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Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: May 11, 2014, 11:28 pm
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I don't often see poetry in this fandom. In fact, I've seen next
to none. If any of you all have some No. 6-inspired poetry to
share, please do it! I need some inspiration.
For starters *self-promotion time*, here's one I wrote: Read it
on Tumblr
(
HTML http://vox-clamantis-in-deserto.tumblr.com/post/74775585879/i-am-the-east-wind-i-am-the-east-wind-and-you-are)<br
/>or read it on DeviantART
(
HTML http://akumeoi.deviantart.com/art/I-Am-The-East-Wind-No-6-fan-poem-429999190).<br
/>
Hope you all like. ouo
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Ahiku Date: May 12, 2014, 11:18 am
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Hi Vox! ^^
I like your poem, it's really cute. But may I ask why you didn't
continue the rhyme scheme you've used in the first two strophes?
Ah, btw. I also have written a poem for my very first Nezumi x
Shion fanfiction.
Nezumi used to sing it for his audience when he wandered and
needed money. XD
[quote]
A solitary star is twinkling far away,
While wandering beneath the glowing moonlit sky,
An urban silhouette appears in my mind’s eye,
A distant place which isn’t meant for me to stay.
Bright mountains and rivers, wild forests and the sea…
Oh, lovely vagrant life along the beaten paths,
Whereas I am diverging from my foretime’s wraths,
At times I wonder if you’re still awaiting me…
The meandering way’s ablaze with sunset glow,
Wild asters and snowdrops awake longing in me…
Distracted heart; oh why’s my soul in agony?
Recalling the vow we’ve made a long time ago.
[/quote]
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: May 12, 2014, 12:10 pm
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I did continue the rhyme scheme. Sort of. Patience/embrace. I
initially had the "so" at the end of the embrace line because I
felt it had a rhythm that way, but looking at it again, I guess
I prefer to make the rhyme more obvious. Changed that. thanks =)
It was initially supposed to be a sonnet anyway, but then I
remembered my structured poetry skills are pretty mediocre and
couldn't stretch it to a final couplet. Oh well.
Ahhhhh, yours sounds so literary. I aspire to write like that
^^;;;
Plus it sounds in character? Always hard to do. Emotional poetry
from someone else's perspective is just hard. :I
"Cynthia" sky? Is that a reference to something?
Same with the snowdrops. Ugh, I absolutely love symbolism. I
don't know if you looked at the Tumblr or the DA version of my
poem, but the DA one basically explains all the symbols I put
into mine... although I'd say they're fairly obvious, really. X3
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: lawlya Date: May 13, 2014, 12:39 pm
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They're wonderful - both are really wonderful ...
Would it be okay to post links to poems that reminded me of No.6
too? Then I would have one
HTML http://po3ms.tumblr.com/post/66867602104/nightmares-are-dreams-too.
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: May 13, 2014, 1:02 pm
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@lawlya ahhh nooo your link is broken! :(
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Ahiku Date: May 13, 2014, 3:15 pm
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[member=16]Vox[/member]: You're welcome. ^^ It's good that it's
more obvious now. Do you want to write more poems?
Ah... cynthia is a poet. word for moon. At least when I'm
allowed to believe in this translation homepage:
Leo.org - Moon
HTML http://dict.leo.org/#/search=cynthia&searchLoc=0&resultOrder=basic&multiwordShowSingle=on
But I'm not sure... o.o Maybe there's one of our native English
speakers who could confirm if it's really ok to use this word
like that. ^^° I just thought it would sound nice to use it in a
poem.
EDIT: Sorry... I didn't know that you are a native speaker... I
also though you're from France concerning one of your other
posts. o.o So maybe the website is just wrong then.
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: May 13, 2014, 3:59 pm
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@Ahiku I've solved the mystery of Cynthia... that's another name
for the goddess Dianna/Artemis, the moon huntress. I didn't know
that because I prefer the original Greek names. So I think you
didn't really use it right? ^^; But at least we learned
something...
Yes, of course I want to write more poems. I've been trying to
work on another sonnet for months now, and it's absolutely not
cooperating XD I think I have to give up and try something else.
My usual style is free-verse, which I should probably stick too,
because I feel like it'd work better...
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Ahiku Date: May 13, 2014, 4:10 pm
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Ohhh, that's good to know. o.o Thank you.
I found another solution now. ^^ I guess this should work now
and I hope there aren't other mistakes in it. (>,<)
Oh yeah, when you're not able to go on, just try something else.
Sometimes it's easier to start something new. Maybe you'll be
able to finish that uncooperative one when you had a little
break and when you were able to write another poem successfully.
Good luck. ^^
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: lawlya Date: May 17, 2014, 10:56 am
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God, I don't get updates so here's the link
HTML http://lawlya.tumblr.com/post/66907870182
where I reblogged it
xD Sorry for the late reply >.>
[s]I didn't know she deleted her account ... What a shame D:[/s]
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Re: Nezushi poetry
By: Vox Date: June 1, 2014, 8:28 am
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Well, it's been a while since anyone's commented on here, but if
anyone is still reading this thread, I'm about to break all of
your hearts.
HTML http://elanra.tumblr.com/post/87488609942/romantic-whether-he-likes-it-or-not<br
/> <-- this post on Tumblr made me think of a poem that would fi
t
the situation described in the little comic-strip thingy
perfectly. Here:
HTML http://overlycreativewriting.wikispaces.com/Even+as+I+Hold+You
If you imagine that the eye colour is described as grey or red
or even as Safu brown... it fits them all pretty well, don't you
think?
This is one of my favourite poems of all time. And it's so
freaking tragic.
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