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Sune Sakushi
By: Sune Date: June 1, 2013, 7:35 am
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Name: Sune Sakushi
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Look:
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Bio: A mysterious nine-tailed kitsune whose's past is like a
thick mist... Sune's parents, along with the rest of the
villages in her home from the north, has mysteriously
disappeared, where she awoke alone with no memory of how it
happens. Seeking answers to their disappearance and to trains
her powers, she enters Oraion Island in order to pursue her
mysterious goals... Not fond of fighting, she don't normally use
her powers for violence.
Ability: Being a nine-tailed Kitsune, her powers surrounds of
Illusions, shape-shifting, and magics...
• Illusion Manipulation: Using illusions onto others through
their senses. Only able to manipulate 3 of their senses as of
now and last within a certain radius. Will increase over the
times she trains her powers.
• shape-shifting: Transform into other peoples and cannot take
their innate abilities, is vulnerable to what can harm to that
form. A form of Illusions.
• Fox Fires: By using her tails together can make fire. To a
small range, she could breathe out fire. Sune can also make
small 'fox lanterns', by producing small balls of fire to float
around them, and guide their way.
• Seduction: Capable of seducing others into doing what she
would want to do through persuasive... those with high
intelligent can resist it. Likely to work more significantly on
males rather than females. (She prefer males to seduce, though.)
Likes: Sunset, sakura petals, illusions. Tricking others,
sleeping. Boys.
Dislikes: Having her illusions broken, being woken up.
Classes: Magic, Supernatural, elemental studies, world term.,
beast Term.
Clubs/activities: (If have any)
Class Rep:
Year: 2
Equipment: Kitsune Ball, a small white ball.
Stats: 400
strength- 30
speed- 40
intelligence- 120
Ability Strength- 90
energy to use ability- 60
stamina- 60
martial arts skills- 0
equipment skills- 0
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: Shinji Date: June 1, 2013, 11:49 am
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The illusions shall be broke by someone with higher intelligence
than you. Also they will not become reality but you can only
manipulate 3 of the 5 sense.
shape shifting is fine.
I personal say that Possession is a No, but I'm going to leave
that to another admin. Whatever they say is what I'm going with.
that's not Seduction, that's mind control. your Seduction will
be they do as you say until they realize they are being
controlled.
your stats are 300, you have an extra 100. are you going to
left it as unused until a later date?
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: mitsuki Date: June 1, 2013, 12:10 pm
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Alright so here are my concerns:
1) Illusions - I agree with everything Admin 3 says. Those of
near your intelligence also can likely see through the illusions
if they try. Those of higher intelligence can see through them
and I agree they will not become reality but they can manipulate
senses as Admin3 stated. Also they cannot last forever as the
more complex the illusion the bigger the drain. Illusions of
people would be beyond your current abilities, and the illusion
will only last within a certain radius.
2) Shape shifting - it should be a form of illusion and can only
last so long.
3) I agree with possession....shouldn't be allowed. Its beyond
what would be acceptable especially with other students.
4) Fox fire.....can only be fire no lightning. Since you have
other magic you cannot have 2 elements.
5) I agree with admin3 on your "seduction" What you have
written is severe mind control which is not okay. You cannot
alter their reality, but when the are seduced it would be more
like persuasion....they would abide by what you told them to do
if the seduction worked. Those of high intelligence can resist,
also it is significantly more likely to work on men rather than
women.
5) also stats as admin 3 stated.
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: Sune Date: June 1, 2013, 2:39 pm
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Sorry!! Can't believe I messed up her ability so badly last
night...
Thanks for checking on it and for limitations.
I knew most of her abilities wasn't allow but i needed to see
what your opinions on it so i can change it to more suited to
this forum. (since it rather complex)
No possession is understandable.
Gah! Mind control! That not meant to be, my stupid
description... yes persuasive! And I though I put the males
part...
Sorry!! My descriptions aren't great... Fixed! Is there anything
else I missing or need to change?
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: Shinji Date: June 1, 2013, 2:56 pm
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Everything seems to be in order with me. Admin2?
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: mitsuki Date: June 1, 2013, 3:39 pm
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....you are still 20 short on stats.
Understand that your abilities are limited....the shape shifting
won't be easy or last long now. Also Understand that with a low
energy to use the ability so low your abilities will not last
long.
Just as another comment understand with putting so much into
your intelligence and energy strength (Which is appropriate for
this type of character) this will effect your abilities if you
end up in a fight, it will not be easy for you. Know that you
will tire out, and not be able to hit things as hard as others.
If I see this not being followed I will step in.
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: Sune Date: June 1, 2013, 3:53 pm
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Interesting, I thought ability strength and stamina, energies
are magic base for her, let me fix it up a bit then I think.
Either way though I understand.
What the, I thought I calculate the stats... strange...
I understand the limitation.
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: mitsuki Date: June 1, 2013, 3:58 pm
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Ability strength, energy and stamina are for the magic. But if
you end up in a scuffle and someone hits you with something
physical....you are going to take the hit, and it will need to
be treated accordingly. Say someone that was based in physical
strength hit you, and made contact. You would take quite the
hit and need to be cautious of your limits lest they push you
too far. This is what i was talking about. For this type of
character your stats should be focused in Intelligence, ability
strength, energy to use ability and stamina. It just needs to
be understood that with this type of character there is a trade
off. I often used this type of character so i speak from
experience.
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: Sune Date: June 1, 2013, 4:02 pm
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Thanks! That really good to know, yeah that what this type of
character is. Alright I fixed the stats, and Calculate few
times to make sure it added up to 400 ^^;...
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Re: Sune Sakushi
By: mitsuki Date: June 1, 2013, 4:10 pm
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This has my approval now. Just as always know if there is
something that happens that concerns an admin they will step in.
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