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The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
DIR By: guest1367
Date: July 23, 2017, 1:19 am
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The following Chapters will be written according to the
Original Creator of Oah, the Centaurii and Amazon Angelus Rianna
Zahn using her Notes and Manuscripts. I have completed finding
each segment and will add her stories here, The first through
Ten chapters in order to complete her novel.
Thank you.
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Re: The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
DIR By: guest1367
Date: July 23, 2017, 1:31 am
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--- Quote from: Thanastasia Amadeus link ---
>
> The following Chapters will be written according to the
Original Creator Rianna Zahn using her Notes and Manuscripts. I
have completed finding each segment and will add her stories
here, The first through Ten chapters in order to complete her
novel.
> Thank you.
>
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Re: The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
DIR By: guest1367
Date: July 23, 2017, 7:32 pm
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Chapter 1 the Family
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Ascendant daytime, a beautiful morning. Tsu-Jinn Valley, west of
Tsu-Jinn city just below Mount Zahadume. The Valley is wide open
and nearly flat and surrounded by mountain peaks. The modest
white house so named ZahnHome is where our story begins...
The two Oahn suns Zah and Ahn were shining bright, one setting
slowly, the other rising. A set of brilliant blue eyes casts a
gaze on the morning, Rianna Zahn slowly rises from her bed
staring first at her and her sisters room. She awoke to the dawn
out of habit and curiously looks about now almost fully awake.
She giggles watching her sisters sleep hovering as always. She's
fascinated by Athena, her older sister as she never really turns
in her hover sleep. She crawls steadily to the end of her bed as
her Twin sister Thana and her other triplet Julianna hover low,
meaning they'd wake soon. She had little and precious time to
watch Athena. While she gazes, her minds eye recalls the image
of her other sisters sleeping, they turn in their sleep, arms up
or out, their legs flutter slightly giving rise to the notion
that they're dreaming of walking. Dianna moves too But Atty, as
she calls her elder sister, sleeps differently. She's almost
still. Rianna scratches her head and her knuckles brush up
against soft skin and fluttering hair. She looks up to see
Dianna staring down smiling as she hovers over Rianna.
"Oh Riri, are you watching her again?"
Thana, having landed stretches her arms and answers for her
sister,
"Of course. We both think the same thing, why don't you? Our
sister has learned a whole bunch at school an' maybe because of
that she doesn't move. I think it's really nice."
Dianna tilts her head facing Thana
"I didn't even hear you land. Did you sleep ok sweetheart?"
Thana and Riri look at one another and close their eyes speaking
together
"Yes."
Julianna, still hovering moves her foot down aiming her toe at
Thana's forehead and giggles slightly pushing her head back only
slightly,
"Shhh, it's not our business how Atty sleeps."
Thana reaches out and grabs her foot tickling Dianna forcing her
to lose focus and drop on top of Rianna. Riri squeals and laughs
out loud immediately followed by Dianna grabbing her mouth and
Thana rushing up to the foot of the bed watching intently as
Athena slumbers. Dianna reaches over and slaps Thana on her
shoulder, she whispers slightly scolding and laughing
simultaneously. Julianna caresses Thana's arm and the two join
their sisters at the foot of the bed, A wonderful sight,
"Oh my Goddess that was close! Don't tickle me when I'm hovering
over someone!"
Rianna with her sisters hands over her mouth nibbles at her
fingers and Dianna brushes her fingers instantly on her gown,
completely ignoring Athena
"Riri that tickled!"
She quickly grasps her own mouth as the the girls on either side
laugh almost out loud. They huddle close still holding their
mouths giggling. Julianna releases her grip on her mouth sensing
something from her sister, who still hadn't moved. Athena breaks
the silence moving her head up,
"Were you scums watching me sleep again?"
Julianna quickly realizes her sisters have moved back against
the large headboard and scurries back squealing and giggling
against and then into Dianna's arms and Thana to her right, Riri
to her left clutching at both, watching Athena turn and hit the
bed landing foot first.
"I missed that the most I think?"
Riri jumps away from her sisters grasp and into her older
sisters arms hugging her
"I love that you are home my sweet sweet Atty. And we are happy
and Mom I guess, um... Well. Daddy's happy and.. "
Thana rushes out of bed and grasps Riri by her shoulders looking
up and smiling at Atty,
"She rambles a whole lot until she realizes she's doing it and
then so do I but I'm just.."
