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Naito Surunu
By: Naito Date: March 22, 2013, 9:18 am
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Name: Naito Surunu
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Bio: A young half-vampire, half-demon boy. He has the ability to
transform into different type of demons. He is usually calm with
curiousity but sometime his emotions can changed whenever he
transforms. He was sent to the island by his parents to know
more about the demon and humans' history, their connections and
to trains his Demon transformations. In the beginning he was
only able to transform into Day Demon, but later in years as he
trains, he will acquire his 2nd transformation, Night Demon.
Ability: Minor Healing factor and enhanced senses. Demon
transformations. Day Demon's form: Given the ability to fly and
uses Dark-based Scythe which can also transform into dual
Scythes, enchanced speeds and strength. Can only be used in Day
times and is weak to light element. Have more wills to control
this form than the Night Form.
Night Demon's form: Given the ability to manipule the demonic
blades and claws that surrounded him erupting from the shadows
as his armors protected him, enchanced defense and strength. Can
only be transformed in Night Times and is weak to Light element
as well. Possibly can goes out of control in this form.
After transforming, he will become weaken unless he drink some
bloods to regain his stamia.
Likes: Moon, Blood and Demons.
Dislikes: Weak animals. Annoyances, having his emotions changed
abrupty.
Classes: Transformations, Demonology, Melee Weaponry, Elemental
Studies, World Terminology.
Clubs/activities:
Class Rep:
Year: 1
Equipment: Black Greatsword. Scythe/Dual scythes (Day Demon),
Demonic Blades and Claws (Night demon)
Stats: 200
strength - 30
speed - 30
intelligence - 20
Ability Strength - 25
energy to use ability - 20
stamina - 25
martial arts skills - 0
equipment skills - 50
Look:
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Day Demon
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Night Demon
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Re: Naito Surunu
By: mitsuki Date: March 22, 2013, 2:42 pm
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Alright so you are a first year, this needs to be scaled back.
Having a "few" demon forms is going to be a bit much. It needs
to be scaled back to 1 demon transformation for now. And your
ability to control and stay transformed will scale with your
stats. Over the time you spend at the school, you can train and
possibly get a second in the later years.
Also as for the vampiric abilities, i need to know what you plan
to include in those, because they will need to be approved as
well. Also Immortality will not be approved, it is not a
suitable ability for any student, period.
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Re: Naito Surunu
By: Naito Date: March 22, 2013, 5:56 pm
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Wait, it possible to be 2nd year? And I edited it a little bit
so you can check it again.
Mainly some minor healing factor and enchanced senses. (His main
powers is just demon transformation.) So if it only one, then I
guess it will be the Day demon and will acquire the Night demon
in later years.
No immortality, noted. I changed him to half demon and half
vampire.
Just though that since it not allow to change powers (or add)
once it approved, I just figured I put what Natio would gained
in later years.
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Re: Naito Surunu
By: mitsuki Date: March 22, 2013, 6:23 pm
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I'm all for having a first year start like this, it is possible
to start as a second year but we need 1st years at this point.
Minor healing factors and enhanced senses is fine, i give full
approval of that. The main power being the demon transformation
is fine. Changing it to half demon, half vampire is fine.
I would be fine with you starting with the "day demon" and then
gaining a second form in like year 3. Since it is 5 years of
school, starting to have a second form emerge then makes sense.
The one thing I caution you, is if you start with a day
demon....and your powers are light based there, to be able to
have your second form be of the opposing element would take a
rigorous training plan, and would take much more to master.
That is the nature of elements that oppose. Something that
works beneficially with the first element is much easier to
develop and master. An admin will definitely need to be
involved and kept in the loop if you choose to go opposite to
light.
The not changing your stats/powers is important here. Having
something arbitrarily come up without any approval or checking
with an admin, wont be tolerated. However if you plan to do
something, like develop another transformation after a few years
of school here, that is fine, you just need to work with the
admins to make sure everything goes smoothly. Changing your
powers/stats/ect. will only occur with approval of the admins
and having followed the right procedure.
It will need the approval of another admin as well. Admin 1
want to weigh in with me?
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Re: Naito Surunu
By: Naito Date: March 22, 2013, 6:31 pm
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First year it is then.
As for elements, well, to be honest, I rather have dark element
based only. For both transformation. So let me edit that real
quick.
Yeah I wanted to make sure about that, the organization is
really nice and really helps. Alright I will wait.
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Re: Naito Surunu
By: mitsuki Date: March 22, 2013, 6:41 pm
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Okay now we will just wait for a second admin to weigh in.
Having both be the same elements makes more sense, the dicomity
of elements is a trick thing to play, because it makes you weak
to yourself.
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Re: Naito Surunu
By: Naito Date: March 22, 2013, 6:44 pm
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Alrighty.
#Post#: 227--------------------------------------------------
Re: Naito Surunu
By: mnew90 Date: March 22, 2013, 7:41 pm
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everything seems finely edited and it has my second just make
sure to spoiler your sig because it seems like its going to be
big
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Re: Naito Surunu
By: Naito Date: March 22, 2013, 7:47 pm
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I will. Thanks!
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