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The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
By: guest1367 Date: July 23, 2017, 1:19 am
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The following Chapters will be written according to the
Original Creator of Oah, the Centaurii and Amazon Angelus Rianna
Zahn using her Notes and Manuscripts. I have completed finding
each segment and will add her stories here, The first through
Ten chapters in order to complete her novel.
Thank you.
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Re: The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
By: guest1367 Date: July 23, 2017, 1:31 am
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The following Chapters will be written according to the
Original Creator Rianna Zahn using her Notes and Manuscripts. I
have completed finding each segment and will add her stories
here, The first through Ten chapters in order to complete her
novel.
Thank you.
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Re: The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
By: guest1367 Date: July 23, 2017, 7:32 pm
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Chapter 1 the Family
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Ascendant daytime, a beautiful morning. Tsu-Jinn Valley, west of
Tsu-Jinn city just below Mount Zahadume. The Valley is wide open
and nearly flat and surrounded by mountain peaks. The modest
white house so named ZahnHome is where our story begins...
The two Oahn suns Zah and Ahn were shining bright, one setting
slowly, the other rising. A set of brilliant blue eyes casts a
gaze on the morning, Rianna Zahn slowly rises from her bed
staring first at her and her sisters room. She awoke to the dawn
out of habit and curiously looks about now almost fully awake.
She giggles watching her sisters sleep hovering as always. She's
fascinated by Athena, her older sister as she never really turns
in her hover sleep. She crawls steadily to the end of her bed as
her Twin sister Thana and her other triplet Julianna hover low,
meaning they'd wake soon. She had little and precious time to
watch Athena. While she gazes, her minds eye recalls the image
of her other sisters sleeping, they turn in their sleep, arms up
or out, their legs flutter slightly giving rise to the notion
that they're dreaming of walking. Dianna moves too But Atty, as
she calls her elder sister, sleeps differently. She's almost
still. Rianna scratches her head and her knuckles brush up
against soft skin and fluttering hair. She looks up to see
Dianna staring down smiling as she hovers over Rianna.
"Oh Riri, are you watching her again?"
Thana, having landed stretches her arms and answers for her
sister,
"Of course. We both think the same thing, why don't you? Our
sister has learned a whole bunch at school an' maybe because of
that she doesn't move. I think it's really nice."
Dianna tilts her head facing Thana
"I didn't even hear you land. Did you sleep ok sweetheart?"
Thana and Riri look at one another and close their eyes speaking
together
"Yes."
Julianna, still hovering moves her foot down aiming her toe at
Thana's forehead and giggles slightly pushing her head back only
slightly,
"Shhh, it's not our business how Atty sleeps."
Thana reaches out and grabs her foot tickling Dianna forcing her
to lose focus and drop on top of Rianna. Riri squeals and laughs
out loud immediately followed by Dianna grabbing her mouth and
Thana rushing up to the foot of the bed watching intently as
Athena slumbers. Dianna reaches over and slaps Thana on her
shoulder, she whispers slightly scolding and laughing
simultaneously. Julianna caresses Thana's arm and the two join
their sisters at the foot of the bed, A wonderful sight,
"Oh my Goddess that was close! Don't tickle me when I'm hovering
over someone!"
Rianna with her sisters hands over her mouth nibbles at her
fingers and Dianna brushes her fingers instantly on her gown,
completely ignoring Athena
"Riri that tickled!"
She quickly grasps her own mouth as the the girls on either side
laugh almost out loud. They huddle close still holding their
mouths giggling. Julianna releases her grip on her mouth sensing
something from her sister, who still hadn't moved. Athena breaks
the silence moving her head up,
"Were you scums watching me sleep again?"
Julianna quickly realizes her sisters have moved back against
the large headboard and scurries back squealing and giggling
against and then into Dianna's arms and Thana to her right, Riri
to her left clutching at both, watching Athena turn and hit the
bed landing foot first.
"I missed that the most I think?"
Riri jumps away from her sisters grasp and into her older
sisters arms hugging her
"I love that you are home my sweet sweet Atty. And we are happy
and Mom I guess, um... Well. Daddy's happy and.. "
Thana rushes out of bed and grasps Riri by her shoulders looking
up and smiling at Atty,
"She rambles a whole lot until she realizes she's doing it and
then so do I but I'm just.."
Dianna shifts out of bed following Thana and turns sharply
standing next to Athena who is only slightly taller but an
ascendant year apart in age. looking at The triplets who
smaller. Standing almost at Athenas tummy
"Kids these days. Huh?"
She smiles and gently pokes her elbow into Athena's upper thigh.
Athena smiles and settles to a kneeling position, now facing her
younger siblings, Dianna lowers with her face to face with all,
"I've really missed you guys. Academy is tough and well... I
never take the time to just hang out with you these days and I'm
really sorry for that. Can you ever forgive me?"
Riri places her tiny ivory hand on Athena's face along with
Julianna and Thanastasia.
