that
power be a gift or a curse in this prophecy?
and now, jasper is born. and the sabre-tooths are still in their
pit, and working to find a way out. will jasper save the clans?
the world?
I UNDERSTAND IF YOU DO NOT WANT THIS PLOT.[/center]
[/quote]
"i know how you feel. but you've gotta rest." he meowed softly,
touching his nose lightly to hers. the gray-and-white male sat
down because lil tried to have muse but it wasn't going so
well.[/center]
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Re: IT'S A HIT-AND-RUN SITUATION && private for raven
By: Raven` Date: November 11, 2013, 5:30 pm
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I ador the plot, Lil. But maybe put restrictions to the power?
Because creating things with your mins is pretty op in itself.
Maybe only small things? Or anything but the thing will
disappear in a certain amount of time ( bigger = less, smaller =
more )?
Just spit ballin' ideas so he doesn't seem op.
And if he does get this power, may I recommend no other powers?
Because having this power in a cat of your possession is a gift
of its own. Adding another power may make it seem like you have
special privileges.
Again, just spit ballin' ideas. I hope I didn't ruin any
thing...
Night felt the goosebumps grow on her arms as he touched her
nose with his. She was suddenly wide awake with surprise, heat
rising to her cheeks. "I'm - I'm good." She squeaked, voice
cracking subtly. The female blinked a few times before calming
herself - this was just a friendly gesture, right? They had no
feelings towards each other, right? She lifted her muzzle and
licked the bridge of his nose before taking a little step back,
widening the space between them.
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