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Banded Against A Dragon [approved]
By: supercool08 Date: November 24, 2012, 7:35 pm
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This was part of a continue the story topic that I made on
Sploder.
The two stood there, wind was now blowing through the
bar due to the dragon growing twenty feet and smashing half the
building. They waited, and then the dragon struck. He blew red
hot flames at them which Brandon avoided easily, but David, due
to his eye patch, moved too late and was seared on the right
side of his arm. He clasped it, blood sticking to his hand.
Brandon would to have to distract the dragon before he could
finish off David. Brandon leaped onto the nearest broken piece
of wood that had fallen from the ceiling. He continued to run up
it, then once he was in position, jumped at the dragon. He
pulled the triggers back on his poison-guns and muttered one
silent word, "Boom." He pulled the triggers hammering the dragon
with a spray of toxic bullets. The dragon's scales deflected
most of them, but a few got in between scales. The dragon roared
in anger sending up yet another spray of flames. Brandon landed
near David, and rushed over to help him. As Brandon was lifting
David's right arm around his, the dragon returned his gaze on
them. The beast opened its large mouth and you could hear a
humming sound coming from within. Brandon tried to move David as
fast as he could, but the Dragon had fully charged his Dragon
Laser. The dragon reared his head back once more, and then
slammed it down firing a long red beam out of his mouth. Brandon
braced for impact, but David, still lying on the ground, whipped
out his electro-sword and very roughly, began deflecting the red
laser, slowly pushing him and Brandon back as the sword clashed
with the laser. David pushed with all his might and knowing that
he couldn’t hold the laser back much longer. The Dragon grew
impatient and swung his huge, red tail at David, knocking him
against the wall causing him to drop his weapon. David was
however, now out of the dragon’s vision, which really irritated
the dragon so he began to search for him, so that he could
finish him off with an Inferno Bomb. The dragon finally found
poor David and started to build up his Inferno Bomb when,
suddenly, his vision vanished. While the dragon had been
searching for David, Brandon had snuck up on him and shot a
spray of his poison bullets into both the dragon’s eyes. The
dragon, in panic, frantically stomped the ground in hopes to
squash the two heroes. David regained consciousness just
avoiding the dragon’s foot which would have surely crushed him.
David found his sword and with a sudden burst of speed that he
never knew he had in him, leaped onto the dragon’s belly, sword
in mouth, climbing upward, until he reached the dragon’s heart
plunging his sword into it, sending ten thousand volts of
electricity through the dragon’s body. The dragon fell to the
ground, cold as stone and David and Brandon celebrated their
victory.
#Post#: 103--------------------------------------------------
Re: Banded Against A Dragon [Application]
By: michaelrd Date: November 24, 2012, 7:46 pm
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One word for you... ACCEPTED!!! This is amazing! I'm sure that
anyone would agree with me. I'll give you the rank in just a
moment. I'll post here when you get the rank.
#Post#: 104--------------------------------------------------
Re: Banded Against A Dragon [Application]
By: michaelrd Date: November 24, 2012, 7:50 pm
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I've added you as a writer.
#Post#: 106--------------------------------------------------
Re: Banded Against A Dragon [Application]
By: supercool08 Date: November 24, 2012, 8:14 pm
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Hey thanks, I appreciate it. My teachers always thought that I
was a really good writer and I didn't have really any other
short stories that were actually short to enter, so thanks I
really appreciate it! Glad to be one of the writers! ;D :)
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Re: Banded Against A Dragon [Application]
By: michaelrd Date: November 24, 2012, 8:17 pm
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Now you can write stories without length limit under Writers
Avenue!
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Re: Banded Against A Dragon [Application]
By: supercool08 Date: November 24, 2012, 8:20 pm
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Fantastic! Maybe I can try some new material I've been wanting
to get people's opinions on. ;D :)
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Re: Banded Against A Dragon [approved]
By: ~Epic~ Date: November 26, 2012, 6:46 pm
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Wow... you've really got a talent! If I was reading this and I
didn't know who wrote it, I would think a pro wrote this.
Amazing! :D
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Re: Banded Against A Dragon [approved]
By: blackmustangs075 Date: December 15, 2012, 2:53 pm
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I have to say, you really have talent. Amazing work on the
story! You deserve to be a writer! ;D
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Re: Banded Against A Dragon [approved]
By: supercool08 Date: December 15, 2012, 9:42 pm
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[quote author=~Epic~ link=topic=20.msg349#msg349
date=1353977193]
Wow... you've really got a talent! If I was reading this and I
didn't know who wrote it, I would think a pro wrote this.
Amazing! :D
[/quote][quote author=blackmustangs075
link=topic=20.msg1930#msg1930 date=1355604810]
I have to say, you really have talent. Amazing work on the
story! You deserve to be a writer! ;D
[/quote]
Thanks guys! :)
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Re: Banded Against A Dragon [approved]
By: whtever Date: December 30, 2012, 2:48 pm
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W-O-W!
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