Riri smiles and tells her big sister
"You are not really far away because we feel you an when you
have fun it feels fun for us because... because..."
Thana intercedes
"Because we miss you. It feels stronger when we really miss you
and we play outside and we feel like we play with you here
because we feel you."
Dianna now huddled into a hug reaches into their arms as well as
Athena's. Julianna whispers in tiny breaths
"You don't have to go back to academies. You can stay here. We
don't like the nanny... "
Thana and Riri rapidly force their hands on to Jules mouth
instantly glaring at their sister as though she's given
something away. Dianna stands without hesitation and quickly
steps back. Athena glares at Jules and then turns to face either
sister on either side. She lowers her head and smiles,
"Nina (Thana), Riri and Jules... don't hide things from me. I
could never hurt you sweet girls. Tell me about the Nanny."
The three girls stare at Dianna who is standing and facing away
from all. She smiles through her words,
"Atty. The lady that watches the girls drinks Thaer all day. She
doesn't watch the girls at all. Mom doesn't know because she
isn't here and gets out so late that no one brings it up. You
know like I do, you don't bother Mom when she's tired. I waited
for you to come back from Academy to tell you but the babies
beat me to it.
Riri rushes up to Athena who stands, and yanks on her gown
causing Athena snap her focus downward.
"Don be mad cause we.. "
Athena scoops up her little sister Riri and grabs Juli while
Dianna picks up Thana.
"You don't be sorry sweety girl. I'm home and I'll take care of
this."
Thana jumbles her words only a little due the fact that the
group of tiny girls is being carried by their older sisters who
are now rushing through the halls of their home. Athena moves
like she's on fire. Heading down the spiral stairwell and into
then past the common room of their house. A small and tidy white
interior for a large family. The elder sisters come to the
dining hall and place the little ones on seats at the island
counter. Athena places her hands on the counter and looks down
attempting to contain her rage. Dianna walks up behind her and
caresses her shoulders.
"Keep it together, don't worry the girls please?"
Atty calms down and breathes looking over to her sister
"I'm fine. I'm ok, it'll be ok."
She looks at the three little ones and asks
"Does the Nanny cook food?"
The girls shake their heads in unison without flinching their
looks at all. No smiles or movements, telling Athena everything
she needs to know. That they're telling the truth. She turns and
faces Dianna,
"Keep them smiling, I'm going to make breakfast."
Dianna rushes to the side of the counter giving Athena room to
work. The triplets giggle watching their older sisters. Thana
fixes her gaze on Athena while Julianna and Riri watch Dianna.
Athena gathers her ingredients and shell proteins and spices.
She turns facing the cupboard removing three tiny silver cups
and places them in front of each little one,
Jules, Riri and Thana. Then sways back and begins stirring the
shell proteins in the aethir pan. While Dianna distracts the
girls with jokes and funny faces, Athena cooks and plates their
food, thinking furiously about what she'll say to the woman who
took the Nanny position. No sooner does Athena serve the last
plate does the Nanny walk in.
"Girls your parents left early this morning and they woke my up,
so we're skipping waking up until later in the day...?"
She is startled by Athena's appearance and stops walking.
"You must be Athena? The older sister? You didn't have to do
that... I would have.. "
Athena, who seconds prior was about to sit and eat with her
sisters now stands glaring at the Nanny.
"You would have what? Gotten a drink? Put my sisters back to bed
and slept the whole day? Is that right?"
Dianna knows first hand what her sister is capable of and
quickly steps in front of Athena facing the Nanny,
"By now, I'm on a transport heading to school. While I've been
leaving to school thinking you would be ok with the girls,
you've been leaving them unsupervised. I haven't shown Athena
the security sensors recording. But I'm sure my Mom wouldn't
give the pass codes to anyone but Dad. Which means what you do
all day is in there."
Athena steps up from behind Didi,
"What we're saying is, we ARE GOING TO show my Mother what
you've been doing while you were charged with watching her baby
girls. We're giving you a head start. You better run because I'm
going to call the one woman on Oah who can find you anywhere."
The Nanny, a young woman poorly dressed in the Oahn fashion
sense wore the same clothes as yesterday. Riri mentions this,
"Tha lady is wearing the same dress as priory."
Thanastasia speaks in agreement,
"Ya, she wears the same thing a whole big bunch."
Jules turns her seat toward the Nanny
"She sleeps a whole big bunch too."
Dianna turns facing Athena who starts moving toward the Nanny.
Athena scolds her as she begins fumbling to grab her things and
then rushes away and through the common room. Then out the door.
Athena takes Dianna by her hand and they jump excitedly and so
too do the triplets. Two older boys walk in to the dining hall
rubbing their heads and stretching to awaken. Apollo Zahn and
his twin Brother Aries Amadeus look confused at the girls
squealing excited. Right behind them, two smaller boys follow
clutching their legs worried the Nanny might be around. Shawn
Eric Zahn and Raijinn Amadeus stare at one another, also
confused at their sisters behavior.