Dianna shifts out of bed following Thana and turns sharply
standing next to Athena who is only slightly taller but an
ascendant year apart in age. looking at The triplets who
smaller. Standing almost at Athenas tummy
"Kids these days. Huh?"
She smiles and gently pokes her elbow into Athena's upper thigh.
Athena smiles and settles to a kneeling position, now facing her
younger siblings, Dianna lowers with her face to face with all,
"I've really missed you guys. Academy is tough and well... I
never take the time to just hang out with you these days and I'm
really sorry for that. Can you ever forgive me?"
Riri places her tiny ivory hand on Athena's face along with
Julianna and Thanastasia.
Riri smiles and tells her big sister
"You are not really far away because we feel you an when you
have fun it feels fun for us because... because..."
Thana intercedes
"Because we miss you. It feels stronger when we really miss you
and we play outside and we feel like we play with you here
because we feel you."
Dianna now huddled into a hug reaches into their arms as well as
Athena's. Julianna whispers in tiny breaths
"You don't have to go back to academies. You can stay here. We
don't like the nanny... "
Thana and Riri rapidly force their hands on to Jules mouth
instantly glaring at their sister as though she's given
something away. Dianna stands without hesitation and quickly
steps back. Athena glares at Jules and then turns to face either
sister on either side. She lowers her head and smiles,
"Nina (Thana), Riri and Jules... don't hide things from me. I
could never hurt you sweet girls. Tell me about the Nanny."
The three girls stare at Dianna who is standing and facing away
from all. She smiles through her words,
"Atty. The lady that watches the girls drinks Thaer all day. She
doesn't watch the girls at all. Mom doesn't know because she
isn't here and gets out so late that no one brings it up. You
know like I do, you don't bother Mom when she's tired. I waited
for you to come back from Academy to tell you but the babies
beat me to it.
Riri rushes up to Athena who stands, and yanks on her gown
causing Athena snap her focus downward.
"Don be mad cause we.. "
Athena scoops up her little sister Riri and grabs Juli while
Dianna picks up Thana.
"You don't be sorry sweety girl. I'm home and I'll take care of
this."
Thana jumbles her words only a little due the fact that the
group of tiny girls is being carried by their older sisters who
are now rushing through the halls of their home. Athena moves
like she's on fire. Heading down the spiral stairwell and into
then past the common room of their house. A small and tidy white
interior for a large family. The elder sisters come to the
dining hall and place the little ones on seats at the island
counter. Athena places her hands on the counter and looks down
attempting to contain her rage. Dianna walks up behind her and
caresses her shoulders.
"Keep it together, don't worry the girls please?"
Atty calms down and breathes looking over to her sister
"I'm fine. I'm ok, it'll be ok."
She looks at the three little ones and asks
"Does the Nanny cook food?"
The girls shake their heads in unison without flinching their
looks at all. No smiles or movements, telling Athena everything
she needs to know. That they're telling the truth. She turns and
faces Dianna,
"Keep them smiling, I'm going to make breakfast."
Dianna rushes to the side of the counter giving Athena room to
work. The triplets giggle watching their older sisters. Thana
fixes her gaze on Athena while Julianna and Riri watch Dianna.
Athena gathers her ingredients and shell proteins and spices.
She turns facing the cupboard removing three tiny silver cups
and places them in front of each little one,
Jules, Riri and Thana. Then sways back and begins stirring the
shell proteins in the aethir pan. While Dianna distracts the
girls with jokes and funny faces, Athena cooks and plates their
food, thinking furiously about what she'll say to the woman who
took the Nanny position. No sooner does Athena serve the last
plate does the Nanny walk in.
"Girls your parents left early this morning and they woke my up,
so we're skipping waking up until later in the day...?"
She is startled by Athena's appearance and stops walking.
"You must be Athena? The older sister? You didn't have to do
that... I would have.. "
Athena, who seconds prior was about to sit and eat with her
sisters now stands glaring at the Nanny.
"You would have what? Gotten a drink? Put my sisters back to bed
and slept the whole day? Is that right?"
