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       A Stuck Mic, a Struck Bottom by Well Disciplined
       By: Jack Date: February 1, 2026, 11:49 pm
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       This is a simple, straighforward, and very enjoyable story.  A
       great read for my tastes.
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       Re: A Stuck Mic, a Struck Bottom by Well Disciplined
       By: David M. Katz Date: February 3, 2026, 10:50 am
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       I found the story superb.  Proof that a story does not need to
       be complicated to work.  I recommend a read.
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       Re: A Stuck Mic, a Struck Bottom by Well Disciplined
       By: afinch Date: February 3, 2026, 6:24 pm
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       Totally agree.  A bit harsher than I prefer, but realistic and
       very well written.
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       Re: A Stuck Mic, a Struck Bottom by Well Disciplined
       By: Adric Date: February 4, 2026, 11:05 am
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       Great story, very realistic and well-written!
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       Re: A Stuck Mic, a Struck Bottom by Well Disciplined
       By: Skip Trace Date: February 4, 2026, 11:10 am
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       [quote author=afinch link=topic=3655.msg32187#msg32187
       date=1770164656]
       Totally agree.  A bit harsher than I prefer, but realistic and
       very well written.
       [/quote]
       I contacted WD and told him the story was “perfect.” I did say,
       “The whipping was hard to read about but it was given by a
       father who hated giving it, which makes all the difference.” In
       his reply, WD made the interesting point that the story is told
       from the boy’s perspective, who assumes his father is swinging
       as hard as possible, when it’s likely likely that dad held back
       a little. Still, not a fun experience, to be sure!
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       Re: A Stuck Mic, a Struck Bottom by Well Disciplined
       By: Jack Date: February 5, 2026, 5:05 pm
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       [quote author=Skip Trace link=topic=3655.msg32193#msg32193
       date=1770225046]
       In his reply, WD made the interesting point that the story is
       told from the boy’s perspective, who assumes his father is
       swinging as hard as possible, when it’s likely likely that dad
       held back a little. Still, not a fun experience, to be sure!
       [/quote]
       My feeling was that it was a pretty harsh start for the boy's
       first time, but now that you say that, I guess it seemed much
       harsher than it was BECAUSE it was his first time.
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