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Jin
By: jin kumochi Date: May 28, 2013, 11:50 am
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Name:Jin kumochi
Age:17
Gender:male
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Bio:JIn kumochi Age 17 comes from a gang of misfits Jin has
aways been defferent.one of these things are his are red he left
his gang after hearing about this school he doesn't no much
about his abilites he has a dark past but is trying to leave it
behind him
Ability:zero point(his eyes make things seem like everything
slows down but so far can only happen when he's in danger)
Likes:video games,movie,burgers,girls
Dislikes:birds,hot things,fish
Classes:
Clubs/activities: (If have any)
Class Rep:
Year: 1st
Equipment:stun gloves
Stats: 200
strength-10
speed-40
intelligence-10
Ability Strength-10
energy to use ability10-
stamina-10
martial arts skills-60
equipment skills-50
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Re: Jin
By: admin1 Date: May 28, 2013, 1:13 pm
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i'm liking the character. hopefully his story starts emerge more
later on.
1. the zero point ability is cool but it has to have a flaw like
a time limit, maybe a brief use that allows you to evade kinda
like a counter. until you get your points high enough in it.
other admins?
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Re: Jin
By: Shinji Date: May 28, 2013, 1:37 pm
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hmm... how about a time limit and strain on the body. besides
that I'm ok with it.
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Re: Jin
By: mitsuki Date: May 28, 2013, 2:15 pm
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I compltetly agree with admin1 on all points. SInce you're
points are so low in ability, it can't be used very long, so it
would me more like an evade.
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Re: Jin
By: jin kumochi Date: May 28, 2013, 10:22 pm
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i like that idea Admin1and admin2 im going to use that.and
thanks for the suggestion admin3
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