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Re: Edenia
By: Jackie Date: June 4, 2012, 8:55 pm
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Azaria smiled at Serenity, seeing as she caught onto the fact
that she was asking her the question if she would turn into a
dragon too. Listening, she nodded her head, pacing her hand
against Ryder's scales as he was turning his attention to Amaya
as she spoke of not fully being a dragon, but having stages.
Azaria smiled at Serenity seeing how she was acting to Amaya.
She turned toward Ryder and he looked down at her with a small
smile before he turned his attention between Amaya and Serenity
before he was turning his attention back to Serenity as Azaria
asked what type of party they were going to. And the story quite
surprised him. Why would anyone want to kill the woman who
seemed pretty caring. Though, this was the first time meeting
her and he had not known how she was with other people, and
perhaps since he was new that this was how she treated them.
Either way, Ryder didn't know.
Azaria bit her lip a little bit listening to it. "Well that is
interesting." Tapping Ryder's scales, she looked down for a
moment. "At least you are alive now. It would have been tragic
to not have met you." She smiled, a soft blush coming across her
cheeks as she said it to Serenity, feeling a little teenagerish
for not being so forward...
#Post#: 199011--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: Kayis Date: June 5, 2012, 3:23 pm
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The last stop had been something entertaining at least, Now
Kayis stumbled along another place, this time a Kingdom he had
NOT seen. This actually surprised him more than it probably
should have. His eye averted downward and he looked upon the
pure radiance, of somewhere that had ben heard of in story
books. " Edenia?" He asked himself looking upon the sparkling
towers, and beautiful mysterious Kingdom. His curiosity, of
course.. became far too much...
Minutes after he had decided Kayis Landed atop one of the houses
and looked upon the people from a higher point of view. They all
lived their lives pretty peacefully, but Kayis knew that this
place had more to offer than sight seeing, and people watching.
So with a simple, smirk he nodded to himself and jumped down
into the market place.. This was where he walked over to a
market man and plucked an orange from his shack, walking away
int he next. The man called to him, and as he ignored him would
call to whatever security this place had.
Kayis a man of games chuckled at the unnecessary spectacle and
winked at the man, " all ya had to do was ask for it back ya
know?" Then he crumpled to his knees shouting to the high
heavens... "God, oh GOD my Beloved Father and Savior... Please
forgive me for I have stolen and orange, take me to my
judgement, call forth the king of this place and let him pass
judgement upon me!!!+ His show was less than believable, and
highly over done but still the crowd swarmed him as if he were
something they had never seen before. Kayis buried his head near
the dirt and pretended to cry, waiting for someone to come "
incite justice, upon him."
#Post#: 199091--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: RiloRii Date: June 5, 2012, 4:58 pm
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[center]Amaya couldn't help the light chuckle that rolled from
her massive maw, causing a red dust like cloud to pool from her
snout in an odd manner before she breathed it back in. "Ah, I
suppose you're right. Though I expect no thanks from anyone,
spoiled brats are often in my line of work. Yet I often
straighten them out." At this point, she could only listen with
that distasteful look on her face as Serenity explained what
happened. An even more bitter hatred boiled for Mary more than
before as she soon sat up a bit straighter and tenderly placed
the scaled part of her index talon beneath Serenity's jaw to
raise her gaze. "Don't you look down, missy. You've beaten out
the best and the best is death. You should stand strong,
m'dear.. Never look towards the ground, for you'll trip and
stumble.. Look towards the skies, where you can see what's
coming." That toothy smile formed her maw as she chuckled and
straightened up further, the cub Cherrie mewing in agreement to
her statement towards Serenity. Orbs danced over to Ryder and
Azaria for a moment before she could sense such a joking
spectacle that it nearly gave her the laughs. A connection with
all could be amusing at times, though it was ranged and diluted
to give her some sanity in dealing with it, she was very keen on
things. [/center]
#Post#: 199476--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: Serenity Nagase Date: June 6, 2012, 11:03 am
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"Tragic? Well, I wouldn't go too far as to say that. After
today, you'll probably go on about your life as usual. It's not
exactly a bad thing, though.." As Serenity spoke, Lumi began to
lick her hand in order to get her attention. "You are so down on
yourself, young one.." Serenity gasped and shook her head
vigorously. "I am not! It's the truth. Everyone else seems to do
it.." Before anyone could say anything else, Amaya began to
chime in; breathing her own form of 'fire' into the conversation
that Azaria seemed to have little to bring to the table. "Amaya,
I was once known as a spoiled brat. Give it time, I may revert
back to my old ways once I completely heal.." She said with a
laugh before kneeling down, which, given her short stature, she
didn't really have to. And nuzzles her face against the side of
Lumi's own like she was a giant plush toy. "Yeah, but if you
have your nose stuck too far in the air, you wouldn't be able to
see the cliff you're about to fall off of either. But, I
understand what you mean, though. " She then turned to Azaria
and shrugged, starting to feel weak again and groggy... "My
grandfather said it was for the best that it happened this way.
