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Xavier kuro
By: Xavier_kuro Date: July 7, 2013, 3:13 am
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Name: Xavier kuro
Age: 15
Gender: male
Look:[img][/img]
Bio: Xavier is the youngest of one year of two children of Xero
Kuro and akuryou. Making him and his sister the start to
rebuilding the " Nova Star Knights”
Being that he is the youngest he sometimes doesn't act his age
acting as if he's was 5 again. Being that he the child of
akuryou, Xavier is part demon though he doesn't like it, he
denys it to the point of where he trys not to use any of his
demonic powers. He's kind hearted and hates unnecessary violence
and killing but he loves to fight in tournaments and events like
such. He have this strange high level of intelligence for
chemical substances.
Ability: though he doesn't like it he shares his mother's
abilities to travel through peoples dreams (only to get around)
and kill others in their dreams and they die in real life(he
hates this ability the most) shape shifting (he only uses this
sometime). Ki such as blasts, small shield and flight, inhuman
strength thanks to both his mother and fathers family heritage.
And Longevity, high level of intelligence for chemical
substances.
Likes: Junk food, tournaments, making new chemical.
Dislikes: unnecessary violence, killing people who think their
better/higher up then everyone else, people who harm his friends
and loved one
Classes: none yet
Clubs/activities: none yet
Class Rep: Year: n/a
Equipment: he inherited his fathers Bladed Knuckles. Multiple
vials of different type of chemicals.
Stats:2nd year-400
strength-100
speed-50
intelligence-80
Ability Strength energy to use ability-60
stamina-50
martial arts skills-20
equipment skills-40
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: Shinji Date: July 7, 2013, 3:54 am
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ok, picture is not showing.
greater details about the chemical and what they can do.
when it comes down to shape shifting I'm thinking nothing bigger
than you.
and admins 2 strandard warning.
others admin?
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: mitsuki Date: July 7, 2013, 4:31 am
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Here is my list:
Like admin3 said pic not working. Decriptions and specifics for
"chemicals" needs to be provided before I will give a go ahead.
Also energy to use ability and ability strength are 2 seperate
categorys.....your point distribution needs to be redistributed
to reflect this....they may not both be 60 unless 60 is taken
from other stats.
Also your ability list is a extensive, and there are a few I
have issue with. This is a school...you are here to learn and
grow. You capabilities in all skills will need to be limited
until you have trained here.
Dream travel will not allow you further than on the island for
now.
Absolutley NO killing in peoples dreams, you do not have the
abilitiy to kill that way, no questions asked. No harming
people physically in ones dreams either. If this is seen I will
step in.
Shapeshifting is okay...but limited. Nothing larger than
yourself and will be limited by your ability. For example, you
may not shift into a dragon and breath fire. You may not take
on new abilities through the shapeshift.
Ki blasts and shields are fine, but they are not infinate...and
they cannot be inffinately large and will be determined by the
amount of allocated stats. Also the more complex, the more
energy it uses.
Finally elaborate a bit more by what you mean by longevity.
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: mitsuki Date: July 7, 2013, 4:34 am
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You also need to make your classes decision
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: Xavier_kuro Date: July 7, 2013, 1:07 pm
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Ok i was never going to kill anyone in their dream that is why
he hate that ability. Dream travel will only be limited to
places on the island. Longevity is that thanks to his mom being
a demon and his father's family having a long lifespan he to can
a live a pretty long time.
The ability and ability strength thing being two different
things was my fault I copy and pasted wrong. Ill fix that soon
(I'm using a phone to do this)
Never planed to sharpshift in anything larger or nonhuman, most
of the time it turning back into a little five year old when
he's not acting his real age (for comedy mostly) .
I understand about the ki blast and how they work. And last the
pic is not working because I haven't put one up yet again I'm
working a on phone so I have to get to a real comp to put what I
want on.
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: Xavier_kuro Date: July 7, 2013, 1:09 pm
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As for classes I don't know there so I haven't chosen yet
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: mitsuki Date: July 7, 2013, 2:05 pm
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Well the ability to kill in the dreams is going to have to be
taken out. Whether you intended to use it or not, it is too OP
for a student to have. The longevity, and the travel are fine
with the restrictions I had stated.
Okay once that gets fixed I will double check the stats, to make
sure stats are enough for your abilities and such.
Okay that use of shape shifting is fine. My main concern was
more things like turning into a dragon and breathing fire, or
some other supernatural and taking their abilities. This will
not be permitted here. Your powers are to remain what you
stated, nothing more.
I mention the ki restrictions, because i keep track of things,
like in battles. If you go above your current abilities I step
in. For everyone.
pic and classes to come is okay, but you should look into the
classes soon enough.
You still need to give a description of "chemicals" as well
before that will be approved.
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: Xavier_kuro Date: July 7, 2013, 4:57 pm
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Name: Xavier kuro
Age: 15
Gender: male
Look:
Bio: Xavier is the youngest of one year of two children of Xero
Kuro and akuryou. Making him and his sister the start to
rebuilding the " Nova Star Knights”
Being that he is the youngest he sometimes doesn't act his age
acting as if he's was 5 again. Bein that he the child of
akuryou, Xavier is part demon though he doesn't like of at all.
He denys it to the point of where he trys not to use any of his
demonic powers. He's kind hearted and hates unnecessary violence
and killing but he loves to fight in tournaments and events like
such. He have this strange high level of intelligence for
chemical substances.
Ability: though he doesn't like it he shares his mother's
abilities to people,travel through dreams (only to get around),
shape shifting (he only uses this sometime. Ki such as blasts,
small shield and flight, inhuman streath thanks to both his
mother and fathers family heritage. And Longevity. high level
of intelligence for chemical substances.
Likes: Junk food, tournaments, making new chemical this use.
Dislikes: unnecessary violence and killing, people who think
their better/higher up then everyone else, people who harm his
friends and loved one
Classes: none yet
Clubs/activities: none yet
Class Rep: Year: n/a
Equipment: he inherited his Bladed Knuckles. A belt full of
multiple vials of different type of chemicals, and goggles to
protect his eyes from his chemicals.
chemicals- explosive chemicals, contained liquid nitrogen(able
to freeze anything around to size a small bedroom or smaller,
and chemicals capable of causing mild Hallucinogens/illusions.
Stats:2nd year-400
strength-100
speed-50
intelligence-80
Ability-30
Strength energy to use ability-30
stamina-50
martial arts skills-20
equipment skills-40
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: mitsuki Date: July 7, 2013, 6:42 pm
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Alright this looks better. I would suggest that the radius for
a freeze be smaller than the size of a bedroom. For example, if
a Minotaur was charging at you, there would be no way that a
vial of freezing chemicals would be able to freeze it. So that
needs to be smaller, and those with magic abilities in ice or
fire, may not be as susceptible.
As a final note....be aware that in cases of battles with
students or monsters.....be it random or tournament...you need
to be aware of your strength and abilities. Your ability
strength and ability energy needs to be payed attention to.
This is a standard comment I tell everyone, because I want
everything to be fair to everyone. No god modding, or going
above and beyond someones current abilities will be allowed
here.
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Re: Xavier kuro
By: Xavier_kuro Date: July 7, 2013, 10:48 pm
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Any ideas on how big range should be then?
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