Apollo speaks up aiming his comment at his sister, who is his
age, Athena
"Hey Atty, what'd we miss?"
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Re: The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
By: guest1367 Date: July 25, 2017, 10:17 pm
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Chapter 1 pt 2 The Family
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Athena never answered her brother Apollo. She would not reveal
why she'd banished the woman, he only knew that she was
frightened. Seeing the look on her face as he and his brothers
came down the stairs was thought altering to say the least. He
was terrified for the woman as his sister Atty was known to
defeat combatants by breaking their bones. The Amazon were
trained to be ruthless. He would not ask her again and takes it
on faith that his sister had good reason. His younger brothers,
Shawn and Raijinn scamper about his step causing him to stop. He
and Aries grab the younger boys up and sit them with their
sisters. The boys, seemingly older were in no way smarter than
the triplets. So they were always polite. Then as usual, the
older siblings revel in the calm. When the smaller children seat
next to one another, they stare ahead then at each other. Often
tilting their heads, giving rise to what the elder siblings
already knew. They were speaking to one another with their
minds. Apollo reaches into his boot cuff and places a silver
ball on the counter in front of the children. He taps the top of
the silver orb then looks around, taking inventory of every
action, Athena stopped stirring the protein shells, Dianna sits
between the two younger twins Shawn and Rai. The triplets still
look at one another, then to the smaller boys. The sphere glows
and begins hovering, a sight the family of children besides
Apollo and Dianna have yet to witness. Apollo speaks to the
device,
"Broadcast open communication to Senator Elizabeth Amadeus."
The devices replies
=\Status?/=
Apollo glares at the silver glowing ball,
"Communicator."
=\"Broadcasting. Message Delivered. Reply message inbound:"Send
video."/=
Apollo reacts after reading and the device asks if he would like
to have the message read aloud. He replies no ads speaks to the
device again, Commanding video function. The device requests a
status access her replies saying the word, recording. The silver
and still glowing ball rises from the counter and begins
spinning. The children, still communicating with their minds are
not swayed by the glowing light or its source, rather than their
own conversation. Dianna, in a vain attempt to stop the
recording process stands and rushes to the water dispenser,
taking one of the children's cups and filling it with water,
within a few milliseconds, she is successful in drawing the
children's attention away, and splashes the device, but too
late. The device stops glowing and then plops to the counter as
the water splashes over, it doesn't roll or behave like a free
moving physical object. Thana and Rianna, stare at the ball and
then to the boys. Then they all stare at it. Athena glares at
her older brother with a look of shock.
"Did she just see that? Did Mom see them?!"
Apollo looks down at his hands, across the silver and blue
tinted wristbands
"Yeah. Mom saw."
Dianna, still wiping the water away drops her cloth and rushes
to Apollo slamming her hands into his chest as Aries steps
behind her and grasps her by her shoulders as she snarls at her
brother,
"Have you lost your mind?! She'll come for them! She'll seperate
them! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE APOLLO!?"
Athena steps in between Aries and Didi. Facing her brother
"She's right, you've doomed them."
Apollo, still facing his hands speaks to the elder siblings
"Guys, we don't know what it is the kids are going through...
Mom told me if I saw anything strange to use this ball... To
call her. I didn't really know why but, She assured me she has
her children's best interests at heart."
Dianna, a chosen scholar steps and writhes out of Athena's arms,
reaches out and steps away from her siblings. She crosses her
arms and begins crying.
"It'll be like it was with us, she tore us apart, she changed
us. I'd give anything to be like them.... Like the kids. The
things they can do, that's worth protecting but remember Apollo!
Remember what she did to us!"
Dianna, still facing her brother now casts her eyes left peering
over his shoulder sights the children. All asleep on the
counter. Athena only has minutes to act before her Mother
contacts Apollo.
"Is she coming now?"
Apollo answers
"She didn't say, listen all I know is that the kids can do what
we used to and Mom told me to report anything unusual.."
Dianna snaps her attention sharply at Apollo
"Give it a rest Apollo! We all know you want to be a Soldier,
it's why you wear those bracelets. You want to be a Centuarii
Soldier! Just admit it!"
Aries turns on the water dispenser and washes food off of tiny
little plates, having heard everything he reasons
"Yeah Apollo. Ever since Mom formed a male Army you've been
dying to get in. We all know. But even you can't let this
happen. She's gonna separate them. You know she will. They're
ascendant children and she refuses to tell the Senate. It was
like that with us after she separated us, now we can't hear each
others minds..."
Athena stands at the crystal pane of the Dining hall looking out
to the neighborhood.
"What matters now is letting it happen or doing something about
it. I say we run. To the Capitol, it'll be ten times harder for
her to track us there."
