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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Lexi Jackson
Date: March 10, 2013, 3:54 pm
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"Red...", a soft murmur heard in the disturbed mind of a scarred
and depressed young girl. The voice began to repeat like a
broken record as small beads of sweat began to caress her
forehead, every inch of her body slowly beginning to twitch
until eventually the girl jumped to her feet. Red blinked a few
times, her long curled eyelashes beating against her precious
face as she stared blankly into the darkness that surrounded
her. "What the...", her voice held a slight croak and she let
out a quick cough before brushing some of her hair from one of
her pale, creamy cheeks that held a soft tint of red, her short
muddy nails tracing over her soft skin as she dusted herself
off. Wasn't she just hit by a car? Where was the intense pain?
A light glow began to grow from the corner of her eye, spinning
on her bare heels, Red quickly searched the area, a sudden snap
coming from beneath her feet that led her to believe she was in
the forest across from her family home. Nope. Nothing. "Red..."
There it was again. The voice. It was definitely a woman. Was
her deranged mother calling out to her? It didn't sound like
her, and the voice was so close...almost in her ear. "Create me
as you will, Red.", the child arched a brow, complete and utter
confusion plastered across her façade. Just another weird
occurrence to go with everything else that had happened in a
space of minutes, maybe Red needed to actually picture a person
in her mind, that could explain why the light had appeared as
soon as she had thought of it, or better yet, needed it.
"Okay...ummm, here goes", Red shrugged as she tightly closed her
eyes, returning to the darkness as she attempted to match a body
with the voice she had heard. Obviously a lady. As the child
stood in the black, she became completely oblivious to her
thoughts becoming a reality while her eyes stayed shut. First
came the skeleton, short in stature, then the organs...lungs,
kidneys, intestines and a stomach, the beating heart fading into
place before it was encased in tendons, muscle fibres and
eventually the skin. The voice sounded like that of a pretty
lady, so that was what she was to become. Long, free flowing
blonde hair, bright blue pools that could entice anyone and a
slender frame hidden beneath a sequin shirt and red pants. Why a
black and red theme, Red didn't know...it just sounded like the
perfect combination. "Done! Are you alive, miss? Could you point
me in the right direction? I seem to be lost.", she whispered,
just in case the voice remained in her head, gently allowing her
eyes to open to learn whether she now had company or not.
#Post#: 328419--------------------------------------------------
Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Truth
Date: March 10, 2013, 6:01 pm
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Two beautiful children trapped in a world with so much to do,
two beautiful children whose life made them so blue. Two
beautiful children doing something only they can do. The world
was their plaything, with them this place will become much more
than anyone could dream it to be. I will see what they bring to
this world where nothing is as it should be, and everything is
as it shouldn't
"That's beautiful craftmanship Red, I don't believe I've ever
seen it's equal" the brown rabbit spoke soft encouraging words
into the ears of Red. Despite not actually existing this rabbit
had plans for Red. Grand plans to make the child whose life he
had destroyed become everything the child would desire. She
would have a grand castle, which a big garden of such beauty
that it would make all other people jealous.
"Good job Porcelain, please don't stress yourself too much over
details. Just imagine what you want, then let yourself have it."
the white rabbit was quite concerned over the child. She seemed
to be unable to understand just what power she had. Which was a
good thing, but he didn't want her to get hurt. He believed that
she was already more hurt than she deserved to be and it was all
his fault.
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: MissHatter
Date: March 10, 2013, 10:51 pm
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Feeling the velvet of pants, the voice was suddenly in awe.
Feel? Bringing her hands in front of her eyes, the voice could
not help but grin at how wonderful it was to have them. Using
these new found appendages, she ran them along her wildly
untamed platinum hair. She was a woman, as she had always
suspected. Being a thought, it was hard to recognize what gender
you were. Giggling wildly, she watched as the child opened her
eyes and asked her of directions. “Hmm....I am about as lost as
you are. Physically....Mentally.” Covering her mouth to suffice
another burst of laughter, she looks to the child again, trying
to compose herself.
Crossing a leg over the other, she seemed to be floating, her
shoulders raising up into a shrug. Looking left and right, the
blonde rose more and more until her legs were where her head
ought to be, and her head where her feet should have been. “As
far as I can gather, only you know which way to go because it is
in fact your creation. You are the maker of this world, are you
not? Of course, I could be wrong....I shall think about it.”