He knows best.." She said weakly, lowering herself against
Lumi's side and sitting on the ground. "Sorry, guys. I'm
suddenly really tired and weak.. I should have rested more.."
#Post#: 199842--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: Jezabella and Clara Date: June 6, 2012, 9:22 pm
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[center]Yawning, Clara stretched in her bed. She had always been
a sound sleeper, hardly anything could wake her up. She smiled,
and slipped her long legs over the side of her bed. Her eyes
made contact with a lonesome bed beside her own. “Mmm,
Jezabella… It’s time to get up…” She
smiled, and stood up, stretching her arms out in front of her.
Her deep violet eyes narrowed suddenly, as she didn’t hear
her sister’s sweet, tingling voice. “Jez-”
Suddenly, she jumped at the chance, and started to pat the
comforter on Jezabella’s bed. When she felt nothing, she
glanced around the room, and suddenly her voice roared from her
lips, in an angry and desperate way. “God fucking
damnit!” In her rage, she gripped the fabric on
Jezabella’s bed and ripped it off.
After her raging fit, she walked into her walk-in closet, and
pulled out a pair of leggings, sliding them on, and a mini skirt
that hung low on her hips, but wasn’t too short. She slid
off her night gown, and placed a lacy black top on. The fabric
hung low on her chest, but not much cleavage was shown. Just
enough to maybe extract attention. She then slipped on a
half-jean jacket, zipping it up almost all the way. She walked
out of her closet and went towards her full body mirror and
checked herself out. Her lips pulling into a smile. “Damn,
I look fine…” Clara was a very conceited girl.
Suddenly, she remembered something a while ago, when Jezabella
and her were taking a walk. They had run into a boy that
Jezabella seemed really into for some odd reason… What was
his name, again?
Clara lifted her fingers to her chin and then remembered. Shiro.
A low growl rumbled in her throat, and she tucked her phone into
her pocket, getting another idea. She fetched the phone back out
of her pocket, and flipped it open. She typed Jezabella’s
number, and listened to it for a moment until she heard that
little Tinkling noise of a fairy ringtone that Jezabella had,
and Clara snapped her flip-phone shut, very unhappily.
“Smart girl…” She put her phone back into her
pocket, and left the house that Jezabella and her shared. And
she set off walking, in hope to find Edenia.
Clara glared across the street from her home. Finally she looked
at her neighbor, whom owned a boat. Her hands put on her hips,
she put her flirt on. She walked over to him, while he was
working on cleaning his jeep. He heard her coming, and glanced
towards her with his eyes narrowed. “Oh looky here, the
town slut… What can I do for you, whore?” She had a
feleing he would have acted like this. “Listen, Jon, I
need your help, ever heard of Edenia?” A light shined in
his eyes, and he nodded. “Yeah, what’s it to
you?” She pointed over her shoulder towards her home.
“Not for me, for my sister…” Worry flickered
in his eyes.
“What the fuck happened, to Jezabella?!” Clara
shrugged her shoulders. “I woke up and she was gone…
Now, please, can you take me to Edenia? I think she went
there…” Jon looked a bit hesitant, but he nodded,
and bent over picking up his napkin, to wipe oil off his hands.
“Get in my boat…” Clara narrowed her eyes, but
nodded her head. She headed towards his back yard, where the
ocean was, and climbed into his big ass boat. She sat in the
little cabin and waited for him to take off. A couple minutes
later, the boat started moving slowly at first then picked up
speed. Another couple minutes, or it seemed that way, he honked
the horn, and she came out on the deck. “What?” Jon
just gave her a look, and pointed to the island they were now
at. “Welcome, to Edenia you slut…” He growled,
and moved forward. “Bring Jezabella back
safely…” she nodded, and walked off the boat, onto
the island.
