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Zectas Suggestions
By: Rex Date: December 11, 2014, 5:23 am
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[center][font=verdana]Lets put some suggestions on how to
improve Zectas!![/font][/center]
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: Rex Date: December 11, 2014, 5:33 am
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[font=verdana]Need illustrations[/font]
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Zectas need illustrations for characters.
It would be really good to have illustration of major characters
/ NPCs.
All right people, do some fan-arts and post them. Jawz will pick
it up (may be).
[spoiler]PS: No I don't do drawings... In fact I am worst at
it.[/spoiler]
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: johnnest Date: December 11, 2014, 6:13 am
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Yup, if it perfectly fits the characters I'll pick them up and
add them ^_^
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: Evasio Date: December 15, 2014, 8:40 am
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How about having someone add a bestiary add the end of each
book? With detailed explanations about beasts or something. Not
about items/equipment too many other novels do this and frankly
it's not worth it but a bestiary is good... I think...
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: Rex Date: December 15, 2014, 9:34 am
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I read somewhere that you should add a detailed character status
table at the end of each Volume for the main characters.
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: No Comment Date: December 15, 2014, 10:26 am
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Dedicate 30% of the time into well worded stat, skill and item
description porn.
@Rex, don't forget bosses as well. For Darius it would be ???
??? ??? ??? ??? unknown and ???
How far have you planned for the story so far?
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: johnnest Date: December 15, 2014, 11:57 am
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[quote author=Evasio link=topic=7.msg106#msg106 date=1418654430]
How about having someone add a bestiary add the end of each
book? With detailed explanations about beasts or something. Not
about items/equipment too many other novels do this and frankly
it's not worth it but a bestiary is good... I think...
[/quote]
A bestiary sounds good. I'll add that for volume 2.
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: johnnest Date: December 15, 2014, 11:59 am
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[quote author=Rex link=topic=7.msg108#msg108 date=1418657651]
I read somewhere that you should add a detailed character status
table at the end of each Volume for the main characters.
[/quote]
There was a character stat window for Smoke and Sierra at the
end of volume 2 what kind of "detailed" stat window are we
talking about here? I do have some drawings done by
JaneChristian for the end of volume 2 though :D
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: johnnest Date: December 15, 2014, 12:00 pm
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[quote author=No Comment link=topic=7.msg109#msg109
date=1418660766]
Dedicate 30% of the time into well worded stat, skill and item
description porn.
[member=16]Rex[/member], don't forget bosses as well. For Darius
it would be ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? unknown and ???
How far have you planned for the story so far?
[/quote]
I already have the ending summary. the middle parts are what's
missing.
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
By: No Comment Date: December 15, 2014, 1:48 pm
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[quote author=johnnest link=topic=7.msg112#msg112
date=1418666452]
I already have the ending summary. the middle parts are what's
missing.
[/quote]
Then that's easy. Just picture what you want smoke to have at
the end, say items, skills, combined skills. Think of what he
might have lost to gain new things etc. Then make a story
leading up to that.
Or time travel. Everyone loves time travel if you give them
enough time.
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