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#Post#: 428--------------------------------------------------
Toxipus
DIR By: Zyphirex
Date: August 1, 2013, 8:19 pm
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Egg Group: Field/Water 1
Egg Cycles: 11
Exp. Growth: Fast
Gender Ratio: 1/1
3 Evolution Line
Plataqua (Baby) -> Friendship -> Platarrent -> Toxic Waste ->
Toxipus
Plataqua: Platypus + Aqua
Type: Water
Abilities: Adaptability / Swift Swim / Poison Touch
Pokedex Entry: TBD
Species: Platypus
Height: 1'00"
Weight: 4.1 lbs
Dex Color: Brown
Catch Rate: 190
Body Style: Pokémon consisting of a head and arms
Footprint: /
EV Yield: +1 HP, +1 Def
Base Stats:
HP: 60
Attack: 20
Defense: 40
Sp. Attack: 50
Sp. Defense: 70
Speed: 20
BST: 260
Movepool:
1 Splash
1 Growl
1 Water Gun
2 Helping Hand
3 Charm
5 Scratch
8 Bite
11 Yawn
15 Bubble
17 Rollout
21 Bubblebeam
25 Brine
30 Scald
Platorrent: Platypus + Torrent
Type: Water
Abilities: Adaptability / Swift Swim / Poison Touch
Pokedex Entry: TBD
Species: Platypus
Height: 4'00"
Weight: 94.7 lbs
Dex Color: Brown
Catch Rate: 75
Body Style: Pokémon with a quadruped body
Footprint: /
EV Yield: +1 Sp Atk, +1 Spe
HP: 60
Attack: 60
Defense: 50
Sp. Attack: 90
Sp. Defense: 70
Speed: 80
BST: 410
Movepool:
1 Growl
1 Water Gun
1 Scratch
5 Bite
7 Tail Whip
12 Bubble
17 Bubblebeam
22 Aqua Jet
27 Rain Dance
32 Take Down
37 Aqua Tail
42 Slash
47 Brine
52 Scald
57 Hydro Pump
62 Water Spout
Toxipus: Toxic + Platypus
Type: Water/Poison
Abilities: Adaptability / Swift Swim / Poison Touch
Pokedex Entry: TBD
Species: Platypus
Height: 7'00"
Weight: 155.3 lbs
Dex Color: Brown
Catch Rate: 30
Body Style: Pokémon with a quadruped body
Footprint: /
EV Yield: +1 Sp Atk, +1 Spe
HP: 70
Attack: 80
Defense: 70
Sp. Attack: 110
Sp. Defense: 80
Speed: 90
BST: 500
Movepool:
1 Growl
1 Water Gun
1 Bubblebeam
4 Aqua Jet
10 Rain Dance
15 Acid Spray
20 Hone Claws
25 Slash
30 Poison Jab
35 Scald
40 Poison Tail
45 Cross Poison
50 Toxic Spikes
55 Sludge Wave
60 Hydro Pump
65 Gunk Shot
70 Water Spout
Egg Moves:
False Swipe
Whirlpool
Crunch
Double-Edge
Dual Chop
Aqua Ring
Soak
Tail Slap
Mud Shot
Muddy Water
TMs: Unknown
#Post#: 430--------------------------------------------------
Re: Platypoison
DIR By: sadoldporygon
Date: August 1, 2013, 8:32 pm
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Ok youre running out of ideas here. Let me give you advice on
the names:
Plataqua -> Platarrent -> Toxipus
because those are some horrible names. And also an overthought
egg move list, you cant be serious; Extremespeed? Just because
its field group doesnt mean it gets ESpeed. And the movepool
itself is horribly long, also no BST 600 mons anymore. Just,
just please revise this thing. Im going to vote Negative until
you make its movepool and BST smaller. And please stop making
more Poison mammal types, the baby can be Normal-type like
Azurill.
#Post#: 435--------------------------------------------------
Re: Platypoison
DIR By: topher4167
Date: August 1, 2013, 9:43 pm
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I completely agree with Porygon, although the names aren't that
horrible. But Platypoison is too many characters. But yeah, the
600 BST is way too high, and the movepool is WAAAAY too long.
The movepool should probably end around 60-70 ish and have like
a quarter of the moves it has now. You shouldn't give it moves
every 4 levels (then 5, then 6, etc) it should be either no
pattern or like every 6 or around there, okay? And how does it
get Earthquake, or any Ground moves anyway? I mean like Mud Slap
or something is fine, but you can't have lots if powerful moves
in 3 different types, arguably not even 2. I am definitely
voting Negative unless you seriously revamp this mon.
#Post#: 438--------------------------------------------------
Re: Platypoison
DIR By: Zyphirex
Date: August 1, 2013, 10:54 pm
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it is PlatOPus. XD
#Post#: 439--------------------------------------------------
Re: Toxipus
DIR By: Zyphirex
Date: August 1, 2013, 11:07 pm
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Well, I changed the names. I also nerfed it. :/
#Post#: 440--------------------------------------------------
Re: Toxipus
DIR By: sadoldporygon
Date: August 1, 2013, 11:19 pm
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Ok then Positive now and most likely topher is going to change
his too. But it still needs a little lowwer BST (something like
499 or lower we need low BST mons ok)
#Post#: 480--------------------------------------------------
Re: Toxipus
DIR By: Present
Date: August 2, 2013, 6:52 am
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I still vote Negative on this one, due to the hilarious nerf in
stats. It is still really pokerful with 110 Speed and 140 SpA.
Also, 570 BST is still legendary status.
Furthermore, I dissaprove of Swift Swim and Adabtility on
something with this kind of power (not even factoring in rain)
and the speed to abuse it. I think it is horridly OP.
#Post#: 488--------------------------------------------------
Re: Toxipus
DIR By: Zyphirex
Date: August 2, 2013, 7:30 am
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nerfed again :P
#Post#: 558--------------------------------------------------
Re: Toxipus
DIR By: Naminé
Date: August 2, 2013, 10:48 am
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Ok i vote **Positive** now
#Post#: 563--------------------------------------------------
Re: Toxipus
DIR By: Snaquaza
Date: August 2, 2013, 10:53 am
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don't we have strongmons already and even one above 540?
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