Dianna smiles at her sisters words while Apollo mocks Athena
"So you're not a cold blooded killer after all huh?"
Before she can comment the dining hall doors fly open and almost
off both hinges.
Elizabeth Amadeus strides silently glaring at each of her elder
children. Atty, Didi and the older Twin boys freeze in their
tracks watching her eyes and following her movements. Ellie
stands near her smaller children with her back turned to the
older group walking casually around the island counter where
each child rests their heads. Athena almost rushes forward to
protect her younger siblings in one deft move but is halted
instantly when Dianna and Aries grab either hand. She stops and
glares almost shocked at Dianna. Didi purses her lips and widens
her eyes to indicate danger. They look again at their Mother as
she continues circling the children now speaking
"Rianna will make an excellent soldier, an Amazon Soldier.
Julianna ..... well... I'll just have to settle for a another
cop in the family hmm?"
Atty pushes forward again halted by the grip either sibling has
on her hands. She begins sobbing through gnashed teeth. Aries
looks down knowing he's powerless to stop his Mother from taking
this action.
"Mom, why do you have to break them up? Why did you.."
Ellie faces her son marching directly toward and stands face to
face with him
"If you understood what ascendant powers bring. The kind of
mistrust they instill in others who are not like us. I kept you
away from each other to slow the process down. To stop your
ascendant state until you're ready.."
Thana picks her head up looking back at her family
"Momma is not telling the truth. She doesn't want a New
Lioness.... I don't know what a Lioness is but in her
thoughts.."
Elizabeth moves faster than even an Angelus eye could follow
stepping in front of her daughter Thana.
"I'll lock you in a lab... I want to know why you've ascended
the way you have... I'll get the answers from there.."
She points to Thana's forehead
"Am I lying now?"
Thana looks at the floor and nods.
By now a torrent of rage has overtaken Athena who is furiously
attempting to gain freedom by writhing out of her siblings arms.
Just as she feels she about to break free, Elizabeth removes an
Apothis sphere from her jacket and speaks a single word
"Stun"
She aims the silver ball at Athena and it fires off a small
static discharge that impacts on Athena's chest forcing her out
of her brothers and sisters arms landing flat on her back.
"She really is the bravest and smartest of you all. But I won't
let her figure that one out."

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Re: The Zahn Amadeus Family-Chapters 1-10
By: guest1367 Date: July 28, 2017, 1:31 am
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Chapter 1 pt 3
The Family
Soundtrack:
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Aries quickly rushes to grasp Athena age cradles her head and
looks into Elizabeth's eyes. He can see sorrow behind them for
an instant. Ellie then moves her eyes left without moving any
part of her frame still holding the Apothis Unit out as her
Subordinate Officer, a newly trained Aurii Amazon, born on the
red side,
Sanna of Staihne House, the wife of Senate Regent Morrigon
Staihne and Elizabeth's appointed Senate Leader. Sanna along
with a small contingent of Aurii Amazons lower through the
common room sky portal. A window without glass to the sky. Sanna
stands having moved so quickly it startles the smaller children.
"Well done Elizabeth. I followed you to let you know your
Mothers fleet will be over the Capitol in a few metrions. We
don't have a lot of time."
Ellie looks to her mother's best friend scolding
"My Mother is my concern subordinate. Have a care with your
tone. Where's your daughter?"
Ellie looks around and then back to the center of the common
room and spots the fair skinned, red haired girl, Sanna's
daughter, Theodora Staihne and gently waves her over to them.
"Become here fairchild. My Mother will be among us soon."
Elli's own children look on the scene. Still sitting at the
island counter, now joined by their elder siblings who as well
look on confused. Ellie watches Theodora rush to her Mother's
side and glance up at her. Ellie smiles down to her,
"Oh it's simply too bad you were born on the red side... You
would have been a marvelous Amazon Commander... But today,
hopefully with your Mother's offering, you'll make a wonderful
handmaiden to my daughter."
The child looks over to the children seated silently and looking
at her, as she looks to them.
Sanna smiles and leans over whispering
"Commander, they've finished building your Mothers gate atop the
mountain."
Ellie taps her Subordinate Amazon's shoulder walking toward her
children instructing her subordinate, Sanna.
"Command an Armored Personnel Carrier to arrive within the next
prime matrion. I have need of transport."
Ellie turns her attention to her children,
"My Mother, the great Amadora of Zahn house will arrive here at
her old house... My House. She will come to know you all. My
eldest children and youngest...."
Bo-Shawn Zahn swoops down through the common room sky portal,
landing gently and running swiftly to his wife's side.
"This is a momentous occasion children, your Grandmother has
found another world like our own, and she wants to take my
Ascended children with her... "
Ellie places her hands together in front of her, almost holding
her stomach. The pain behind her eyes is noticeable even to her
youngest children, but to any other Amazon in the room she is
almost emotionless. The look of pain is unmistakable to her
family, she may as well be sobbing. She continues talking to her
children.