Dianna knows first hand what her sister is capable of and
quickly steps in front of Athena facing the Nanny,
"By now, I'm on a transport heading to school. While I've been
leaving to school thinking you would be ok with the girls,
you've been leaving them unsupervised. I haven't shown Athena
the security sensors recording. But I'm sure my Mom wouldn't
give the pass codes to anyone but Dad. Which means what you do
all day is in there."
Athena steps up from behind Didi,
"What we're saying is, we ARE GOING TO show my Mother what
you've been doing while you were charged with watching her baby
girls. We're giving you a head start. You better run because I'm
going to call the one woman on Oah who can find you anywhere."
The Nanny, a young woman poorly dressed in the Oahn fashion
sense wore the same clothes as yesterday. Riri mentions this,
"Tha lady is wearing the same dress as priory."
Thanastasia speaks in agreement,
"Ya, she wears the same thing a whole big bunch."
Jules turns her seat toward the Nanny
"She sleeps a whole big bunch too."
Dianna turns facing Athena who starts moving toward the Nanny.
Athena scolds her as she begins fumbling to grab her things and
then rushes away and through the common room. Then out the door.
Athena takes Dianna by her hand and they jump excitedly and so
too do the triplets. Two older boys walk in to the dining hall
rubbing their heads and stretching to awaken. Apollo Zahn and
his twin Brother Aries Amadeus look confused at the girls
squealing excited. Right behind them, two smaller boys follow
clutching their legs worried the Nanny might be around. Shawn
Eric Zahn and Raijinn Amadeus stare at one another, also
confused at their sisters behavior.
Apollo speaks up aiming his comment at his sister, who is his
age, Athena
"Hey Atty, what'd we miss?"
(Tbc)
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Re: The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
DIR By: guest1367
Date: July 25, 2017, 10:17 pm
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Chapter 1 pt 2 The Family
Soundtrack:
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Athena never answered her brother Apollo. She would not reveal
why she'd banished the woman, he only knew that she was
frightened. Seeing the look on her face as he and his brothers
came down the stairs was thought altering to say the least. He
was terrified for the woman as his sister Atty was known to
defeat combatants by breaking their bones. The Amazon were
trained to be ruthless. He would not ask her again and takes it
on faith that his sister had good reason. His younger brothers,
Shawn and Raijinn scamper about his step causing him to stop. He
and Aries grab the younger boys up and sit them with their
sisters. The boys, seemingly older were in no way smarter than
the triplets. So they were always polite. Then as usual, the
older siblings revel in the calm. When the smaller children seat
next to one another, they stare ahead then at each other. Often
tilting their heads, giving rise to what the elder siblings
already knew. They were speaking to one another with their
minds. Apollo reaches into his boot cuff and places a silver
ball on the counter in front of the children. He taps the top of
the silver orb then looks around, taking inventory of every
action, Athena stopped stirring the protein shells, Dianna sits
between the two younger twins Shawn and Rai. The triplets still
look at one another, then to the smaller boys. The sphere glows
and begins hovering, a sight the family of children besides
Apollo and Dianna have yet to witness. Apollo speaks to the
device,
"Broadcast open communication to Senator Elizabeth Amadeus."
The devices replies
=\Status?/=
Apollo glares at the silver glowing ball,
"Communicator."
=\"Broadcasting. Message Delivered. Reply message inbound:"Send
video."/=
Apollo reacts after reading and the device asks if he would like
to have the message read aloud. He replies no ads speaks to the
device again, Commanding video function. The device requests a
status access her replies saying the word, recording. The silver
and still glowing ball rises from the counter and begins
spinning. The children, still communicating with their minds are
not swayed by the glowing light or its source, rather than their
own conversation. Dianna, in a vain attempt to stop the
recording process stands and rushes to the water dispenser,
taking one of the children's cups and filling it with water,
within a few milliseconds, she is successful in drawing the
children's attention away, and splashes the device, but too
late. The device stops glowing and then plops to the counter as
the water splashes over, it doesn't roll or behave like a free
moving physical object. Thana and Rianna, stare at the ball and
then to the boys. Then they all stare at it. Athena glares at
her older brother with a look of shock.
"Did she just see that? Did Mom see them?!"
Apollo looks down at his hands, across the silver and blue
tinted wristbands
"Yeah. Mom saw."