After a while of walking throughout the island…
Her violet eyes glanced around, she heard a commotion and her
eyebrows arched. She walked forward until she saw a guy on his
knees. Her eyebrows now fully raised. What was he doing on his
knees? She then heard some type of crying, and rushed forward,
towards the crowd that was gaining around the man. “The
hell…?” She whispered under her breath. Her eyes
stayed trained on the man. He wasn’t here to meet new
people… She was here to find her sister, and that foul,
foul man…
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#Post#: 199894--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: Kayis Date: June 6, 2012, 11:38 pm
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Kayis had gained attention, but not.... the right attention.
even now he knew this and so he continued, pounding his fist on
the ground and crying out as if hed been mortally injured. He
was feeling quite silly, and one way or another this place would
know who he was before he left.
#Post#: 199931--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: Jezabella and Clara Date: June 7, 2012, 12:22 am
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[center]Clara watched the man continue to pound his fist on the
ground. Was he crazy, or something? She couldn’t help but laugh,
moving through the people a bit more, she stood right beside
him, and looked down at him. “Sorry to interrupt your fun, man…
But… Are you like… On crack or something?” She tilted her head,
as she heard a few giggles, and chuckles. Clara then bent down,
and placed a light hand on his shoulder. “It might be smart to
get up, and walk away… Calmly, so others don’t continue to think
you’re nutso, take a walk with me?” She tilted her head
slightly.[/center]
#Post#: 200432--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: Kayis Date: June 7, 2012, 9:45 pm
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Upon the young woman actually taking active notice of Him Kayis
raised up, dirt all over his face and the white of his hair. To
be honest he had no idea, why he was being such a child, it was
somewhat un becoming, maybe the child in him had just came forth
when he had began his adventure, after so long of being cooped
up at the Marble cliff, home lands. "No, actually I'm just a tad
fucked in the head." He said pointing his finger to his head but
raised up dusting the dust from the white of his Haori. "I joke
of course, I just wanted the attention of the lord of this
place, and I was curious as to what type of place this was." He
took the moment to glance at all of the others still staring and
then pulled her as well into the spot light, he took her hand in
his and bowed kneeling. "Kayis The First knight of the Darkfire
Clan." he responded making once more another spectacle he got
back to his feet, " so where we walkin?"
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Re: Edenia
By: Jezabella and Clara Date: June 8, 2012, 7:15 pm
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[center]Clara raised her eyebrows at the man, a light chuckle
slipping her lips. “A tad? Sweetie, I think you have
exceeded that amount…” She gave him a odd look when
she watched him go down on his knees. Oh lord… Her hand
clasped his, and she shook her head. “Nice to meet you,
Kayis. My name is Clara… Clara the girl who deals with
fuck heads, and people who are clearly lunatic, especially my
twin…” Anger rolled in her eyes at the mention of
Jezabella. “Stupid girl…” She had no idea
where she was at in the place called Edenia…
“Well… Uhhh… We could take a walk in the
woods…? Maybe, depends on where you want to
go…” She smiled, but instead of waiting for his
answer, she pulled him away from the crowd, heading towards the
foresty area.[/center]
#Post#: 200928--------------------------------------------------
Re: Edenia
By: Kayis Date: June 8, 2012, 7:23 pm
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This girl had a natural bite to her every word. In all Kayis
couldn't help but to laugh a bit as she proclaimed her own
titles. "Well I have to say, Clara, the person who deals with
fuck heads, seems like such an esteemed title indeed." He
chuckled to himself, and some of his white hair fell over his
face, the dust scattered from his robes and he got a few
glances, even now.. "Im actually pretty calm, you might be
surprised normally." His voice was a deep but inviting, lazy
tone; odd placed for the man that had just been cursing some
christian god or something. " Anyways Clara, its nice to finally
see someone has the nads to face me, I wondered just what type
of city this might be; and well it appears its a city of
judgmental cowards." he laughed again shaking his head in a way
that forced his White mask over the right eye to be revealed. "
I don't know the place so just lead the way, Ill follow and
guard your back.." he stepped back looking down in convenient
area and nodding his head, with his finger gently stroking his
chin, a playful grin played at his lips and he looked up
whistling nonchalantly.
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