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       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Ember Ochoa Date: January 29, 2016, 6:57 pm
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       "I'm going to kill him..." Raidon mumbled under his breath as
       the teacher threw the kunai at his sleeping brother. The blast
       was enough to blow Raidon's hair back even way in the back of
       the room! What a pain... Ginma always seemed to do whatever was
       least convenient for Raidon. He would be the ideal training
       partner, but instead he chose to sleep all day and train alone.
       He barely made it on time to every function. He never gave an
       opinion about anything. It was almost like he intentionally made
       life harder....
       With a grimace, Raidon awaited the exam. When it landed on his
       desk, he wasn't nervous. He had studied hard for the written
       portion, just as he had trained for the field exam. he was sure
       he could pass the test. But when he turned the exam over, he
       practically lept for joy! He couldn't have asked for an easier
       test! All he had to do was match answers with his teammates!
       He closed his eyes for a moment, and when he opened them once
       more, they had taken the form of his sharingan. It wasn't fully
       matured yet, but it was still plenty effective. The red orbs
       could see the nervous twitches in all the genin around him. They
       were frustrated. None of them knew how to make sure their
       answers matched their teammates! But Raidon did. He placed his
       pencil on the paper and settled his eyes on Kara's hand. He
       couldn't see her paper, but he didn't have to. From the way her
       muscles moved, it was easy to copy whatever she wrote,
       practically at the same time as her!
       He smiled when he saw that she had written his name on the
       paper. He knew she was only making the logical choice, but even
       so, it felt good in a way that he didn't want to admit. Of
       course, there was still hoping that Gin went along with it. Gin
       liked to pretend he hadn't awakened his sharingan. Raidon knew
       that wasn't true. He didn't know what his brother's Sharingan
       looked like, but he knew he had it. Now he just had to hope he
       was smart enough to use it...
       #Post#: 404031--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Demonreach Date: January 29, 2016, 8:40 pm
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       Ryukyu was sitting off center of the middle row, his eyes
       distant and lost; he had enjoyed the walk here, the journey was
       rather enlightening, in his opinion. He knew Leiko enjoyed it,
       being in the heat was one thing that annoyed.
       It was an odd thing, he thought. He often wondered why that was
       but strove to keep his thoughts to himself. The Uchiha kid was
       rather... curious and a small smile tugged at his lips; a lazy
       mind was amazingly susceptible. But Ryukyu knew better than to
       discount the sloth of a man.
       His cocked to the side as he got the paper. A singular question?
       He stared at the instructor oddly, his face screwed in a
       question; well, questions. How was this any kind of test? He
       felt almost... cheated but didn't say anything, or complain,
       lest he bring his team, and himself, any kind of attention.
       Although, the idea was rather pleasant to consider; Tamui might
       not be pleased, though it'd mostly be because Leiko wasn't keen
       on his antics.
       'Bah!' He murmured to himself, shaking his head.
       A leader was one who inspired and, to be honest, he didn't
       inspire anyone; Leiko only really inspired Tamui and Tamui...
       There was no hope for that kid. That was wrong to say.
       The three of them worked in tandem, often reading each other
       without speaking; they all gave something to the team, and there
       were times one of them was better to lead than the other two.
       His grandfather inspired the young genin, but he was no leader.
       He wrote his Raikage's name down after several more minutes of
       contemplating a few other people; but none stood out, not nearly
       as much as the Kage. Flipping the paper over, he stared at the
       sleepy Uchiha and pondered if he could get away with a simple
       genjutsu. Something that would mess with the words on his paper;
       or even the paper itself.
       He frowned, disappointed in himself. Why not do it to everyone?
       Only his teammates and perhaps the instructor would know it was
       him, and even then, the instructor might not even realize it
       until someone said something. It would serve the sleeping Uchiha
       right, for falling asleep during watch would mean death. A
       small... lesson to be learned.
       Perhaps later on, when the consequences wouldn't be so...
       severe.
       #Post#: 404035--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Adrani Date: January 29, 2016, 9:32 pm
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       All I wanted to do was to sleep, was that really that hard to
       ask. The last thing I wanted was attention. Why couldn't people
       just accept me as I was "lazy" . Honestly I didn't know he was
       the proctor, I though he was a genin just like everyone one else
       in here . If I knew I most likely would have... Then again ,
       running takes energy and I be more tired then what I was right
       now.