Pulling a tea cup and pot of piping hot rose flavored tea from
her pocket, she sighed and tipped the spout, the warm colored
liquid spilling onto the ground 'above' her head. Not taking
notice, the female brought the empty cup to her lips and sipped
loudly, contemplating. “Hmm...”
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Gazini
Date: March 11, 2013, 7:49 am
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He appears just as she imagined him. He stood in front of her
with his big green eyes staring straight into hers, smiling
almost just by looking at her. His eyes quickly glanced to her
head and his eyes widened. " You don't have a hat..... I must
hat you. " He pulled out a measuring tape out from his sleeve
and wrapped it around her had. " I can hat this head in no
time." He would laugh awkwardly and step back. Waiting for the
right moment to speak. He would almost bounce after taking a
breathe and beginning to speak again. " Oh my name is Hatter," A
quick eye twitch and silence, " Mad hatter to be exact." He
would laugh again and go to sit on a nearby tree stump. " What
brings you here to wonderland?"
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Sabby
Date: March 11, 2013, 5:34 pm
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"Well... Being dead, I guess. I mean, I did get hit by a
semi-truck." She had never sounded so deadpan anywhere but her
mind, but she assumed since this seemed to be her mind,
exceptions could be made. Still, he was kind. A smile slipped
through, and she grinned shyly. "That's a very.. Interesting
name, Hatter. What's being mad like? Sometimes I think it would
be so much better if more people were just plain mad." Porcelain
continued wondering these things silently as he slipped a
measuring tape around her head. What kind of hat would she get?
She owned many hats at home, but she had never picked them out
or liked any of them. Maybe this time would be different.
Looking into the Hatter's eyes as he worked, she smiled. What a
crazy, wonderful person he must be. If he was living in her
head, was he part of her? Or a different person? There were so
many things to figure out. But firstly, "What is wonderland,"
she asked.
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Lexi Jackson
Date: March 11, 2013, 5:52 pm
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What on earth was going on? Had Red really just tried to create
a life just by picturing the process in her mind?...Wow, she
really was becoming mad. With a swift shake of her head, she
gently began to open her eyes, fingers crossed behind her back
in the hope that this was all just a strange, a very strange
dream as a result of the car accident. “I must have hit my head
or something. This is so...dark and crazy that it’s almost
perfect” her voice remained monotone, not an ounce of emotion
was going to pass her lips until everything had been explained
to the little girl stuck in a dream. But her voice wouldn’t be
required at the moment to express herself, her eyes portrayed
the shock deep in her gut with ease as she saw a perfect copy of
the ‘drawing’ she’d thought up just moments before.
Letting out a quiet gasp, Red found herself taking a step
towards the being, creature, human, she couldn’t tell after all
that had happened, maybe she’d just created a mystical dragon
trapped within the body of a young woman…who was she to argue
against the possibility. It could happen here, wherever here
was. “So you are lost too…this is mad”. Red remained calm for
the time being, although she could feel the anger within her
building up at a steady pace, the true red that constantly
fought for power, she knew it would have its day, but today did
not feel right. The slave girl slowly encircled the strange
creation, her gaze never wandering away whilst she listened
intently to every word she spoke. A question. Speak Red, speak!
No…think about the answer first!... “Hmmm, yes. Yes I am the
creator of this world, I created you didn’t I? It’s only
plausible. Does this mean I may do as I please?” she was in an
inquisitive mood suddenly, intrigued by the idea. She could
finally control everything that happened. Be a ruler. The queen
she knew was deserved. “Hang on….what do I call you?”, her head
tilted slowly, watching in awe as the woman rose in the air,
casually drinking from an empty cup. How odd.
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Gazini
Date: March 11, 2013, 6:05 pm
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" Are you dead?" He looked to himself in a puddle and bent his
head backwards like he was in disgust." Don't we look great for
being dead then. I didn't know you had a fake heart beat when
you died." He laughed as his eyes went wide as he twirled
quickly towards the queen. He rested his ear on her breasts and
listening closely ." I don't think we are dead since we both
have a heart beat. But what do I know? " He lifted himself up
straight, pulled up his hat and scratched his head. " I am as
crazy as two monkeys on a basketball." He slapped his knee and
snorted. His hat falling back perfectly on his head. He looked
up and smiled. " what is wonderland? What is this place?"