"You've never met your Grandmother face to face, only heard of
her in school or from what I've told you. She expects to find my
Ascended children but.."
She turns to face her husband Bo-Shawn,
"But we already know there's only one of you..."
As she speaks she turns away from Bo-Shawn and toward the
children once more. Sanna looks on with interest as her
commanding officer seems to be taking her time for some reason.
Ellie kept talking but stopped the moment she realized Sanna was
listening. She faces Sanna,
"Take your daughter to the garden outside, I will speak to my
family alone."
Ellie faces Bo-Shawn and tears clearly streak down her cheeks.
He grasps her forearms gently whispering
"It's the Amazon law, we have to do it this way. I'll help you
if need be.."
Ellie grabs his hands
"No! I'll do it! It, I just..I know what it'll mean."
Apollo and Aries stand, assuring the children to stay where they
are and rub the arms of the child they speak to. Shawn-Eric and
his twin Raijinn smile as the older boys comfort them. Riri,
Jules and Thana smile as well comforted by Dianna. Elizabeth
begins speaking again
"My Mother sent a survey ship to a far distant world, away from
even our galaxy. It is like Oah. It also has two suns. But... "
Thana and Riri look to Julianna and then the three look to their
mother wide eyed speaking in an almost melodic chorus
"You did not tell her the suns were dying."
Dianna covers her mouth wide eyed having heard this horrific
news.
She removes her hands and looks blank at her Mother
"That's why you swore to build her that gate... So she'd go to
her new world."
Aries moves forward almost believing that Didi would attack.
Athena mumbles facing the floor but seated and speaks as well
while Ellie backs up into her husband's arms,
"When you first built the gate, she came. But you didn't want
her to take any of us, so you changed us... Took our ascendant
powers away."
Elizabeth steps away and forward of her husband
"They weren't taken, the process was slowed... Even I can't
change what you'll become. I've studied our physiology more
intelligently than my Mother, the first Amazon. Believe me, she
doesn't know that part. She won't take you or the boys Athena,
just the children and I won't let her... I have to do this! That
woman will take my babies because of an Ancient Amazon Law. I
can't let her. She has to believe they're non ascended beings.
Only one... the strongest of you all."
Athena looks down to the floor remembering her own pain. She
raises her head looking straight at Riri.
Ellie faces Bo-Shawn as he hands her a blade. Aries and Apollo
purse their lips all, walking around the island countertop.
Ellie sobs and again, speaks
"What I'm doing now, I do for a free Oah."
Ellie takes the blade walking up behind the distracted children.
Apollo walks behind Shawn-Eric and covers his eyes almost crying
himself. His little brother covers his own ears wondering if
this is a game. The younger girls on the other side of the
counter weep silently, having heard their mother's thoughts.
Ellie purses her lips and strikes at Shawn-Erics back as the
blade juts through his tiny frame exiting his chest through the
front, piercing his heart instantly.
Apollo lays his head down gently and takes his small, limp body
away to another room. Ellie walks up behind Raijinn who heard or
saw nothing as he and Shawn-Eric right thought they were playing
a game, so nothing's changed in his mind, he's still oblivious
and clutching his ears. Aries bites his lower lip sobbing and
almost shaking as Ellie once more stabs forward. Raijinn slumps
forward into Aries' arms. Aries scoops up his little brothers
lifeless body and carries him to the same room Apollo took
Shawn-Eric.
Athena, knowing there was no way out of this stands behind
Thana. Thana places her hands in her lap
She turns her head up facing Athena
"We know why, we will miss talking to one another."
Athena sobs, tears dropping into her sisters forehead as she
lowers to kiss her. Thana closes her eyes at the kiss as she
asks
"Atty? Will it hurt?"
Athena hears the words. She heard the question and now only sees
the blade, glistening in the light as the tip glimmers through
her sisters soft and tiny frame. She cradles Thana by her head
and with a free hand, closes her eyes, whispering
"Yes, it hurts."
Athena follows taking Thana away.
Rianna holds reaches out to Jules, sitting side by side and they
lock hands, as Elizabeth walks past. Dianna holds Julianna by
her shoulders kissing the top of her head. Julianna smiles
through her own tears looking at Riri. Riri can't face her right
away and suddenly feels so emotional and begins recalling their
smiles and laughter. Then, her hand feels different. There's no
grip, so she grips tighter. She then faces Juliana almost eye to
eye. But Jules eyes seem different now. They're still blue, but
dots in the middle.. they're getting wider and wider. Dianna
reaches forward of Julianna's face and closes her eyes as Juli
slumps back into her sisters arms.
Elizabeth stands behind her little girl Rianna holding her
shoulders,
"Be the strongest for Mommy. Learn from your grandmother. Learn
all you can. When everything is said and done I'll come for you.
I won't leave you there honey. I promise I'll come for you."