       This was the second time today I fell into a good sleep and
       someone interrupted it . The Kunai hit my decks and
       automatically I jumped back . A seal was on it but rules said
       that the proctor could not kill the genin unless they attack
       first and it was out of self defense. Well I didn't attack him
       so I was still within the rules. Instead of avoiding the blast
       which would take quick reflexes but instead I suffer the
       consequences of it . It blew me out my chair and on my face . I
       wish it was strong enough to know me out cold then I would get
       some good sleep .
       After the smoke cleared I straighten up my decks and sat back
       down waiting on my paper . The proctor gave me the sheet of
       paper with a death stare on the side . I wonder if that was the
       stare he gave his opponents before he killed them ? I didn't
       even bother looking up because there was someone with a death
       stare worst then him right now .. "My brother" I could feel his
       eyes burning into my scalp . Even in this cold tundra of a room
       it still burned
       The question on the paper ask who was the leader of our squad. I
       took a deep breath of sigh and wrote down my answer "Raidon "
       afterwards i stared at the ceiling day dream about the awesome
       sleep I was going to get after the first part of the exam was
       over
       #Post#: 404095--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Nightengales Date: January 30, 2016, 11:17 pm
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       Chiharu looked around the room as everyone finished coming in,
       the room was full now and the proctor already found a student
       they didn't like. This could be a good thing, he would be paying
       attention to him more so then her team. She left out a sigh of
       relief, even as a kunai was sent across the room at the boy. As
       long as she knew it wasn't her team who set him off.
       As the test reached her table and she was finally able to read
       it she was shocked. One question?! And it was such an easy one!
       Well maybe just for her squad but she had better make sure; they
       could argue it later if what was written was a problem. Chi
       began to write very clearly so when she would project it to her
       teammates, whom of which she already scoped out and memorized
       their seats, they would be able to read it quickly since her
       special genjutsu would only last about five seconds.
       She sat her pencil down and ran her hand through her blonde hair
       making it look as if she was trying to think of what to put
       down, carefully watching the proctors. She began to rub her eye
       with her left hand, focusing on Rin and Shaide's positions.
       Carefully she focused and silently casted her Kyōyū
       saito, or shared vision. This would allow her teammates vision
       in their left eye to only see what she sees like they had double
       vision. She removed her hand from her left eye and looked down
       at her paper and on it read, Ryoga-Sensei. She then picked the
       paper up and flipped it over with a sigh, in her mind she hoped
       to her self that they seen it with no complications. Highly
       unlikely since genjutsu was her specialty but this was a crowded
       room with a lot of other trying to use jutsu to cheat. Good
       thing she practiced the jutsu before with them so they would be
       prepared.
       Chiharu now sat awaiting other's to finish or for the proctors
       to say something. She rubbed her eye again this time just
       because a tad ray of sunlight came in through the window and
       caught her face. As it passed she stopped rubbing her eye and
       wiped away the water. If anything caught her off guard it was
       always the sun. Good thing though, the proctors will now
       probably just think she had allergies in her eyes or something.
       #Post#: 404096--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Yuki Rin Date: January 31, 2016, 7:18 am
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       Rin heard what the boy next to her said under his breath after
       the incident with the sleeping Uchiha boy. They must have been
       team mates. She couldn't say she blamed him. She could only
       imagine what she'd do if one of her team mates drew attention to
       themselves like that! She also noted how, short of his hair
       being blown back, the boy didn't so much as flinch when the
       explosive went off. She decided that her initial judgement of
       him may have been preemptive.
       When she turned the test over, Rin made no movements. She simply
       waited. And she didn't have to wait long. When Chi's genjutsu
       set in, Rin smiled beneath her mask; Not just because she knew
       her team had passed the first test, but because it was clear
       that Chi understood the dynamics of the test. Surely several of
       the teams in the room were panicking right now, trying to decide
       whether to put their own names, or one of their teammates. It
       was something that could not only cause them to fail the exam,
       but break down their team work in the long run.
       In reality, everyone could have put "Santa Claus" on their
       exams. As long as their teammates put the same, they were in the
       clear! But the exam didn't clearly explain that. It was
       something you had to figure out on your own. Rin was proud of
       her team mates. They weren't bothered by being trapped inside
       the box. Rin wrote Chi's answer, "Ryoga Sensei,"and turned her
       paper over.
