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#Post#: 404249--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Adrani
Date: February 1, 2016, 8:37 pm
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I understood what was Raidon was saying and he was right . It
was bad enough I had a target on my back. It was best for me to
try to at least lay low for the rest of the day until ....
Another genin said something to me . He wanted me to move from
the bench. Clearly if he waited just a couple seconds he would
of seen that A there where more open benches and B my twin
brother already dispose of the clone . Insults to him always
went into one ear and out the other . A person could never hurt
me with insults but... Talking about a sensitive subject like my
clan getting back on there feet hit a nerve I didn't like . Yes
, I am a sloth I won't denie that but the little pride I do have
does come in play when someone say things like that about my
clan
In a flash I stood toe to toe with the fellow genin with my eyes
close . I was trying to reframe from being rude but also make a
point . Please reframe yourself from saying such harsh things
like that about my clan. It is very sensitive to me and I would
like you to stop please . My demeanor wasn't sluggish no more ,
it was firm .
Slowly I started to open my eyes towards the genin and if we
meet eye contact he would see why I ask him to watch his words
towards my clan .
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Demonreach
Date: February 1, 2016, 9:46 pm
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A smile tugged at the corners of his lips.
He almost hadn't thought it'd be this easy.
Ryukyu's preferred jutsu was genjutsu; as such, he has many ways
of activating his genjutsu.
For example, the gesture towards the sleeping man hid the hand
signs; the next thing, eye contact.
The Uchiha, while angry and obviously a capable fighter, was
just as susceptible to genjutsu; well, anyone was, really. And
Ryukyu had years of practice and experience.
As soon as the two genin made eye contact, the jutsu was
activated.
With this particular genjutsu, Ryukyu's Hazy Genjutsu technique,
it casts an illusion on the enemy that blurs the target's vision
of the entire area. In addition, it makes it seem the victim is
standing in quicksand, which would immobilize them, though
Ryukyu didn't go so far as to do that.
Though, this happened within a second of the two meeting eyes,
Ryukyu bowed his head in an apology despite the fact the Uchiha
wouldn't see it, 'I apologize. It was my mistake.'
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Ember Ochoa
Date: February 1, 2016, 10:03 pm
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Kara was good at keeping Raidon from killing Gin. She just had
an aura of peace that made it difficult to stay angry. That
among many other reasons, made her easily his best friend.
"Yeah. We passed." He said calmly. He often forgot to give Gin
his proper credit. He was a lazy bastard, but he was also a very
skilled ninja.
Food sounded good. Raidon was just about to walk away when he
saw Gin land before the Cloud ninja, eyes closed. That meant
only one thing. The Cloud ninja had gotten under his skin! It
wasn't surprising, considering the way he spoke about the clan.
Raidon secretly wanted to see Gin kick his ass. But he couldn't
risk being disqualified for a personal fight.
Thankful that he never deactivated his Sharingan, Raidon forsaw
everything that was about to happen. Gin knew a few genjutsu,
but it wasn't his specialty. He was more likely to start going
in with Taijutsu right off the bat. But this kid... He was
planning to use an occular genjutsu without even having a
Sharingan! That was a rare skill indeed! But before Gin could
even open his eyes all the way, Raidon's hand landed on his
brother's shoulder, disrupting his chakra before the genjutsu
could even land. "Come on Gin." He said. "We're going to get
lunch now." Taking his brother with him, he exchanged glances
with the Cloud ninja on the way toward the door. "What''s your
name?" He asked the boy, before leaving.
Unlike Gin, Raidon specialized in genjutsu. It was unlikely
that his brother would have been caught off guard. But it was
impossible that Raidon would. What's more, there was no telling
how Gin would have reacted if he -did- get caught in a genjutsu
and was forced to break himself out. It was better not to risk
it. But he hoped one of them would get the chance to fight this
guy in the near future.
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Yuki Rin
Date: February 2, 2016, 6:32 am
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From her vantage point, Rin was able to see a lot! Teams were
leaving by the dozens as they realized they hadn't put the same
answers. Other teams seemed far more confident. The
competition was about to be drastically narrowed down.
Then something else caught her eye. A random Cloud ninja
appeared to be picking a fight with the Uchiha kid that was
sleeping! It looked like things were going to get interesting,
until the other Uchiha came and pulled him away.
Damn shame. Would have been nice to be rid of both their
teams. But oh well! She jumped down and joined Chi where she
rested. She knew her vision was disrupted. So she figured it
would be best if they went inside. "Want to get some food when
Shaide catches up? " she asked. But there was something else
she wanted to discuss too. "Listen, I have an idea..."
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: JD Draconian
Date: February 2, 2016, 9:51 am
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Shaide watched as everybody began making their way out of the
exam room making sure to not even rise from his seat till the
rest of the eager genin left the room. His eyes were forward
staring at the chalkboard, but he was watching as he always had.
Each genin that left the room either held a look of disbelief or
satisfaction it was the look of the faces that let everybody
know whether they passed or not. His eyes however stayed upon
the face of the genin that held the sharigan, an uchiha member
that seemed confident as well as annoyed maybe with one of his
teammates, he seemed strong very powerful to say the least but
of course how powerful could a genin really be. Finally Shaide
rose from his seat and made his way out of the exam room, the
last one to exit leaving him to glimpse the wide array of scenes
playing out around him. He knew where Yuki and Chi were of
course being members of his team they had already made a bond
but what really caught his eyes were the ninja over by one
bench.