He paused for a moment and stood very still. Not moving even for
breathing. It was almost like he would be frozen. Within a
breaking moments notice, he would snap back into reality and
jump. " OH I KNOW!!!" He sounding very excited, " Wonderland is
everything it shouldn't be, but is what it should be." He looked
as if he knew exactly what it meant, even if the idea was wrong
or right. He smiled and looked to her head again. " Oh yes your
hat.... I won't take long on making that. It won't be a bat, and
you can sit on this mat, while I am making your hat." He pulled
out a tea cup and sat down on the mat, pulling a tea kettle out
of his hat and began to pour some tea. " You want some?"
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: MissHatter
Date: March 11, 2013, 7:26 pm
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The woman remained upside down, her ginormous eyes watching as
the child circled her like she were predator prepared to jump on
it's prey. “Hmm, you can call me Matilda, or Tilly for short. I
am a hatter. A lady hatter at that.” Not entirely sure where all
of this information had come from, Tilly shrugged it off as
Red's subconscious building up a background for her. This child
had much muchness to her. Giving her an impossibly large grin,
Tilly's body began to rotate clockwise until her feet were back
on the ground. “I suppose we are both lost. Of course, if you
are in fact creator of the creative world of your creating,
think of what you want there to be.” Teacup still in hand, Tilly
smiled and closed her eyes, whispering her own lyrics to Twinkle
Twinkle. “Twinkle, twinkle, little bat. How I wonder what you're
at. Up above the World so high, like a tea tray in the sky..”
Swinging the cup to the tune, she giggles wildly and lets loose
of the handle, watching as the porcelain crashed into a tree and
fell to pieces.
“This is no doubt a Wonderland, Red.”
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Truth
Date: March 11, 2013, 9:06 pm
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Four of the craziest creatures in all of anything were now
conversing. Red and The Lady Hatter, Porcelain and the Mad
Hatter. What could possibly make these four ever come to be? Why
nothing more than a desire to make everything as it shouldn't
be. Creatures of madness, and creatures that really shouldn't be
there at all. Of all the creatures within wonderland there were
two more integral than all the others. The Two Queens of
Madness. Each ignorant of the other and yet cannot exist with
the other. This tale is just beginning and will become more and
more crazy as the two Queens continue to create their
Wonderland, with the Hatters at their side. Truly anything is
possible
Well isn't that quite a beginning to this tale. Let's hope the
ending is just as interesting, but for now I believe I shall
keep writing. After all I am rather good at writing and this
story has to be told or so that's what I keep telling myself.
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Re: This Isn't Wonderland *Chapter 1: Two Coma Patients*
DIR By: Lexi Jackson
Date: March 12, 2013, 11:39 am
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The lady had a name. Thank goodness for that! Red was certainly
not willing to think up a name on the spot, and that would
definitely result in her anger going into overdrive, and that
had never ended well in the past, especially since the ‘other
Red’ didn’t care if someone was to be harmed in the process.
“Tilly huh?” she muttered, twiddling her fingers in front of her
face as her feet continued to carry her around the woman, her
eyes seemed to pick up on every miniscule movement that she
made, as if she was waiting for that one twitch or throw of a
fist. Red had certainly picked up eyesight like that of a hawk
after the past few years she’d spent under the thumb of her
family, she’d grown to learn when the next punishment was coming
and which attack they’d use to start it, it was always what
helped her to get away…or even counter when she felt brave.
“Well…you certainly seem mad as a hatter”
Red eventually let out a soft chuckle, fingers coming to a halt
as they dropped to rest upon her hips, taking a sudden step back
when the woman’s porcelain cup shattered into pieces against a
tree that seemed to appear out of nowhere. So that explains the
stick snapping under her foot earlier! Red thought she had
awoken in the forest opposite the house, so imagined the
characteristics of it. Yes, that was it! “A wonderland…hmm”, Red
crossed one leg behind the other, gently biting into her bottom
lip to think a little more, letting out a quiet humming sound.
“My wonderland?”
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