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Steampunk Pony fanfic (WIP)
By: Void Date: February 18, 2012, 6:19 pm
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Hello everyone, this is my first time writing anything that has
to do with something of MLP. I only write Vocaloid and Warrior
Cats, so bear with me!
*a title is needed for this story, so please help me!
CHARACTERS:
Brainiac: Light blue unicorn (mare) with a green and deep purple
mane and tail, crooked glasses and a brown jacket. Green eyes
Her cutie mark is a question mark surronded by three music
notes. Brainiac is a thinker, but enjoys music more
Eliza: Crimson pegasus (mare) with lightish red and dark purple
mane, goggles with reinforced lenses to be glasses and a brown
jacket. Green eyes. Half of her back leg is made of metal and is
forced with gears sometimes. Her wings are sheathed by golden
metal. Her cutie mark is a quil feather to write or draw with.
Eliza is currently waiting to qualif to drive a train or a
airship.
Wild Strawberry: Pink unicorn (mare) with red mane and tail. Has
a big white fluffy bow. Blue eyes. Her cutie mark is a wild
strawberry. She currently works by the train station to Skymont,
selling her cakes and fruit
*if wanted, I can add your OC pony
<>PROLUDGE<>
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"Eliza, where are you?!" A stallion's voice called out. A
filly's head popped out from behind a box. In her mouth was a
dusty old map.
"Eliza, you know that you can't be back here. The clouds break
out of the back room, you could fall."
The pegasus scrambled out of the way of the box and she bounced
over to the stallion.
"Look what I found!" she said happily, but it was partly muffled
by the map.
The crimson-brown pony reached down and pulled it out of her
mouth, putting it on the ground and carefully unraveling it to
reveal a careful painted picture of a floating rock. Waterfalls
barreled down it, and some of the rock crumbled to make a cliff.
It was truely a wondeful sight.
The stallion smiled. "You can have it. Your grandpapony drew it,
no one knew why."
Eliza jumped. "Yay!"
*~~~Ten Years
Later~~~*
Chapter
One
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A crimson mare layed on a bed, her metal leg moving back and
forth as she jotted down notes with her quil in her mouth.
"I-I kan't bbeweave a q-uil is my k-cutie mark..." she grumbled,
trying not to swallow any feathers.
Her room was filled with not that much stuff. A large window was
right over next to her bed, which was at the back of the room,
pressed against the wall. She had a bookcase stacked with books
and art, along with sevreal pieces of artwork nailed onto her
wall.
In the next room, her bathroom, her tub was powered by gears.
Generating enough heat and friction could heat up the water kept
in a tank. Of course, the water was replaced.
Gears and steam powered everything in her village. She lived in
Equestria, but the clouds were her true home. Skymont. She
enjoyed flying, but prefered to do it without her wings. Eliza
had more stregnth in her front legs.
Eliza had been trying to jott down her application for becoming
a young balloon flyer.
Usually only pegasi lived in Skymont, but ballon flyers helped
then come up. Three head unicorns would grant the earth ponies
(Or unicorns) the abitily to walk on clouds. Then, a flyer would
take them up to Skymont.
Sadly, her friends didn't take the same intersts as her. You
would think that she had pegasus friends, but she had unicorn
friends. Brainaic, a true thinker, and Wild Strawberry, a baker.
Brainaic wasn't very much of a pony to exercise, and she
preferred to play her music or study. Wild Strawberry was born
into a very poor family, not like most of her kind, but she
still made a small living by farming and cooking.
She sat up with a sigh. "It will take me one year to learn
everything, but I won't back down.'' She had a habit of doing
something, but not finishing it. It was a horrible habit, and
Eliza was looking to getting rid of it.
((Currently writing this part))
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Re: Steampunk Pony fanfic (WIP)
By: nymexst Date: March 1, 2012, 12:24 am
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i'd say it's a really good start
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