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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: Vox Date: March 22, 2015, 6:34 pm
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[quote]It's either anatomical accurate, vulgar or an overused
euphemism xD[/quote]
[member=7]lawlya[/member] that is EXACTLY what I was trying to
say, just in a less long-winded way, so thank you XD
[member=21]AoYokai[/member] I'm not trying to say that there are
NO good ways to say things. It's just, they're very limited.
Maybe we should compare notes and see which inappropriate terms
we all like XD
[quote]Also for me writing smut, specifically NezuShi smut
(because all my other writing has been on hold for a couple
years), I don't find the terms to be too difficult... Like, it's
a little bit of a challenge, but if I'm writing a sex scene at
all, it's for a very specific purpose, and it's usually focusing
on what's happening as a result of that. How do I put that into
better words... It's focused on the emotions of the scene, not
the mechanics of everything.[/quote]
[member=18]Weisel[/member] Yeah, see, that's the thing. For me,
what's going on in real time and the emotions are both really
important pieces of the puzzle. Okay, the actual sex thing (for
normal m/m Nezushi, the part where a d*ck goes somewhere and
then ejaculation happens) is not important. But all the foreplay
is really important, because it's super emotionally charged. If
you look at the smut scene I most recently wrote in Fateswap
Beyond, you'll see that it's like 75% foreplay and Nezumi
internal monologue, and only 25% actual sex. (And they never
took their boxers off either because Shion would've freaked the
f*ck out lol)
But in my ideal world, I would have words at my disposal that I
could use to make the actual act of sex feel the same way it
does in real life, instead of relying on everything that comes
before and after to make up for the weakness of the writing of
the actual act.
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: AoYokai Date: March 22, 2015, 6:38 pm
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The winner in the contest of the term I hate the most for d*ck
is noodle so far >< I don't have ones I like particularly...
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: Vox Date: March 22, 2015, 6:39 pm
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[member=21]AoYokai[/member] you're seriously telling me that one
time you read a smut fic where someone used the word "noodle"
for "dick" and they weren't joking or trolling?
(Wait, is dick not actually censored... is that because it's a
name or because i put it in quotes?)
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: Weisel Date: March 22, 2015, 6:41 pm
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NOODLE. NOOOOOOOODLE.
[sub](that's all my brain is doing right now. just repeating the
word "noodle.")[/sub]
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: AoYokai Date: March 22, 2015, 6:43 pm
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Not only dick because it was a NezuShi fic (I know, I'd expect
this behavior from the DMMd fandom, too) they at some point
called his dick a mouse.
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: Weisel Date: March 22, 2015, 6:49 pm
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HTML https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/be/e5/d5/bee5d561ac8104def641f60d09ea5fde.jpg
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: AoYokai Date: March 22, 2015, 6:50 pm
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OH NO
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: Vox Date: March 22, 2015, 6:54 pm
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Some smut authors need professional help. Like, seriously.
And Weisel, that image is spot on. XD
Okay, let's see what the worst word for dick I ever heard was...
I can't remember... maybe I should go through my old chat logs,
I used to make fun of bad smut with my friends XD
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: AoYokai Date: March 22, 2015, 6:57 pm
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So there's member, cock, dick, penis...
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Re: Smut-writing discussion
By: lawlya Date: March 22, 2015, 7:10 pm
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I somehow prefer cock the over dick; mainly because it has a
nicer sound and I mentally read aloud when reading anything
non-science.
But the worst ... can't really think of anything. Probably
deleted it from my memory xD But I don't like member because of
the "overused euphemism"-problem ^^" Though I don't dislike it
that much either xD
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