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       #Post#: 158893--------------------------------------------------
       Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Maxiee
       Date: March 31, 2012, 7:53 pm
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       [Like I said, don't kill me if this is horrid xD and I'm sorry
       it took so damn long -.-]
       The village had always been hidden, only a lucky few able to
       find their way to it. It was hidden by large forest,
       coincidentally at the edge of a small town. Not many people
       ventured into the forest, and those who traveled deep enough
       would always first hear the sound of water. If they followed it,
       they would start to see flowers and plants that shouldn't have
       been able to grow in the area, and then they usually kept
       walking until they saw the stone-made path. It led to what could
       be described as a large town, or a small city, but with less
       people running about. There's a large water fall, opening into
       tiny little fresh-water streams. It was a very green place,
       flowers growing all over the place and only a few buildings
       creatively made of stone and brick, none of them small. One of
       the building had a sign clearly labeled "Inn", the biggest of
       the buildings, three stories high and wide enough that it could
       fit more than a few people. The other, smaller buildings were by
       each other, one was a convenient store, the other was a clothing
       store, and the last was a store for weapons and such, but it was
       closed down for lack of need. The inside of the inn seemed
       wooden, many plants and vines growing off the walls. the walls
       covered with wood, along with the floors. Though the stairs were
       made of stone. There were only few "Human-like" beings there,
       and not one could be called human.
       #Post#: 160373--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Kayis
       Date: April 2, 2012, 4:09 pm
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       It had not been too long since the tragedy of the Tyret Home
       land. The scars ran deep in his barely covered body. Still It
       was for the moment a perfect moment of peace. Kota found that he
       was stumbling upon a little area; perhaps a village even. The
       Bright blue and purple eyes seemed to reflect the nice sunlight
       that shined over head and his feet though bare carried him
       toward this little place. He still appeared fairly young. He was
       tall and seemed to be very slim looking with little muscle
       except for what was left over after his most recent training
       period. The boy wore torn clothes that could only be seen as a
       soldiers uniform out of the Tyret family. No armor just the
       uniform really, and he had only a simple little gladius at his
       hip.
       It was not long before Kota found that he was in the hustle and
       bustle of the small little village. His eyes forced himself to
       adjust quickly and note everyone around him within only a few
       seconds of his paranoid minds perception. he often found that he
       dazed off and thought of things, things that rarely made sense
       to him. However these images only forced him away from reality
       of his loneliness. For that he was surely grateful. Then he came
       across a little hub where people were gathering. Over all it was
       peaceful and there was a tall blond man that was playing a Piano
       for the people of the hub. Everyone seemed to listen with a
       fiery tension and get lost in every single beautiful note. Kota
       had never been too fond of music and what not but he actually
       enjoyed this so he took a seat and waited shutting his eyes to
       wait and see what might happen. His white hair covered his
       vision in shade but still his eyes never left that Blond haired
       man.
       #Post#: 160432--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Maxiee
       Date: April 2, 2012, 5:06 pm
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       Rayne was a small girl, only around four foot eight, maybe nine,
       inches tall. She was skinny, but not as skinny as the taller
       females around, who looked almost like walking twigs. Which was
       surprising, seeing how much they ate. The girl giggled a bit at
       the thought, moving around with trays and menus made of paper
       stuck on wood, green vines wrapping themselves around it,
       responding to the young summer fairy's touch by moving in odd
       patterns. That had been cool at first, and sometimes, it still
       made the girl giggle a bit. She made her way to the tables she
       needed to go to, every step seeming like a dance step to the
       music the man was playing on the Piano, setting down the tray
       almost seemed as if she were bowing, and then she resumed making
       her way to the new customer, menu in hand.
       She slowly blew up at her hair, a small gust of summer wind
       moving the red bangs out of her eyes, and the rest of the black
       strands rested naturally at her shoulders while she smiled to
       herself. As she kept walking, she looked at everyone's face, all
       seeming to show interest in Morg's music. The music came a
       naturally to Morgan, the pianist, as naturally as dancing and
       singing came to Rayne. Of course, that's why she got along so
       well with him. She gave him an approving look, quickly making
       her way to the new male, stopping beside his table. She bent
       over a bit, only enough that she were level with his ear, and
       whispered as not to distract the rest of the people. "Are you
       here for the show...or would you like food and rooming too?"
       After whispering it, she stood straight up. Her somewhat
       childish, playful nature made her unafraid to get so close to
       strangers, and that showed in her bright, golden-brown eyes. She
       stood up straight, trying for a taller look, the black slacks
       and white T-shirt doing nothing to make her seem taller because
       they were at least a size too big still.
