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ShadowClan leader- Flipperstar ~DONE!~
DIR By: Jstar
Date: July 13, 2013, 6:55 am
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Name;; Flipperstar
Age;; 21 Moons
Gender;; She-Cat
Alliance;; ShadowClan
Rank;; Leader
Appearance;; {{must be four or more sentences}}Her pelt is
blackish and her paws are white.. Her breed is a pixie bob. She
has tabby stripes and faded molted white. Her eyes are dark blue
with alot of light green in it. She has a white muzzle, chest,
stomach, and underside of her tail. She has black swirls on her
back.
[b]Personality;; {{must be four or more sentences}}She is oddly
sweet for a ShadowClan cat. Though, she is only loyal to her
Clan and her sister. She sometimes sneaks off to twolegplace to
see her sister. She gets loud and snaps like a twig when she is
annoyed, mad, or irritated.
[b]History;; {{must be three or more sentences}} Flipperstar was
born as a kittypet. She grew up through apprentice-age, and
started hearing about the Clans. When she grew up to
warrior-age, she persuaded her sister Selena to come with her to
one of the Clans. She tried many Clans, they were too soft. She
then fought her and her sister in to ShadowClan. Selena then
found out that she was going to have kits. She begged her sister
to leave back to the twolegplace, and she agreed. Flipper grew
into deputy, then became leader.
Other;; She has all nine lives so far. She is the older sister
of Selena.
#Post#: 221--------------------------------------------------
Re: ShadowClan leader- Flipperstar ~DONE!~
DIR By: Puddincat
Date: July 16, 2013, 1:52 pm
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There's a couple of fragments that need to be corrected before
this can be approved. Bump when you edit this!
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Re: ShadowClan leader- Flipperstar ~DONE!~
DIR By: Jstar
Date: July 16, 2013, 2:25 pm
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What are the mistakes? -.-
#Post#: 225--------------------------------------------------
Re: ShadowClan leader- Flipperstar ~DONE!~
DIR By: Puddincat
Date: July 16, 2013, 3:18 pm
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Blackish gray with white paws.
Sweet for a ShadowClan cat.
Those aren't complete sentences.
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Re: ShadowClan leader- Flipperstar ~DONE!~
DIR By: Jstar
Date: July 16, 2013, 3:38 pm
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Bump
Edited
#Post#: 228--------------------------------------------------
Re: ShadowClan leader- Flipperstar ~DONE!~
DIR By: Puddincat
Date: July 16, 2013, 5:37 pm
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Approved!
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