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The story Loa will ride me.
By: Crackhead Johny Date: May 12, 2017, 12:51 am
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The story Loa has been attacking me every night for the last
week.
I can't sleep.
This time it demands 1st person perspective and I do not like
that. 3rd person you get to tell the tale. 1st person you have
to live the tale and this story if how humanity dies.
I like when I get many characters and they ride me around.
I was going to get rocked and watch the Stein's Gate movie
tomorrow night. Now if I drink a 1.75.. I will write.
So Voodoo: do you let the Lao ride you even if you have other
plans*?
*keep in mind this might let you final;y get some sleep.
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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
By: Orchid Date: May 13, 2017, 3:36 am
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What's this story you are working on?
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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
By: Crackhead Johny Date: May 14, 2017, 4:04 am
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It seems like post apocalyptic alien invasion crap. Maybe 15
pages.
The Loa says it will be great. I have a real book to work on, I
do not need this.
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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
By: Orchid Date: May 14, 2017, 6:28 pm
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Well I hope it works out. If you ever want to share a story I'm
sure we would like to help.
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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
By: Crackhead Johny Date: May 14, 2017, 11:45 pm
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Yeah.. I may have to get it out of my system.
Last story was about Johnny Johnny BK. The baby killer.
Tthe Loa has not let that one go over ~18 months so I may have
to write that one also. A baby killer as the good guy..
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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
By: Orchid Date: May 15, 2017, 1:57 am
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That sounds interesting. I'm not sure if you ever shared any
details before so I'm a little lost
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Re: The story Loa will ride me.
By: Lumaria Date: May 22, 2017, 7:35 pm
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[quote author=Crackhead Johny link=topic=138.msg1714#msg1714
date=1494568282]
The story Loa has been attacking me every night for the last
week.
I can't sleep.
This time it demands 1st person perspective and I do not like
that. 3rd person you get to tell the tale. 1st person you have
to live the tale and this story if how humanity dies.
I like when I get many characters and they ride me around.
I was going to get rocked and watch the Stein's Gate movie
tomorrow night. Now if I drink a 1.75.. I will write.
So Voodoo: do you let the Lao ride you even if you have other
plans*?
*keep in mind this might let you final;y get some sleep.
[/quote]
Well I try not to worry about which perspective I prefer but
which one the story needs. If the story demands 1st person than
you can try it out. Does it involve multiple moan characters?
I'm not sure what kind of story you are writing so I'm not much
help
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