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Chapter 1 pt 4
The Family
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Even from Tsu Jinn City, the roar of the crowds and scores of
Oahn people echoed for kilometers in any direction. The Nation
of Oah was expecting the return of their Lioness
Amadora of Zahn House
The messages were displayed within every home in the Capitol
City, Oahnaii as billions watched digital monitors of every size
in awe of the Eleventh Knights Fleet of ships. Their presence so
low in the atmosphere heralded the arrival of the only being to
command the fleet, Amadora. The larger vessels remain hovering
over the city while a private transport accompanied by one
hundred of fighter craft surrounding the transport that carried
Amadora. Seeming a brilliant access joyous occasion, the
revelers on balconies and streets cheered, save a few watching
from ZanhnHome. Sanna of Staihne House walks side by side with
her Daughter, Theodora into the large Common Room and looks over
as Amazon Commander Elizabeth Amadeus glares at the monitor in
disgust instead of glee.
"Does something trouble you Commander? You seem distraught at
the appearance of your Mother's fleet?"
She tilts her head only slightly never breaking her curious
stare at her Commanding Officer, who speaks in assurance,
though, breaking her gaze and after pondering quickly
"I was watching the flight patterns of her escorts. I dislike
the way they flew. Nothing more Subordinate!"
Elizabeth walks quickly around Sanna and her daughter, into the
main open common room.
Sanna turns to face the monitor as the display shows the private
transport landing in front of ZahnHome. She smiles at the notion
that she was watching something live that was occurring in front
of the house she was now standing in. She rushes behind Ellie
then slows to match her pace as does Theodora. Sanna looks to
Ellie asking
"Commander? If I might ask? Where are your...."
Elizabeth freezes in her tracks, turning to face Sanna scolding
her with her very eyes and grim visage
"You were going to ask about my children? They fell to their
dreams Subordinate. I had their elder siblings take them to
their rooms."
Sanna looks forward and stops smiling. The grand doors to the
Common Room open and Amadora walks in with her wings spread, her
armor glistening in the light of the Oahn Sun. Her white lower
gown bristles and sways. Her own soldiers follow but as she
enters the Eleventh Knights Centaurii stop and bow at the door.
She descends a modest stair step and stands before her daughter.
"One is pleased to see you and be home fairchild. Have you
finished assembling the gate atop the mountain?"
Elizabeth faces down and bends a knee to her Superior. She
doesn't raise her eyes to meet her Mother's as Sanna and Her
daughter, the Centaurii and Ellie's Husband Bo-Shawn kneel on
one knee and rise. Elizabeth places one hand into her fist as a
salute. Sanna smiles still looking down as Ellie does as Amadora
now smiles speaking,
"Dearest Girl, come. Tell me about your time since my
departure?"
Sanna brushes past Ellie rushing toward Amadora, ascending two
steps, holding her hands toward her friend. Amadora grasps
Sanna's hands in delight. Amadora looks about the common room
tilting at each corner slightly and still smiling,
"Where are your children?"
She asks this of her daughter Elizabeth without directly asking
her. Sanna answers in Ellie's place, looking back at Ellie with
a smirk on her face and a raised eyebrow,
"They sleep."
She casts her gaze mockingly at Ellie who answers her Mother
"They had a long day.."
Amadora brushes off her daughters words turning away and
clicking her teeth. Sanna stands steadily next to her Lioness.
Ellie just glares at her Mother's back as Sanna walks hand in
hand with her giggling and looking back at Ellie and silently
scoffing. She looks left and down at Theodora, taking her hand
and introducing her to the Amazon Lioness. Ellie continues
watching as the three walked ahead of her. Ellie turns facing
Bo-Shawn as the group reaches the stairwell leading to the upper
rooms. She keeps her eyes fixed on him signaling him. Bo-Shawn
stops the command troops that arrived with him to stop at the
stairs. Ellie, her Mother and Sanna continue up. The Elder
Children, Apollo, Aries, Dianna and Athena sit, awaiting their
Mother's arrival. For Dianna this moment feels like her real
family she remembers from her childhood, though of late, she has
barely come home from her studies at the Forensic Science Center
at the Spartan Academy. Unlike her Sister Athena, who was
already a trained Amazon Cadet, Dianna was tested as
non-combatant and therefore elected to be a Spartan Officer,
something her Mother Elizabeth despised but accepted. Her
Grandmother never spoke to her Mother with unkindness or malice
in her voice, today seemed different though. The children of
Zahn House were terrified for their younger siblings, having
learned that Amadora wanted to take an ascendant child to her
newly discovered planet.
As they ascend the stately staircase to the children's rooms
above, Elizabeth waves over the Captain of her House Guard, not
her son Apollo or Aries, but the regent of Zahn House who was
loyal to Ellie and her Husband Bo-Shawn, Captain Elizar Macbeth.
He briskly walks toward Ellie as she asks whispering,
"Did the transport I summoned arrive yet?"
