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Hiru
By: Sei Date: May 5, 2013, 10:25 pm
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Name: Hiru
Age: 16
Gender: Male
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Bio: Born from the strange forest in unknown location where only
plant-like creatures lives, a strange but kind boy enters the
forbidden areas, despite many warnings from the elder trees of
the dangerous poisonous plants, avoided the dangerous plants and
stumbles upon many strange objects not from the forest. Confuse
and curious after few years, he spoke to the elders about the
strange objects and the elders finally revealed that they were
from the outside of the forest where non-plant creatures lives.
Wanting to know more about such life outside of the forest and
its' strange objects, after much convincing, the elders finally
let him go but with a suggestion that he should employ in a
place called Oraion School as a student to improve his survival
chances, and a promise to come back home. With a warning of not
to reveal his home's location in fear of unwanted visitors, the
strange boy has left his home and taken the form of a human boy,
as well as the new name, Hiru.
Ability: A mysterious boy made out of plants has the ability to
use his body as natures itself. Ex: Form his limbs into
leaf-like blades, sent out vines-like tendrils from his body,
grow seeds into various herbs for healing purposes. Become one
with plants and trees (non-poisonous)
Likes: Forest and plants, sun-light, waters, nice and kind
peoples.
Dislikes: Fires, Poisonous.
Classes: Alchemy, Beast Terminology, World Terminology,
Supernatural, Melee Combat.
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:
Year: 1
Equipment: Seeds and plants, acrobatics.
Stats: 200
strength- 25
speed- 25
intelligence- 35
Ability Strength- 25
energy to use ability- 20
stamina- 25
martial arts skills- 45
equipment skills- 0
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Re: Hiru
By: cornell Date: May 5, 2013, 11:39 pm
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hello i am one of the admins on the site. your character is
good, stat points correct and i see no real errors. just
remember that were young which means were not strong as all hell
lol. other than that does any of the other admins have anything
to say
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Re: Hiru
By: mitsuki Date: May 5, 2013, 11:44 pm
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I agree with the other admin. It looks fine, just understand
limitations at your current skill. You will not be able to grow
anything and everything at your current state. "One with
plants" is a bit vague, I have my ideas what that would mean,
but it might be nice for a more thorough description of that.
Just understand if there is something we see that is deemed
inappropriate or beyond your powers we will step in.
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Re: Hiru
By: Sei Date: May 5, 2013, 11:57 pm
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Lol, Right. And I admit it does look vague in the description of
'One with plants'. He can't be one with poisonous plant-life as
well as ancient ones (Other way of saying is he can
'enters/merge/blend' with young trees and plants as well as
non-poisonous types.)
It like umm... blending in or entering into one? I couldn't
really figure out the correct statement honestly for that
particular ability.
Alright, so not able to grow anything at his current state and
being young mean not strong, I understand though. How about
herbs though? Will he able to grow at least the minor sections
of healing herbals from seeds at his current state?
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Re: Hiru
By: mitsuki Date: May 5, 2013, 11:59 pm
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I am fine with you being able to grow minor healing herbs, and
that ability can grow with time. That is fine for the
description of one with plants, and is what i would have
expected, I just wanted to make sure my and your ideas of such a
power were the same, rather than us having totally different
ideas on an particular ability.
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Re: Hiru
By: Sei Date: May 6, 2013, 12:22 am
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Yeah. Um, am I approved?
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Re: Hiru
By: cornell Date: May 6, 2013, 12:35 am
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why yes....yes you are. BE FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
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