Dianna, still wiping the water away drops her cloth and rushes
to Apollo slamming her hands into his chest as Aries steps
behind her and grasps her by her shoulders as she snarls at her
brother,
"Have you lost your mind?! She'll come for them! She'll seperate
them! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE APOLLO!?"
Athena steps in between Aries and Didi. Facing her brother
"She's right, you've doomed them."
Apollo, still facing his hands speaks to the elder siblings
"Guys, we don't know what it is the kids are going through...
Mom told me if I saw anything strange to use this ball... To
call her. I didn't really know why but, She assured me she has
her children's best interests at heart."
Dianna, a chosen scholar steps and writhes out of Athena's arms,
reaches out and steps away from her siblings. She crosses her
arms and begins crying.
"It'll be like it was with us, she tore us apart, she changed
us. I'd give anything to be like them.... Like the kids. The
things they can do, that's worth protecting but remember Apollo!
Remember what she did to us!"
Dianna, still facing her brother now casts her eyes left peering
over his shoulder sights the children. All asleep on the
counter. Athena only has minutes to act before her Mother
contacts Apollo.
"Is she coming now?"
Apollo answers
"She didn't say, listen all I know is that the kids can do what
we used to and Mom told me to report anything unusual.."
Dianna snaps her attention sharply at Apollo
"Give it a rest Apollo! We all know you want to be a Soldier,
it's why you wear those bracelets. You want to be a Centuarii
Soldier! Just admit it!"
Aries turns on the water dispenser and washes food off of tiny
little plates, having heard everything he reasons
"Yeah Apollo. Ever since Mom formed a male Army you've been
dying to get in. We all know. But even you can't let this
happen. She's gonna separate them. You know she will. They're
ascendant children and she refuses to tell the Senate. It was
like that with us after she separated us, now we can't hear each
others minds..."
Athena stands at the crystal pane of the Dining hall looking out
to the neighborhood.
"What matters now is letting it happen or doing something about
it. I say we run. To the Capitol, it'll be ten times harder for
her to track us there."
Dianna smiles at her sisters words while Apollo mocks Athena
"So you're not a cold blooded killer after all huh?"
Before she can comment the dining hall doors fly open and almost
off both hinges.
Elizabeth Amadeus strides silently glaring at each of her elder
children. Atty, Didi and the older Twin boys freeze in their
tracks watching her eyes and following her movements. Ellie
stands near her smaller children with her back turned to the
older group walking casually around the island counter where
each child rests their heads. Athena almost rushes forward to
protect her younger siblings in one deft move but is halted
instantly when Dianna and Aries grab either hand. She stops and
glares almost shocked at Dianna. Didi purses her lips and widens
her eyes to indicate danger. They look again at their Mother as
she continues circling the children now speaking
"Rianna will make an excellent soldier, an Amazon Soldier.
Julianna ..... well... I'll just have to settle for a another
cop in the family hmm?"
Atty pushes forward again halted by the grip either sibling has
on her hands. She begins sobbing through gnashed teeth. Aries
looks down knowing he's powerless to stop his Mother from taking
this action.
"Mom, why do you have to break them up? Why did you.."
Ellie faces her son marching directly toward and stands face to
face with him
"If you understood what ascendant powers bring. The kind of
mistrust they instill in others who are not like us. I kept you
away from each other to slow the process down. To stop your
ascendant state until you're ready.."
Thana picks her head up looking back at her family
"Momma is not telling the truth. She doesn't want a New
Lioness.... I don't know what a Lioness is but in her
thoughts.."
Elizabeth moves faster than even an Angelus eye could follow
stepping in front of her daughter Thana.
"I'll lock you in a lab... I want to know why you've ascended
the way you have... I'll get the answers from there.."
She points to Thana's forehead
"Am I lying now?"
Thana looks at the floor and nods.
By now a torrent of rage has overtaken Athena who is furiously
attempting to gain freedom by writhing out of her siblings arms.
Just as she feels she about to break free, Elizabeth removes an
Apothis sphere from her jacket and speaks a single word
"Stun"
She aims the silver ball at Athena and it fires off a small
static discharge that impacts on Athena's chest forcing her out
of her brothers and sisters arms landing flat on her back.
"She really is the bravest and smartest of you all. But I won't
let her figure that one out."

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