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Framed By My Brother MMSA story by DMK
By: David M. Katz Date: November 14, 2025, 11:22 am
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I have been searching for ways to motivate my writing. I asked
some author friends to send me blurbs and prompts to see if they
offered a jumping off spot. Skip Trace offered "framed by my
brother" as a prompt.
That clicked with me and I sat to write out my usual sort of
product but it wasn't working. I felt I needed to go in a dark
direction and do something I rarely do and that is put a shitty
dad in the picture. What is better than a shitty dad? Well, a
shitty big brother added in as well.
Simon is gay. His brother has turned hateful because of it and
the dad, well, he's just an a s s hole. Mom is ambivalent at
best. Jake, the older brother, is a dumb jock but does manage to
set Simon up to be punished by Dad.
This one is not happy and fluffy but I am still proud of it and
would ask you to give it a shot.
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=59839
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AI rendering of 16 yo Jake and 14 yo Simon:
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Re: Framed By My Brother MMSA story by DMK
By: David M. Katz Date: November 14, 2025, 11:24 am
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Weird.
The censor let me get away with "shitty" three times but blanked
out "a sshole". Oh, well, fixed it.
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Re: Framed By My Brother MMSA story by DMK
By: afinch Date: November 14, 2025, 4:05 pm
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I loved it, although I loved your previous, less dark story
more. Not an issue with your writing--just with this one, I
wanted to reach through the screen and strangle the 16 year old
brother and his abusive father.
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