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Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: SassyCassie
Date: December 23, 2015, 11:12 pm
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A girl who once sat next to her favorite tree
Was lost in sorrow and didn't want to be.
Every day in school the hours just passed by.
This girl never spoke, nobody knew why.
She got called names like ugly and fat.
But then there she was, by the tree she sat.
Hugging her knees she looked up to the moon
And she hoped that the pain would be over soon.
But one day her depressing and sad lived life
Effected her deeply, on the blade of a knife.
She hid in her bedroom, laying in bed.
"Why won't the pain stop?, she silently said.
She chose the wrong path. She made a mistake.
She looked at her hands as they violently shake.
She said "My hands hurt and they feel so sore. But somehow I
wish the pain would hurt more". She scratched and she bit, she
violently hit. But then there she'd go to the tree where she'd
sit. Her parents were worried, she was getting more quiet. If
she did this stuff, why ever would she hide it?
Months passed by, plenty scars on her skin. People started to
wonder where she had been. She was sitting by the tree singing a
tune. Saying that the pain would never end soon. "I know I'm not
loved, I know my place. I know here on Earth I'm a waste of
space". The girl sat for hours, crying in the rain. She almost
enjoyed slowly dying from pain. Every day she wanted nothing of
it. Until she went insane and she said "I love it".
This girl had already forgotten all love. She decided that she
has had enough. She wrote a note that had said: "You don't
understand, I'm better off dead". She sat under the tree in that
cold, hard rain. She felt she was ready to let go of her pain.
She tied a rope to her favorite tree. Then she silently
whispered "They will not miss me".
Before she died she said her last words. She said "All I wanted
was to fly free with the birds".
She put her head through the loop of the rope
And many years she hung, with broken hope.
(Suicide is never a good idea! Be happy at all costs!)
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: magnusi
Date: December 24, 2015, 6:34 am
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Very nice, however I wonder, why do you always write sad poems.
What about trying some that are happy and rhythmic? :D
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: SassyCassie
Date: December 24, 2015, 8:23 am
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It just does not sound fun. Poems are beautiful. And I find
beauty in sadness, so I write sad poems. Happy poems just sound
so... >,< yuck.
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: magnusi
Date: December 24, 2015, 10:16 am
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--- Quote from: Cassafras link ---
>
> It just does not sound fun. Poems are beautiful. And I find
beauty in sadness, so I write sad poems. Happy poems just sound
so... >,< yuck.
>
--- End Quote ---
Why does something that is funny does not sound fun? Beauty is
related to neither sadness nor happiness, in my opinion. But
liking just one kind is as good :D
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: FluffyBunny7
Date: December 26, 2015, 2:13 am
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Is the rank [Poet] existed this would be great.
#Cassie4Poet
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: TotallyNotAnAlienGirl
Date: December 26, 2015, 3:10 am
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--- Quote from: FluffyBunny7 link ---
>
> Is the rank [Poet] existed this would be great.
>
> #Cassie4Poet
>
--- End Quote ---
Yep
If it existed...
#Cassie4Poet
or if she has something like mentor her name would be
[Poet and Mentor] Cassafras: Hey guys
#Cassie4Poet+Mod
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: magnusi
Date: December 26, 2015, 10:25 am
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--- Quote from: TotallyNotAnAlienGirl link ---
>
> [quote author=FluffyBunny7 link=topic=814.msg3619#msg3619
date=1451117624]
> Is the rank [Poet] existed this would be great.
>
> #Cassie4Poet
>
--- End Quote ---
Yep
If it existed...
#Cassie4Poet
or if she has something like mentor her name would be
[Poet and Mentor] Cassafras: Hey guys
#Cassie4Poet+Mod
[/quote]
I find your lack of nonhashtag lines disturbing
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: SassyCassie
Date: December 26, 2015, 2:38 pm
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Ha! Funny thing a while back I asked if I could get a custom
rank as [Poet]Cassandra
But I can dream...
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: magnusi
Date: December 26, 2015, 3:19 pm
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--- Quote from: Cassafras link ---
>
> Ha! Funny thing a while back I asked if I could get a custom
rank as [Poet]Cassandra
> But I can dream...
>
--- End Quote ---
That's a mistake. If you became exquisite and distinct enough in
a particular thing, you will succeed, but not if you ask for the
"reward"
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Re: Broken Hope(poem)
DIR By: Mark1107
Date: December 27, 2015, 9:19 am
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I like this poem, keep up the good work! ;)
-Snowblind
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