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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: just-a-wanderer Date: December 26, 2014, 4:09 am
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oooookay, so, @lawlya: I know the fic you wanted the song
written for is supposed to be posted later today (I think?) and
I am running super late!! But if you still want the song, I was
finally able to write one! If you don't see this on time or you
don't want to use it, that's fine. [s]I'm late on everything
right now, ugh[/s].
I tried to get some of my inspiration from the songs in Flowers
for Beautiful Days. So, here it is:
A new year is dawning
the wind is chill
but the stars are shining bright
Come, come and join our song,
let us begin this new year together
with hope in our hearts tonight.
This is a time of celebration
to bid the year farewell,
the time has come to close the door
where old memories dwell.
This is a time for memories,
so hold your loved ones close
to remember the journey so far,
and look forward to those to come.
Come, come and join our song,
the winds of time have blown,
another year has gone.
Tonight, we bid you farewell,
and welcome a bright new future.
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Ahiku Date: December 26, 2014, 5:20 am
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Ohhh, this is so nice. *-*
I like your poetry. It's wonderful and a perfect end for our
celebration week. ^^
(Ah, just one little typo: big you farewell.) :D I guess you
mean bid.
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: lawlya Date: December 26, 2014, 5:38 am
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It's so beautiful and perfect and you're on time, don't worry
*w* The fanfic is for the last day of our Holy Celebration Week
and I'm gonna use this asap.
Thank you so much >w<
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: December 26, 2014, 9:21 am
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Ahh what a lovely poem >w<
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: just-a-wanderer Date: December 26, 2014, 2:17 pm
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@lawlya: Thank goodness I wasn't late ^^; I'm so glad you like
it! ^ω^
And it's no problem, I enjoyed writing it
@Ahiku: Thank you!
Ah, and yes, I did mean bid. Ooops. I fixed it. Thanks!
@Vox: Thanks ^^
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Meopat Date: March 2, 2015, 9:37 am
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Oh man, it's been months, buuuut there's a Nezushi poem that I
can't not share.
Technically, it's not formally a Nezushi poem and I take no
credit for it, but everything about it just seems to fit so
perfectly. ;__;
HTML http://allpoetry.com/poem/1751347-Like-a-Moth-to-a-Flame-by-whispersoftly
HTML http://allpoetry.com/poem/1751347-Like-a-Moth-to-a-Flame-by-whispersoftly
also, I am absolutely in love with all the poems that have been
shared thus far. D:
I loved the imagery in Vox's I Am the East Wind and the love
that it screams. [s]would you mind if I reblogged it on
tumblr[/s]
Ahiku's was so beautiful and poetically tragic that I clutched
my heart in pain.
I also really liked "Artist and Illusion," how you can truly see
the artist and his illusion, and how the tone of the sonnet
changes with a simple "But." It really felt like I was being
swept along by Eve's performance and then it ended and I'm back
in my apartment again. *sigh*
I have next to no literary skills for poetry, but it's so clear
that in all the poems each word was chosen with utmost care and
not a single line was wasted. Thank you for sharing these!! ^^
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: March 2, 2015, 12:24 pm
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[member=62]Meopat[/member] thank you for sharing that lovely
poem.
Also, would I -mind- if you reblogged my poem on Tumblr? Would I
MIND? I would love it! Thank you so much <3 ;w;
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: nezushisushi Date: April 6, 2015, 8:11 am
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Just a random thing I wrote for my English villanelle assignment
(I make an effort to incorporate fandom into schoolwork)
Now I’m held captive while you wander free.
Why did you leave me on that fateful day?
Will you remember to return to me?
The dog, the rat, the snake were us three,
But you, the rat, left on your merry way.
Now I’m held captive while you wander free.
Your journey is shrouded with mystery
Nothing I said could convince you to stay
Will you remember to return to me?
Are you somewhere, seeing sights of glory
With irises of captivating grey?
Now I’m held captive while you wander free.
Regrowing my life like a branching tree,
a lingering question plagues me every day:
Will you remember to return to me?
I step away with waning energy,
Desperately willing thoughts of you away
now I’m held captive while you wander free,
Will you remember to return to me?
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: April 6, 2015, 12:21 pm
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Oh dang you better get a good grade on that one because it's
pretty freakin' awesome ;3
And by awesome I mean sort of tragic :'(
Villanelles are really hard to write. I've never done one before
myself, so kudos.
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: nezushisushi Date: April 7, 2015, 8:21 am
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Thank youuuuu~~!!! It was supposed to be tragic, like, starting
from anger, to longing, to resignation.
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