He nods and she whispers again just out of earshot of her mother
who never trained to use her meta-hearing.
"When I signal you to do so, You'll remove what I command and
fly directly to Mount Zahadume with me and my Daughter later
lest I commands otherwise, make certain there's no pilot other
than yourself."
Again, he nods speaking into his wrist-bound communicator. After
arriving at the foot of the second floor hall, Amadora points to
the first door, careful to remind Sanna to be quiet so as not to
disturb the children sleeping. No sooner does her subordinate
and best friend open the first door than does Amadora raise her
hand and close her eyes, aiming her open hand at the child in
bed. She waivers slightly seeing that the boy is not levitating.
A sign that he slept like a mortal Oahn and therefore not
ascended.
"Pity, he may have been a fine officer. Are all of your children
civilian and non ascendant Child?"
She looks to Ellie
"Save one. Rianna. She is an ascendant child Mother."
Her plan was working and as Amadora continued walking she aimed
her hand at each door opened by Sanna. Finally arriving at
Riri's door where she felt the arc energies within the child.
"Her Aurii is powerful, as mine. Subordinate, dress my
granddaughter and have her moved downstairs. I would speak with
her Mother."
Elizabeth stands before her Mother as Amadora begins describing
her plans, though, Ellie already knew them.
"I shall have my Centaurii Eleventh Knights travel to my new
world where I will build a new seat for the Oahn Government, my
Subordinate will remain here on Oah with you Elizabeth. She is
not an Ascendant Being. When we arrive I'm certain she'll insure
everything goes as I will it to and you will carry out her
commands as HER subordinate Officer."
Ellie turns immediately and glaring to Sanna of Staihne House,
as she stands smiling proudly. Without actually saying anything,
she remembers the laws written for her Amazon and Centaurii
Academies. You must be an Ascendant being to train in either the
Male or Female armed services. Now, everything was perfect for
as the law clearly dictates, she has every right to her plan.
Ellie faces her mother,
"Yes my beloved Commander. It will be done."
The day passes normal for Oah, as celebrations all round gather
note among the noble houses. Through an interface broadcast and
holographic projection, Amadora tells the senior and Elder
leaders of the noble houses of what she is going to do.
"Oah, the nation I guided to rebuild itself, hear me. One will
away to the twin planet I have discovered with my Eleventh
Knights Fleet. My daughter has outfitted and had built on each
of my ships a means to travel faster and farther. Though, I
myself do not understand the engineering or technical aspects of
it all, I trust that the Child of Zahn House will provide as she
was commanded. Further, I leave you in the capable hands of the
Centaurii Senate and It's new Commander. In my travel to this
new world, I have asked my child to build a robotic work force
to build a city so that when I come to land, We will have a home
there. In time after settling this twin world, we will return
and many of Oahs Noble families will enjoy travel there. My
child will send the one ascendant being from her house with me,
her Daughter Rianna. As Oahn Law has defined I do under articles
of protection of the Lioness. I will see this twin planet now.
Fare thee well, Oah."
The broadcast cuts off access Amadoras Apothis Unit stops
glowing, settling down and hovering next to the Lioness.
Elizabeth watches and taps a message to her own Apothis Unit
"Command my Mothers Apothis Unit to take control of her fleets
network the moment they leave Oahn orbit."
Apothis responds with one word
"Compliance"
With her voice heard by the elders and her family, Amadora
boards her transport. Ellie and Rianna walk hand in hand towards
the transport that brought Amadora. She looks about and to her
mother.
"I can hear your mind."
Ellie thinks harder so that her daughter can hear, but no other
can,
("Don't let my Mother know you can hear thoughts or see great
distances. I'll bring you back as soon as your brothers and
sisters are reborn. It will be a few days but I'll find you.")
Through the walk and as the world watched, Ellie never spoke a
word but to her and her daughter Rianna, they've spoken volumes.
Rianna replies to her mother's thoughts, "Yes Mother."
Amadora waves to Rianna as one of the Soldiers accompanying them
to the transport walks down a ramp and grasps Riri by her arm.
He walks hurriedly towards Amadora who ignores her presence
altogether as the soldier and Riri rush past. Amadora smiles at
Sanna and never once makes eye contact with Elizabeth, who
simply looks down.
After all this time, building and forming the Amazon Academies,
the Centaurii Academies, the ships she's built access
technological advancements she's made for her world, her own
Mother ignores her and never once bothered to learn the science
behind the technology Elizabeth and her Husband created.
It was perfect. The House Guard and Elizabeth along with her
Husband Bo-Shawn watch the transport leave. Smaller and smaller
until Ellie is certain they're gone. She turns her attention to
Sanna who smiles looking at her and speaks softly
"What a wonderful turn of events Elizabeth. You are now my
subordinate and I command. Isn't that delightful?"
Ellie balls her fists waving to her husband.