       #Post#: 160448--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Kayis
       Date: April 2, 2012, 5:26 pm
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       Kota had adjusted nicely to the scenery just listening to the
       music seemed to help that a lot. Still he was only watching the
       people; not really interacting. He hadn't been so lively ever
       since it all went down. He had literally watched Kayis... that
       white haired man destroy everything he loved. Anna had
       disappeared and his Sister and just everything gone within
       instants after those damned Abyssals attacked. Kota chose to
       push the thought away just in time for him to notice a really
       short girl running about taking orders and serving people. Was
       she the waitress of this place he wondered? In fact she was in
       the weirdest way very cute and quite pretty; but his thoughts
       betrayed his mind as Anna seemed to pop up again.
       He only had enough time to get that thought cleared again before
       the cute girl was leaning over him. At first he was startled and
       seemed to slightly jump. However he voice was so sincere and
       sweet he couldn't help but find comfort int he very presence of
       this stranger. Even if it were her job she just had a way to
       getting to people; though he wasn't the only one that had
       noticed surely. finally regaining more of his composure he spoke
       in a fairly developed baritone voice. "Well honestly I am just
       here, but umm do you have cheese fries?" he asked turning to
       meet her eyes for the first time. His face became white as a
       ghost as he looked upon those beautiful orange gold irises. He
       was almost speechless; thank god it was her turn to speak.
       he had always enjoyed cheese fries even when His mother had
       taken him out to eat for the first time long ago. His dear
       Mother Essenias, yet another person his father had hurt, that
       White haired bastard with the piercing golden eyes. Kota the Son
       of a Demi Goddess and The Mighty Lord Asader. two immortals. But
       for now he let that subject slip from his mind determined to
       remain calm. "Sorry if I stared You just have really pretty eyes
       miss so I was somewhat caught by them I guess." he shrugged and
       forced a smile peering up at her. " Umm do you guys do shows
       like this often, and how much is it for room and board?" he
       asked calmly. He really had very little money but this place was
       so peaceful he almost figured it might be a good idea to stay
       and collect himself for a little while training in the mean
       while. Maybe even he could protect them, or maybe they didn't
       need protecting. He didn't know but something was telling him to
       stay a bit longer before passing through.
       #Post#: 160457--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Maxiee
       Date: April 2, 2012, 5:58 pm
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       She watched him jump a bit, unable to keep in the slight giggle,
       but the smile that followed it was polite and apologetic. She
       waiting for him to speak with a small smile. Her eyes seemed to
       sparkle as she once again giggled at him, only this time at his
       words, answering in her happy, gentle voice "Yes, and I bet
       they'll be the best you've ever tasted." She smiled, more than
       sure of it. Lil, the cook, was not only an amazing cook, but
       that woman had spices made of stuff no one else could contain.
       She literally put seasons into the food, and lucky enough,
       cheese fries were one of the things summer was used to spice.
       She smiled and held eye contact with him, taking the look as one
       of disbelief. She smiled, excitedly, but quietly, adding "Don't
       doubt me, if I didn't think it were true, I wouldn't be able to
       say it. She uses the best spices, and my spice helps with them
       so it'll just leave you speechless!"
       She smiled, holding eye contact without feeling the least bit
       embarrassed after she was done speaking, now understanding that
       he was staring at her for some reason she wouldn't even attempt
       to guess at. She held the smile, waiting for him to respond,
       when he apologized. And she giggled once more, covering her
       mouth, smiling widely at him once the fit of giggles was over.
       She was in no way laughing at him, she just found the apology
       funny. " Oh no, no, don't apologize for that. Thank you for
       taking interest in them, everyone here is so used to them." She
       smiled. "Your the first new comer we've had for a while."
       At his next question, she raised a brow. "We always have a show,
       sometimes its just Morgan up there, sometimes I go up and sing a
       bit, and the others do some things to. We have to keep busy,
       people stay for the shows and talents we have here, when new
       people come. We do throw really special ones once people leave
       the inn though. We like leaving a nice impression, that way they
       might come back." She shrugged a bit, smiling widely at his last
       question. "Oh, you don't pay anything. We run completely off
       ourselves here-why would we need any money? No one who would
       want it has found us yet." She turned to look around real quick.
       "I'll be right back, I'm going to go get those fries for you and
       then I can answer any questions you've got." She said, smiling
       politely, then hurrying away, only to return with his fries
       moments later with a large smile. She set them down and looked
       at him. "Go on and try them, tell me how you like them, and then
       I'll answer any question you've got." She said, eagerly waiting
       to see his response to the food.
