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The Apocalypse
By: Ryanrider Date: January 18, 2013, 1:53 pm
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I silently drifted into my warm bed, it felt as though it had
been covered with radiation all day, I couldn't help myslef but
silently drift away.
My alarm was frantically riging hyper fast as if it had been
tampered with! I constantly smashed the off button but after
increasing desperation it wouldn't stop! I heard ferocious roars
of crashing thunder and heavy storms from my window. The sky was
pure red, storm clouds were green!?! What was happening!?
My entire house was shaking below me, it felt like it was about
to dramatically collaspe to peices, this was terrifing! The
floor was cracking, I was falling to my doom when......(gasp) I
awoke from my sleep to discover it was all. Dream but...my(
alarm started ringing! Was it a dream?..
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Re: The Apoclipse
By: Ryanrider Date: January 18, 2013, 1:54 pm
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When's my re apply time, I forgot :/
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Re: The Apoclipse
By: bob123f Date: January 18, 2013, 1:54 pm
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I'm not a recruiter, but this is a nice story.
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Re: The Apoclipse
By: bob123f Date: January 18, 2013, 1:55 pm
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[quote author=The spartan link=topic=356.msg4035#msg4035
date=1358538860]
When's my re apply time, I forgot :/
[/quote] I don't know, let's just say Jan. 18th. (Today)
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Re: The Apoclipse
By: daflowergirl Date: January 18, 2013, 1:55 pm
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I like the story!! ;)
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Re: The Apoclipse
By: Ryanrider Date: January 18, 2013, 1:58 pm
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Lol I wish bob XD if I get acepted I could be a recruiter 0-o
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Re: The Apoclipse
By: blackmustangs075 Date: January 18, 2013, 11:54 pm
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That's what the denied tracker is for. Go to Reviewer
Applications, click on Denied Tracker.
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Re: The Apoclipse
By: blackmustangs075 Date: January 19, 2013, 12:01 am
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By the way, if you want some early feedback, you need to be more
descriptive. What do you mean by "It was covered with radiation
all day?" Was it hot? Was it toxic? You also said "The Floor was
cracking, I was falling to my doom!" There was nothing that
connected that. You just said the floor was cracking, you never
actually said that it broke. And remember to explain your
surroundings very well. I looked out my large window and was set
into an utter shock when I witnessed a pure, radiant red sky
filled with dark-green storm clouds. (You cannot copy that).
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Re: The Apocalypse
By: daflowergirl Date: February 1, 2013, 12:39 pm
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I can go again today.
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Re: The Apocalypse
By: Ryanrider Date: February 1, 2013, 12:42 pm
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Next Friday for me
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