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Terra Jinzo
By: Terra jinzo Date: March 22, 2013, 3:14 pm
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Name:Terra jinzo
Age: 16
Gender:male
Look:
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[spoiler]Bio:Terra is from a exiled branch of the jinzo clan
they follow Tatsumaki the god of sand and wind Terra is a loner
he would rather laugh at people in pain the make friends unless
they like to laugh at the same thing for some reason people
like him and tend to hang around him anyway
Ability: control over sand that he keeps in a large bottle
Likes:pain,apples,sand
Dislikes:frogs,the cold
Classes:working on it
Clubs/activities: nope
Class Rep:
Year:
Equipment:
Stats:1st year-200
strength-20
speed-10
intelligence-30
Ability Strength-40
energy to use ability-20
stamina-30
martial arts skills-50
equipment skills- [/spoiler]
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Re: Terra Jinzo
By: mitsuki Date: March 22, 2013, 3:31 pm
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First of all you added wrong. You are 10 over the first year
stats, please fix this.
I shall give my vote of approval, just remember that as you
start out your abilities will have limitations, as they will
grow with you.
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Re: Terra Jinzo
By: mnew90 Date: March 22, 2013, 7:44 pm
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i suggest that your techniques start simple with maybe one or
two designed since you're a first year and once that error to
the stats is fixed you have my second
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Re: Terra Jinzo
By: mnew90 Date: March 24, 2013, 1:52 am
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seems its fixed. does the other admin approve
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Re: Terra Jinzo
By: mitsuki Date: March 24, 2013, 1:54 am
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I say yes as well. Just remember our advice.
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