DIR Return Create A Forum - Home
---------------------------------------------------------
mrd Graphics
HTML https://mrdgames.createaforum.com
---------------------------------------------------------
*****************************************************
DIR Return to: Writing Applications
*****************************************************
#Post#: 3414--------------------------------------------------
moonlit hour [Denied]
DIR By: whtever
Date: January 13, 2013, 4:45 am
---------------------------------------------------------
I couldn't sleep. A brilliant moonbeam was slanting through a
gap in the curtains. It was shining right on to my pillow. My
parents in our house had been asleep for hours. I closed my eyes
and lay quite still. I tried very hard to doze off. It was no
good. The moonbeam was like a silver blade slicing through the
room on to my face. The house was absolutely silent. No voices
came up from downstairs. There were no footsteps on the floor
above either. The window behind the curtain was wide open, but
nobody was walking on the pavement outside. No cars went by on
the street. Not the tiniest sound could be heard anywhere. I had
never known such a silence.
#Post#: 3437--------------------------------------------------
Re: moonlit hour [application]
DIR By: teamsatisfaction
Date: January 13, 2013, 1:32 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
It's not bad, but I am not a recruiter.
#Post#: 3440--------------------------------------------------
Re: moonlit hour [application]
DIR By: bob123f
Date: January 13, 2013, 1:34 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
--- Quote from: teamsatisfaction link ---
>
> It's not bad, but I am not a recruiter.
>
--- End Quote ---
Nor am I.
#Post#: 3488--------------------------------------------------
Re: moonlit hour [application]
DIR By: teamsatisfaction
Date: January 14, 2013, 8:34 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
You could contact one of the recruiters (BM075, Michaelrd,
Supercool08) to look at the application, but idk if you're
supposed to ask recruiters to look at it.
#Post#: 3522--------------------------------------------------
Re: moonlit hour [application]
DIR By: supercool08
Date: January 15, 2013, 9:51 pm
---------------------------------------------------------
Denied. I agree with Teamsatisfaction on this one, it wasn't
bad. However, from what I read you failed to provide a solution
to your problem. You are improving and I do hope you will try
back in 2 weeks. You are very close to becoming a writer. =)
*****************************************************
Page 1 of 1