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       A ghost time [Denied]
       By: whtever Date: December 21, 2012, 5:03 am
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       Once upon a time there was a little 6 year old child in his
       snuggly red bed.He was shattered after watching his favrioute
       movie,which was ghost busters.He closed his aching blue eyes and
       before he knew it,he was fast asleep.He woke to the sound of
       footsteps,coming from the attic!He peared over at his blue alarm
       clock wearily.it said 01:54.He couldn't belive it a new day.The
       footsteps wouldn't stop but Charlie(that was the six year olds
       name)was really scared.But then he thought and said to himself
       im not a chicken,I will go and investigate.So he grabbed a red
       blanket and a black torch and a ladder.He tied the blanket
       around his neck to make a red cape.He got the torch to see and
       the ladder was to get into the attic.He had goose bumps,he was
       truley scared.But finally after 10 minutes he had the courage to
       climb the ladder into the attic.He barley had the wait to pull
       him self into the attic as the ladder was to small,but he
       managed it anyway.he turnt on the light suddenly the footsteps
       stopped!He creeped around.It was so creepy,but right then his
       torch went out.He was alone in the dark.Or was he alone?Then he
       witnessed a real ghost!The ghost couldn't harm him but Charlie
       was still frightend.He screamed as loud as his mouth would let
       him scream.His mum and dad came running instantly.The ghost
       disapeared and Charlie told his mum and dad and because he was
       so scared,he slept in his mum and dad's bed.THE END by whtever
       :)
       #Post#: 2824--------------------------------------------------
       Re: A ghost time
       By: blackmustangs075 Date: December 29, 2012, 10:17 am
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       Accepted in being denied. That means denied. (Credit to spidapig
       on the MS.) There are supposed to be spaces after punctuation
       before you begin a new word. It just looks like a giant mix of
       words. You may reapply on 1/12/13
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