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       My poem: falling into yellow
       By: andysnipe007 Date: February 21, 2020, 2:00 pm
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       I have fallen into Yellow.
       Honey coloured smiles,
       Sunshine kisses,
       I have stumbled,
       Knees scraped,
       Spilling mustard onto concrete,
       And laughing,
       Golden bells tinkling from our throats,
       As we grip each other
       And laugh,
       And laugh some more
       At the citrine silliness of it all,
       But sometimes I am not yellow,
       I am crimson fire,
       Anger and something else,
       Claret drips from my teeth,
       Biting back something,
       Untameable.
       Or I am a melancholy violet,
       Quietly shrinking,
       Wasting hours in the night staring,
       At lavender and lilac,
       Behind my eyelids
       A field of solitude
       It’s a pity
       I have hay fever.
       Mostly I am yellow though,
       Sinking further into lemon
       And ochre
       But mostly just yellow.
       Sleeping softly in apricot,
       Thinking of blush pink
       And baby blue;
       The shades of you
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       Re: My poem: falling into yellow
       By: ggnore Date: February 21, 2020, 2:01 pm
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       There’s just something about the last two lines. Every once in a
       while you hear a line and you think “this line is incredibly
       special”. Those last two were like that for me, great job! That
       was wonderful.
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