       #Post#: 160478--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Kayis
       Date: April 2, 2012, 6:51 pm
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       He was actually pretty happy to hear that they had such shows
       and stuff. The meaning of it all made a lot of sense, but this
       girls carefree attitude kind of left him thrown for a loop. Had
       he ever been this way or had his whole life just pushed him to
       be more and more dreary? boring even. He sighed slightly after
       she seemed to wander off to get the food. He really hoped the
       fries were good but he really didn't have doubts. Then she
       returned with a bowl and the skinny fries had cheese all over
       them. It looked so good considering he hadn't eaten in nearly
       three days at this point, his stomach was destroying him. So
       when she gave him that order he didn't hesitate; and quickly
       forgot the concept of manners.
       His hands were all stick with cheese and he devoured the food
       quickly. then looked up at her a bit red from the way he had
       done so. " well that wasn't very gentlemanly of me was it?" he
       asked trying to pass it off as a joke as he nervously stroked
       the back of his long crazy white hair. "I think I plan to stay
       in this town for awhile, Iv been traveling for a couple weeks
       now and this place suits me fairly well, do you have any
       training facilities here or places where someone might train in
       combat?" he asked calmly and precisely as he looked directly at
       her and refused to look away even for a second. " I think I will
       have to come and see some more shows and spend some more time
       here, also I feel ashamed. " he offered his hand to her " I am
       Kota." he refused to say his last name as it was something he
       despised and refused to carry it but it was good to get to know
       people so this was his attempt to try and get to know someone on
       a friendlier level.
       #Post#: 160494--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Maxiee
       Date: April 2, 2012, 7:19 pm
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       She had only waited a moment before he started quickly shoving
       food in his mouth. She sat down across from him, watching him
       curiously. It probably wasn't the prettiest thing to watch, but
       it was...interesting, and she took it as a sign of him liking
       the food. She watched, not quite sure whether to giggle, or feel
       bad about watching the male eat. She had never seen anyone eat
       like that, everyone here making sure that everyone ate with
       manors. Though, now that she took a good look at him, she took a
       wild guess to say he hadn't ate in a while, and she'd never been
       starved before. She wouldn't judge him on it either way-maybe he
       jut really loved cheese fries, but she was pretty sure the other
       reason was more likely. She watched as he finished eating,
       holding out a napkin for his messy hands.
       She smiled a bit, realizing he was a bit red in the face-had it
       been that embarrassing? She hoped not, but the thought was lost
       as he joked, and she couldn't help but giggle. She once again
       looked him over, and had the slightest urge to brush, and then
       play with his hair. She stared a moment, blushed at the thought,
       and then looked back to him as he began talking again. The blush
       started to fade, and a smile took it place as he said he was
       staying, then the smile faded a bit as he said he'd been
       traveling for a couple of weeks. Weeks!, She thought, staring
       him down a bit, Weeks, and he may not have ate, or drank, or
       bathed, and does he have a change of clothes? Her sudden worry
       for another person's heath kicked in, but she met his eyes and
       listened.
       The last thing he needed at the moment was combat training, but
       she smiled at the thought of him seeing exactly who that
       instructor was, and the worry vanished for a moment. "Oh, I know
       someone who wouldn't mind it." She smiled, a playful sparkle in
       her eyes, then reached out and took his hand in hers to give a
       quick shake. "Its nice to meet you, Kota. I'm Rayne." She said,
       not mentioning a last name because, like most there, she simply
       didn't have one. Then, as soon as she let go of his hand, she
       stood back up, and motioned for him to do the same. "We should
       get you a room now, or...that might take a little longer than I
       want. I'll show you to my room and we'll have you take a bath,
       or shower, while I run and get you some new clothes. Oh-if
       that's okay with you?" Her eyes widened as she asked the last
       part, feeling pushy, but the need to get him clean and better
       clothed was there itching at her.
       #Post#: 161106--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Kayis
       Date: April 3, 2012, 3:01 pm
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       He hadn't really noticed how long it had been since he had eaten
       until that moment really. or how long it had been since he had
       bathed for that matter really. However she reminded him of these
       things. " well shit I must be really dirty huh?" he shrugged
       slightly and got up from the seat then to be at level with her.
       In truth he never could be; she was extremely short and he was
       actually quite tall. The rags he wore on his body seemed to hang
       off and even some of these nice people were forced to stare as
       parts of his butt cheek showed and his chest. Though one odd
       point about his chest was that he had a large Tribal cross
       tattoo that spread right between his pectorals. He seemed a bit
       young for that really but who was to judge?