Bo-Shawn immediately signals the House Guard as they surround
Sanna as her smile vanishes, replaced instantly by confusion.
Ellie smiles, Looking to the Romajii Commander at her Husband's
side, Elizar Macbeth,
"This woman has broken Amazon law, I'm going to arrest her. See
to it that she doesn't leave this common room, I will return
soon."
The Centaurii Captain obeys as his soldiers quickly raise arms
at Sanna. She still looks confused and glares at Ellie. As
Elizabeth walks for the Dining Hall, she spots the frail girl
with fire red hair, Theodora. She approaches her gently seating
next to her.
"Are you proud to be an Oahn beloved?"
The little girl looks up in wonder having heard all of the
amazing tales of Amazon warriors such as Ellie.
"Oh yes oh yes Lady Amadeus, I am!"
Ellie smiles and gracefully speaks to the girl
"Wonderful fairchild, and what would you do if someone in your
house betrayed the Amazon way?"
The little girl frowns at the words knotting her brow in retort
"As Lady Amadeus says, treason has no place in the Amazon Way. I
would tell you oh so quickly dear lady, yes."
Elizabeth again smiles standing then speaking,
"Apothis, broadcast planet wide please. Relay holographic
interface so all of Oah can see."
Apothis carries out is command instantly, as every city and home
on Oah suddenly displays the image if Elizabeth Amadeus walking
and speaking.
"Dearest child, there is a traitor in your house. Would you like
to see this person?"
Theodora jumps from her seat and takes Ellie by her hand.
Exclaiming her disbelief
"In my house? A member of my family?"
Her soft voice filling the halls of ZahnHome as her image
displays, then Ellie's.
"Yes beloved. I will take you to this traitor myself."
Every eye watching, Ellie walks the girl into the common room of
her home, facing Sanna. As Ellie gracefully walks, she holds
Theodora's hand up, as if to let anyone watching know, Theodora
can leave her hand at anytime. Though, throughout the walk,
Theodora never releases her grip and sights her Mother, Sanna
surrounded by House Guards.
Theodora tugs at Elizabeth's hand,
"Is that the traitor Lady Amadeus?"
Ellie looks down to the girl and nods. Theodora looks away from
her Mother. Elizabeth looks at Sanna and freezes with Theodora
in hand addressing everyone watching,
"This Soldier, is no soldier. She is not an Ascendant being and
has no right to command the Amazon."
Sanna moves forward, heading for Ellie but is cut off quickly by
Athena, Ellie's daughter, who has no problem aiming a gun at her
head. Sanna withdraws looking down as Elizabeth addresses her
now,
"You never trained to be an Amazon. You never ascended nor have
you graduated from Amazon Academy. Your title is not earned, you
have betrayed the Amazon Angelus way. You are in defiance of the
Law, what say you?"
Sanna looks up at Ellie,
"I was granted this title by the Lioness.."
Ellie stops her mid sentence
"My Mother is gone! She's not coming back! Ever! You will never
see command here or anywhere else! I'll never be your
subordinate."
She levels off and raises Theodora's hand with her own. The two
turn away and walk as Elizabeth orders Athena, her daughter,
"Execute the traitor. Once you have, remove Sanna's corpse from
my home. I have a transport outside awaiting. Pilot it to the
Tithus moon and leave her body there. Far away from us."
Athena whispers under her breath
"It will be done Mother."
Sanna looks on in disbelief as her own daughter walks away
holding hands with Ellie. She never looks back. Sanna's eyes
well up as Athena stands before her blocking her view of
Theodora. She drops to her knees as Atty tells her,
"Don't worry, my Mother will train her to be the Amazon you
never could be."
She takes aim at Sanna's, forehead and fires off one round
watching the shell fly through her skull, entering and exiting
through causing Sanna's, hair to raise from the back due the
force exerted.
Sanna drops dead as her lifeless eyes cast a gaze out to the
beyond. Athena carries out her order as Apollo carries the body
behind her.
Meanwhile, Ellie summons her daughter Dianna and informs her
"The children will awaken soon and their wounds inflicted will
heal, when that happens we will prepare for their rebirth."
Dianna asks her Mother
"What about Grandmother? Amadora will surely return upon
discovering her friends death?"
Ellie smiles and places her hand upon her daughters shoulder,
"You don't understand. She can't come back. I designed those
ships to break down after one venture. Their power supply will
diminish to nothing the moment they arrive at the twin planet.
The planet itself will die as soon as the farthest sun goes
supernova. One half of the twin planet will be destroyed. My
mother can never return as the gate I designed is controlled
solely by me. From here. I've doomed her to remain on a lifeless
rock for all her days because she never took the time to learn
about mechanics, technology or science. She took her powers for
granted assuming I'd be loyal to her forever. But I didn't
betray her, she betrayed Oah. She allowed laws to be written
that she herself broke with.
I must go to Mount Zahadume and bring Rianna home. I'll be back
before the children are reborn."
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