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Embriell Nightshear
By: mnew90 Date: March 24, 2013, 4:38 pm
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Age: 18
Gender: Female
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Bio: Emreiell Nightshear or Emmi-chan is a very quiet girl also
very graceful, she spend most of her time sitting in crowded
places peope watching. Emmi is also very fagile and constantly
sick resualting in her having many artificial body parts such
as: arms, legs, eyes, and heart just to name a few though she
made that transition to a cyborge years ago she still has many
organic parts such as her: skin, blood, arteries, and cetral
nerv-system. About a year ago during a fight Emmi had run out of
options and was low on power forcing her to crash land on
Oraion, although in pretty rough shape she managed to repair
some of her systems and poes as a student. Her first year she
didn't talk to or look at anyone making her sort of a social out
cast but she didn't care her plan was to fully repair herself
and get off the island to finish what she started but the last
day she sat down and spoke with a man who convinced her that
making a friend or two would help her state of mind leading to
her staying on the island during the break making friend isn't
going to be easy for her especailly with her technical
personality
Ability: Technomancy, minor telekinetics, levittion, solar power
storage
Likes: candy, smart people, cats, flowers, wearing kimonos, cold
places
Dislikes: bakas, practical jokers, childish people being in the
dark, total silence, heat, crying
Classes:constanly changing to gain more knoledge
Clubs/activities: pending
Class Rep:pending
Year: 2nd
Equipment: katana x2, cat, G.N.V. drive
Stats: Total 1st year-200 / 2nd year-400 (nobody can be higher
than a 2nd year)
strength-50
speed-100
intelligence-100
Ability Strength- out of order
energy to use ability-out of oder
stamina-50
martial arts skills-50
equipment skills-50
Upgrades-
Eenergy
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Grace
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Star light
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Re: Embriell Nightshear
By: mnew90 Date: March 24, 2013, 4:40 pm
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nobody get confused, this is not made by me. the person who made
this character made it and immediately applied it to there sig
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Re: Embriell Nightshear
By: mitsuki Date: March 24, 2013, 5:12 pm
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Okay here are my concerns.
First: the three transformations. You cannot have three
transformations so early on. Maybe through the time here, and
through training you can gain them, but for now you cannot have
access to all three.
Second: You're ability stats have nothing, which means if this
is what you intended, you MAY NOT, use any of your abilities
until those have physical stats. This means no technomancy, no
telekinesis, no abilities until you have stats in that category.
Third: I am okay with your abilities, just remember the energy
to do them, especially with the technomancy, it will require a
lot more energy to do more complected constructs. If you use
this ability in a fight, it will need to be kept track of by an
admin to make sure that it is being used appropriately.
Other than that, your signature needs to be put under a spoiler.
Other admin?
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Re: Embriell Nightshear
By: Diggs Date: March 24, 2013, 5:28 pm
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i agree
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Re: Embriell Nightshear
By: Embriell Nightshear Date: March 24, 2013, 5:33 pm
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i have no objections to that, it oly seems fair
it was actually sort of the plan
and as for the transformations i was only planning to use the
first one the rest require too much enery and using the is what
landed her here in the first place
but there was one ability i forgot to add for when her systems
do get back on lineif you don't mind i'd like to add it before
this gets aprooved
one more thing, how do i get a spoiler and why do they jump
everytime i try to look at it?
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Re: Embriell Nightshear
By: mnew90 Date: March 24, 2013, 5:48 pm
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i put the spoiler on for you
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Re: Embriell Nightshear
By: mitsuki Date: March 24, 2013, 5:54 pm
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Alright, as long as the ground rules i laid down are obided then
that will be fine. I would like to see what that last ability
is before I give it my final okay. Only the first
transformation being accessible for now is fine. Just remember
no stat points in abilities no access to said abilities. And
make sure you're watching once you gain the ability for the
constructs because they will be kept track off for acceptable
energy usage and ability.
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Re: Embriell Nightshear
By: Embriell Nightshear Date: March 24, 2013, 6:43 pm
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you're the boss
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