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Kittypet - Selena ~Done!~
DIR By: Jstar
Date: July 13, 2013, 6:58 am
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Name;; Selena
Age;; 20+ moons old
Gender;; She-Cat
Alliance;; Kittypet
Rank;; Queen
Appearance;; {{must be four or more sentences}} Selena is a
ginger cat with greenish-blue eyes. She has brown tabby stripes.
Each stripe connects to a stripe running from her forehead to
her tail tip. Her muzzle, stomach, and under tail is white.
Personality;; {{must be four or more sentences}} Selena is sweet
and kind, and also generous. She is very loyal to her family,
and won't let her family be pushed around. Selena is grateful
for invitations to ShadowClan from her sister, Flipperstar. She
rarely gets mad or ticked off, but when she does she doesn't go
very hard.
History;; {{must be three or more sentences}} Selena was born
with Flipper, her sister. She grew up to become an apprentice.
In her warrior age, Flipper went out into the woods and came
back a week after. She had a few scratched and explained to
Selena about Clan life. Selena refused to go the the Clans.
Flipper then promised her that everything would be fine. Selena
didnt believe her, but she went with her anyway. They stayed a
few moons at ShadowClan. Flipper became Flippershoes, and Selena
stayed Selena, because she knew she wouldn't stay long. She then
went back to Twolegplace. She met a tom loner on the way back,
and when she got to the twolegplace she noticed she was having
kits.
Other;; Selena is the sister of Flipperstar and her son is
Penguindive.
#Post#: 388--------------------------------------------------
Re: Kittypet - Selena ~Done!~
DIR By: Jstar
Date: July 22, 2013, 1:18 pm
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Finished <3
#Post#: 390--------------------------------------------------
Re: Kittypet - Selena ~Done!~
DIR By: Puddincat
Date: July 22, 2013, 1:32 pm
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There're a few misspellings and short sentences you need to
correct. You also use 'she' a lot.
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Re: Kittypet - Selena ~Done!~
DIR By: Jstar
Date: July 22, 2013, 4:43 pm
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Edited. Did I edit what you wanted edited?
#Post#: 393--------------------------------------------------
Re: Kittypet - Selena ~Done!~
DIR By: Puddincat
Date: July 22, 2013, 4:55 pm
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Selena refused to go the the Clans.
This needs to be fixed. xD
Then it's approved.
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