       It was at that moment that she saw the boy next to her writing
       just as calmly as she had. A glance out of the corner of her eye
       and she saw it! A Sharingan! There were TWO Uchiha here? And
       they were on the same team!? That hardly seemed fair! Of course,
       one of them seemed to be a slacker. But that could all be some
       sort of act. She would have to keep an eye out for this team.
       But she was already wishing desperately that her teammates had
       let her find them some allies...
       #Post#: 404101--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: ShogoBoom Date: January 31, 2016, 7:51 am
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       Leiko stares ahead, dark eyes watching the wall as if it was the
       most interesting thing there. She was a reserved individual and
       wasn’t in the slightest, interested in her surroundings. The
       Uchiha brother who was sleeping, the proctor who played with
       him, evidently annoyed at his nonchalant behaviour at an exam,
       didn’t deter her gaze.
       When the paper is placed on her table and she turns it to find
       one single question, a slight smirk plays on her lips. Who is
       the leader of your squad? The girl could almost feel Tamu’s
       slight panic when he first flips it over to see the question.
       C’mon Tamu. It was easy, neither of the three were leaders, they
       all dominated in their own realm of powers. On some missions,
       Ryu took the lead, on others, Tamu.
       The leader -though he wasn’t part of the squad- was Raikage.
       He was the one they answered to, and the smartest choice. As she
       skims over and scribbles her answer down, she comes across the
       second written thing. If all three members of the squad don’t
       have the same answer, it would lead to disqualification. Her jaw
       tightens before she activates her sensor. She uses it, embodying
       almost, Tamu and Ryu’s pen, to make sure they were all on the
       right track. It took a considerable amount of concentration but
       this was a technique she had mastered.
       Her happiness doesn’t register on her face when she notices
       their answers are identical.
       She simply continues to look ahead.
       Now, now.
       The voice in her head was prominent, only to her.
       Wouldn't it be fun to see what everyone else wrote?
       #Post#: 404113--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: JD Draconian Date: January 31, 2016, 1:51 pm
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       Shaide sighed as he stared down at the paper, one question, one
       simple question that had to match what was written upon the
       paper of his teammates. The scene that had played out between
       the proctor and the young sleeping boy all but forgotten as
       people shook in frustration, sweat gliding down some of their
       forehead in nervousness, and others just locked up not knowing
       how to use their jutsu to their disposal. Shaide however waited
       patiently each second ticking away slowly closer to the time for
       the test to end. Soon however his eyes were looking at Chi's
       answer, knowing that all of their teammates would have the same
       answer he jotted down Ryoga and flipped the paper around before
       scanning the room. There were many people here that probably
       were stronger than they acted like the sleeping boy, and then
       the boy that sat next to his teammate. Shaide was about to turn
       away from the boy until his eyes saw the red and black sharigan
       in his. An uchiha taking place this year and he was going to be
       the genin that most will want to knock out of the exam. Either
       way things just got very interesting and this exam will be one
       of the best yet.
       #Post#: 404117--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Raijuta Date: January 31, 2016, 2:38 pm
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       While the genin worked on their exams,  the higher ups were
       watching them on a monitor.  They observed how some of the
       examinees panicked,  woke others worked together to solve the
       problem.  Others seemed to instinctively trust each others
       judgement.  The group as a whole wasn't very impressive.  But
       there were a few who stood out.
       While the higher ups discussed these things,  the Hokage, and a
       Samurai of the Land of Iron discussed one genin in particular.
       After checking her information,  it was certain.  They would be
       watching that one...
       #Post#: 404118--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Raijuta Date: January 31, 2016, 2:44 pm
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       (At this point,  the proctor collected all the exams and
       dismissed the examinees.  You have until the results are posted
       to  mingle amongst each other)
       #Post#: 404122--------------------------------------------------
       Re: The Land of Iron
       By: Yuki Rin Date: January 31, 2016, 3:19 pm
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       Being close to the back of the room,  Rin was one of the first
       to exit the exam room when they were dismissed.  She returned to
       the training area where she and her team had waited previously.
       Chi and Shaide wouldsurely return there as well.  But instead of
       waiting by the training dummies,  she positioned herself atop a
       high beam and watched the genin leaving the first exam.  She was
       watching their expressions.  The first thing the teams would do
       upon exit would be to discuss their answers with each other.
       Everyone would know whether or not they passed the exam long
       before the results were posted.  Rin was watching for
       expressions of triumph or defeat.  They would tell her who her
       opponents would be in the coming rounds.
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