A fight already and the first part of the exam had just ended
meaning that things could get ugly real quick eliminate enemies
all that fun stuff. Shaide sighed and made his way past their
little fight to where Chi and Yuki waited just as Yuki muttered
about food and having an idea. He sat on a rock just inches away
before muttering "what kind of michievious idea you have today
Yuki?" He nodded his head in the direction of the genin
gathering fingers tightening in and out the palm of his hand
before relaxing at his side. "I hope it doesnt have anything to
do with antagonizing that little dispute any further it could
get us taken from this exam and sent back home." His eyes had
slipped closed and his feet rested upon the end of the rock as
he laid back, "Just leave it be and lets go eat let them beat
the crap out of each other and get into trouble."
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: ShogoBoom
Date: February 3, 2016, 2:16 pm
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Leiko didn’t have to look around for Ryu, his chakra was enough
to lead her to him, like a map in her bones. She looks over to
Tamu, tilting her head in acknowledgement before making her way
to their other partner. He was most probably starting trouble
elsewhere, his curiosity led him astray sometimes so hopefully
it didn’t lead them out of the competition. She was competitive
yet nonchalant to it all, a paradox.
“C’mon,” she murmurs.
As they reach Ryu, one of the Uchiha brothers is pulling the
other one away, Leiko furrowing her brows before jabbing Ryu in
the ribs, playfully.
“What trouble have you been getting into now?”
Her eyes are directed to the girl with the Uchiha brothers,
looking over her form before turning back to her group. Training
with the two Uchiha's must give her somewhat of an advantage.
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Nightengales
Date: February 3, 2016, 2:16 pm
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Chi looked over to Yuki and nodded. Going inside for some food
was probably a good idea. This way they could restore energy
before having to attend the next exam. But as. She hopped off
the rock and began to walk next to Yuki back to the building
listening to Yuki's words before having a chance to respond
Shaide appeared and interrupted.
Chi really couldn't see the fight so she just looked at her two
teammates. "We probably shouldn't aggregate anything. An uchiha
is not a enemy we want to make. They can see and copy jutsu so
anything I could do they would probably catch..." Chi felt
useless at this point. Her team was kind of stuck. There was
nothing they could do at this point to help their luck in the
exams. A weaker team would be a burden. A equally matched team
could still be a burden; trying to get one elimented was even
more dangerous. "We could still hear out your idea though,
perhaps if out in the open we could figure out a way to make it
work? Or maybe it could lead to something we could all agree
with. Doesn't hurt. We have the time and it's better to discuss
all options.."
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Yuki Rin
Date: February 3, 2016, 5:14 pm
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There weren't many people who had seen Rin's face. Even so,
Shaide would know that the look she was giving him was one of
annoyance. "Why would I suggest something stupid like that?" She
asked as they made their way to one of the food shops. Once they
got their food and sat down she would continue. "What I was
going to ask was if you could teach me the Kumiai kōkei, or
even a more basic version. There's a chance they'll start the
second exam as soon as they post the results for the first one.
If they do, it will probably take place mostly at night. But if
they wait until morning, we'll have to go through the whole exam
in the daytime. If I could use it to share my sight with you, it
might lessen our disadvantage." She knew it was probably too
late. This was something they should have worked on months ago.
Even so, she felt the need to share the idea. Maybe, just maybe,
it was possible...
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Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Evil Kitty
Date: February 3, 2016, 9:31 pm
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Temas wandered through the halls after the exam: his gloved
hands buries deep into his pockets. He remained quiet; only the
sound of his black boots hitting the earth under him emanating
from him. His hair covered his right eye. His left eye remained
focused down upon the floor in a sort of... Saddened glance. He
was tired; bored with the exams already. One simple question?
What was that? Even the most basic of teams would have already
discussed who the official leader of the group would be. It's a
simple concept. Though, he did not take the time to mingle with
his squad afterwards. He knew they were going to pass. Their
lead role was far too self explanatory: Akito. Rikona and
himself may have been older, but, they were not quite as
powerful. Both having their flaws. Especially himself. He rarely
was accepted to do simple transport missions... His other side
often taking over on missions. Causing the deep, insatiable,
hunger...
The very thought of his other side caused a smirk to cross over
his lips. One could argue he loved the other side more so than
himself. It satisfied the boredom he hated so. He passed many on
his way through the halls. The girls pretty, but, seemed
entirely too gentle. The boy's all seemed to think they all knew
what they had to. Of course the Uchihas... Despite their skill
they had one major flaw... Heritage. Their pride as a family
would be their self destruction. His voice finally slipping out
as he exits the building; sitting in the snow with his back
pressed against the wall. "Let the games begin..."
#Post#: 404350--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Land of Iron
DIR By: Adrani
Date: February 3, 2016, 9:36 pm
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For that second I didn't know what really came over me . People
never really get under my skin the way this genin did. Usually
I'm just annoyed and I just walk away from. It but for some
reason I couldn't . At that moment I really wanted to do
something out my character .
In that same moment Raidon tap my shoulder. That all it really
took for me to grasp my character. His Genjutsu was strong . I
didn't specialize in Genjutsu but I knew how to escape them or
revert them . On the other hand , Raidon could see them as plain
as day .
" my bad Raidon "
It was rare I apologize for anything I did . Normally I didn't
care or was just to lazy to care . But this bother me . Then I
had to relize even though I didn't was to be here doesn't mean
Raidon and kera didn't . I until the team part of these exams
where over I would give it some effort .
"Ok let's get some food "
After that little misunderstanding I feel like I just placed a
target on my whole teams back instead just on myself
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