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Natural Selection
By: Jack Date: December 1, 2015, 3:00 pm
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The melancholic moon hangs, guilty in the mourning mist.
The murderous sun rises to execute the closing vapour.
Innocent winds unknowingly disperse the evidence far and wide.
And I awaken from my snow-filled dream to shower under forgiving
rain.
As ignorant to nature's glorious torment as volcanoes are to
life.
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Re: Natural Selection
By: Silver Wind Date: December 2, 2015, 5:15 pm
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Lovely, some beautiful and haunting imagery.
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Re: Natural Selection
By: Jack Date: December 2, 2015, 5:20 pm
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Thank you Silver Wind :)
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Re: Natural Selection
By: misterpoet Date: December 2, 2015, 9:34 pm
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Yes, this is quite surprisingly beautifully well crafted! Grand
job!
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