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       #Post#: 2476--------------------------------------------------
       Saito Owaga
       By: Saito Date: April 23, 2013, 1:53 pm
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       Name: Saito owaga
       Age: 15
       Gender: Male
       Look:
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       Bio: Saito was raised by his mother. at an early age he would
       ask about his father who was ever around. his mother always told
       him he was a great men who went to oraion. As he got older he
       start to hate his father, Because his mother start to become
       sick and his father was not their to help. One night his mother
       told him the truth that his father didn't know he was alive. It
       turns out his father has been missing for years before finding
       out she was pregnant with him and his brother who died a few
       days after brith. So with a picture of his father he came to
       Oraion to find him.
       Ability:  control over Ice( shards the size of his fist and the
       drop the temperature of things he touches), fire( fire balls the
       size of his fist and raise the temperature of things),
       summining contracts with creatures he defeated, healing magic.
       Likes: spicy things, books, music.
       Dislikes: sweet things,
       Classes:Elemental Studies,Science Lab/Alchemy,Magic,Tech Class,
       Clubs/activities: (If have any)
       Class Rep:
       Year: (Total of 5 years)
       Equipment:
       Stats: Total 1st year-200
       strength-20
       speed-20
       intelligence-50
       Ability Strength- 40
       energy to use ability-30
       stamina-20
       martial arts skills-20
       equipment skills-0
       #Post#: 2481--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saito Owaga
       By: mitsuki Date: April 23, 2013, 2:35 pm
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       Alright i have issues with a few things.
       First, you stat points aren't right.  you may have 200 you only
       have 160.
       Second of all your abilities aren't clear.  "Magic abilities"
       and "elemental abilities" are not sufficient descriptions.  I
       need specifics, ones that will be acceptable for your year.
       Keep in mind there is no one that may start with more than 2
       elements.  If you take 2 elements you "magic" if they differ
       will need to be limited.  Please elaborate and then the admins
       will tell you if it is acceptable.  Remember this is a school to
       learn, you will not be able to do everything your first year.
       Finally, no pic, thought that's the least of my current
       concerns.
       #Post#: 3376--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saito Owaga
       By: mitsuki Date: May 4, 2013, 8:36 pm
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       Remember only 2 elements....
       #Post#: 3377--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saito Owaga
       By: Saito Date: May 4, 2013, 8:39 pm
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       All right. Done.
       #Post#: 3378--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Saito Owaga
       By: mitsuki Date: May 4, 2013, 8:40 pm
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       Alright remember abilities will be minor in all of these.  IF
       you summon a creature an admin will likely take the control of
       it.  Also your stats are 10 too low.  Other than that i approve
       this
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