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Huojin Gazini
DIR By: Huojin Gazini
Date: May 4, 2013, 7:20 pm
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Name: Huojin Gazini
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Look:
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Bio: Houjin is the prince of flame and death. He was born from a
place far away on an plant not in the actual solar system. He
plant was called "Zelda" and it was field with volcanos. Huojin
seond year of school was go to be on at different planet (his
father ordered) to learn to be more respectful and to act like
a prince, not an "delinquent", plus to use his powers for go and
not to make everyone else suffer. He did bad things however, it
was only to get attention from his father because he never gave
it to him nor ever listen to him. He can be very quiet and wont
say much unless he feels the need to. He can be bipolar at
times. while he was getting ready to go, he town was getting
attacked buy space pirates . He wanted to helpbut he was force
on an space jet and was sent to Oraion High School. He will do
what he has to do here and figure out a way to get back home and
take is place on the Thrown , To Be A Fire God! , and to save
his people from the pirates.
Ability: Fire and Dark Magic
***Dark Magic: Use A Shield To Protect himself or others and can
make people see horible thing
***Fire: Sumon fire demons, burn of skin by look at someone,
Melt any object, Adsorb Other Explosions, lava
Likes: Fire, Dark place, Music, Foods, To Be able to laugh
(hardly)
Dislikes: cold food (besides ice cream or soda), Useless People
or Animals, the Space Pirate.
Classes:(Total of 5)
Clubs/activities: N/A
Class Rep: N/A
Year: 2 years
Equipment: Sword + Martial arts
Tranformation: (what he looks like when using abities)
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Stats: 200
strength- 25
speed- 50
intelligence- 10
Ability Strength- 25
energy to use ability- 50
stamina- 10
martial arts skills- 15
equipment skills- 15
#Post#: 3368--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: mitsuki
Date: May 4, 2013, 7:44 pm
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I have a few concerns:
Your stats are off. If you are 1st year then you have 400 to
play with. First year is 200. So just tell me which year you
are.
Next are the list of issues with the powers. Remember you are
here to learn and your powers will not be perfect and they will
need to grow with time so they are limited to start with.
Dark magic: "Make people see horrible things" The more intense
the vision the more it takes, plus people with stronger magic
and intelligence may be able to break out of a state as such.
Fire magic:
"Summons fire demons" - if you summon them, they may not listen
to you as you are in your early years, an Admin may take over
the control of the demons. If you are summoning the demons the
capacity to use other abilities will be limited.
"Burn the skin of by looking at someone" - I have no problem
with you using fire, but those with fire abilities might not be
affected or if their magic is stronger than yours. It would
make more sense if it was done with touch by now...and maybe
developing into by sight
"Melt any object" - You can't melt "anything" this is absurd.
You can melt things capable of melting but the harder or more
resistant to heat will take more. If something you melt is
beyond the scope of what is acceptable I will step in.
absorbing explosions and lava control are fine, just remember
that you are learning, so these will not be perfect now.
Others:
I dont mind if you like to refer to yourself as a "flame god"
but there will be no becoming a god, or being able to act like
one (powers wise or other). Also being a prince will not give
special treatment.
Other admins how do you weigh in.
#Post#: 3369--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: mitsuki
Date: May 4, 2013, 7:47 pm
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One thing was fixed in my original comment so you know
#Post#: 3370--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: mnew90
Date: May 4, 2013, 7:52 pm
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i think admin 2 meant a second year has 400 and a first year
has 200 lmao
#Post#: 3371--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: mitsuki
Date: May 4, 2013, 7:53 pm
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I did....my brain got away from me.
#Post#: 3373--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: Saito
Date: May 4, 2013, 8:00 pm
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Hmmm..... I agree with admin 2 but you can only control lava
and only meduim-small explosions.
#Post#: 3374--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: Huojin Gazini
Date: May 4, 2013, 8:22 pm
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(its this better and i was just refering myself as an Prince or
"God". Also i understand my power are not going to be as
stronger because i have to learn some of them first and to
control them more. so what else do i need to know before im able
to get started and what else needs to be fixed?.. i change and
couple thing so everyone can have a better understanding)
Name: Huojin Gazini
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Look:
[URL=
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Bio: Houjin is the prince of flame and death. He was born from a
place far away on an plant not in the actual solar system. He
plant was called "Zelda" and it was field with volcanos. Huojin
seond year of school was go to be on at different planet (his
father ordered) to learn to be more respectful and to act like
a prince, not an "delinquent", plus to use his powers for go and
not to make everyone else suffer. He did bad things however, it
was only to get attention from his father because he never gave
it to him nor ever listen to him. He can be very quiet and wont
say much unless he feels the need to. He can be bipolar at
times. while he was getting ready to go, he town was getting
attacked buy space pirates . He wanted to helpbut he was force
on an space jet and was sent to Oraion High School. He will do
what he has to do here and figure out a way to get back home and
take is place on the Thrown , To Be A Fire God! , and to save
his people from the pirates.
Ability: Fire and Dark Magic
***Dark Magic: Use A Shield To Protect himself or others and can
make people see horible thing
***Fire: Sumon fire demons, burn of skin by touching them
(making the fresh fall off and make my enemy bleed to death),
Melting objects (Ice, Metal, Weapons if possible), Adsorb Other
Explosions (bombs/small), Lava (use as an energy sorce)
Likes: Fire, Dark place, Music, Foods, To Be able to laugh
(hardly)
Dislikes: cold food (besides ice cream or soda), Useless People
or Animals, the Space Pirate.
Classes:(Total of 5)
Clubs/activities: N/A
Class Rep: N/A
Year: 2 years
Equipment: Sword + Martial arts
Tranformation: (what he looks like when using abities)
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Stats: 400
strength- 50
speed- 100
intelligence- 50
Ability Strength- 50
energy to use ability- 100
stamina- 50
martial arts skills- 30
equipment skills- 20
#Post#: 3375--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: mitsuki
Date: May 4, 2013, 8:35 pm
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Now your skill points are 50 too high. Also you will be
unlikely to cause an enemy to bleed to death based solely on a
touch unless it is a very minor creature.
Other admins?
#Post#: 3379--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: Saito
Date: May 4, 2013, 8:47 pm
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You will only be able to heat a weapon to a point where the
owner will not be able to touch with 2 degree burns. I'm on the
fence about melting metal, but I. Going to say ok but I will
be watching you.
#Post#: 3381--------------------------------------------------
Re: Huojin Gazini
DIR By: mitsuki
Date: May 4, 2013, 8:51 pm
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I agree with admin 3 on that one, especially with the weapon
melting. There would be nothing fair about melting another PC's
weapon for sure, so that isn't possible.
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