       The woman was so friendly. She actually intended to allow him to
       shower at her home until he had one of his own. Maybe he just
       stank to high heaven but he couldn't help but think that she was
       just that nice. Really he had a hard time getting used to people
       ever since everything happened. He had lost all of his family
       and was wandering even before he found his dying Mother.Then
       Magnus had appeared and taken him. it was hard but he had become
       very skilled int he way he moved and trained; his only regret
       being not allowed to fight for the Kingdom he called home and
       watching it fall to ruin. "If you are fine with it then so am I
       really." he smiled at her beaming those brilliant blue eyes that
       seemed to almost glow in the absolute sunlight. Then he would
       follow her; taking note of all the things they passed in the
       village.
       + Super boring post Gommen v.v +
       #Post#: 161109--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Maxiee
       Date: April 3, 2012, 3:20 pm
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       She hadn't answered his first comment, just smiled a bit at it.
       She couldn't really tell, she wasn't really looking at how clean
       he was, though Lil would have thrown a fit about him being there
       if she saw. Rayne smiled a bit bigger at the thought of her
       flipping, and just nodded to Kota, lightly taking hold of his
       arm as she led him towards her house. She pointed out the
       stores, and other homes as she went, pointing out that the
       waterfall was allowed to be swam in as long as you weren't nude,
       and giggling a bit. She got to her home, made of a stone-looking
       material and vines, and opened the door.
       Inside wasn't much different from the inn, wooden, lots of
       plants, though the ceiling was made of two-way mirror, so the
       outside was viewable. She led him to the bathroom, not at all
       being intimidated by his height, or worrying that he would hit
       his head on something-the house was built tall enough that you
       had to be at least eight foot to reach the ceiling, which was a
       pain if she wanted something on one of the very top
       shelves...but that's why they had ladders. She looked up at his
       face, smiling a bit. "Strip, shower, brush your hair..whatever.
       The towels are right in the cabinet by the toilet, and you can
       use whatever you find in here." She smiled a bit and started
       walking out, before pausing in the doorway. "Are you still
       hungry? I'll make some sandwiches..and I'll run and get some
       more cheese fries." She smiled, not waiting for him to answer,
       and closed the door. "I'll be back with it all done before you
       get out. And I'll get you some new clothes!" Then she ran out,
       grabbing a basket to put everything in.
       #Post#: 161117--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Jack & Rayne
   DIR By: Kayis
       Date: April 3, 2012, 3:55 pm
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       Still she had that childish excitement about her, and before he
       could even tell her he was ok for the moment she had dashed off
       guaranteeing that everything should be done before he was ready.
       He just shook his head with a little grain and rubbed at his
       temples. "oi oi wonder what I got myself into here." he didn't
       think much more on the subject before he let the rags slide off
       of his body onto the well polished floor. He didn't have really
       broad shoulders or anything but he was really thing. Accent of a
       six pack showing in his abdomen region and he had fairly defined
       pectorals. His arms weren't to tough but they had a nice little
       muscle strain same as his legs that actually weren't all that
       hairy either. He looked once in the mirror before shaking his
       head in disgust for unknown reasons and turning the handle to
       activate the shower and elevate the warmth level.
       The water felt amazing running down his body as the Long strands
       of white hair fell over his face and covered his vision. He just
       stood there for a bit letting the water fall over him and
       looking down though vacant;y as possible. The vision of his
       sister Charm appeared along with Alivia. However all of those
       things seemed to fade rather quickly. Then there was Essenias,
       and Tyran, and His older Sister Ivorie. They all seemed to
       beckon towards him with open palms as if calling him to them,
       for his mother to hold him and his sister to hug him close. Then
       that too faded and all that was left were those piercing golden
       eyes. The absolute grim smile of that Man, the same man that had
       appeared every single time things had been taken from him. He
       looked just like him if not for eyes color and muscle build or
       the things they wore. However as that faded Kota forced himself
       not to punch a hole on the shower, and instead he chose to
       finish up.
       This boy had suffered so much tragedy and lost everything he
       ever cared for. One thing he was of course certain of however. "
       that man.. will die.." He growled the final words to himself
       before placing the soaps and shampoo back upon the shelf and
       turning off the water. He stood there for a bit looking at
       himself with dripping hair in the mirror.  " too weak." the
       words somewhat slipped out but he payed them no mind. Of course
       this kind woman would return soon and he needed to be on better
       behavior. So he wrapped the red towel around him trying his best
       to tie it off. Then he exited the bathroom of course after
       brushing his teeth and drying his hair to look around the place.
       In all he was actually impressed he liked it, but it was
       probably the last he would see of this place since he was
       getting his own room soon.
       In some ways it was truly disappointing, sense it was really
       kinda nice here; but he couldn't complain getting a free room
       and board. Now it was just a waiting game to see when she would
       return. So thats what he did he waited and stood against the
       wall with the towel wrapped around his body.
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