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Taken In Hand by Pete Gradson
By: db105 Date: September 19, 2022, 5:04 am
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Taken In Hand by Pete Gradson
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I found this story really impressive. I particularly enjoyed how
well the main character's inner thoughts and reactions are
shown.
Full disclosure: I know the author, as I'm doing some
roleplaying with him. That does not change the fact that the
story is excellent.
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Re: Taken In Hand by Pete Gradson
By: afinch Date: September 19, 2022, 2:13 pm
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Yes, it's a wonderful story. Despite the English setting, I
could totally identify with Peter.
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Re: Taken In Hand by Pete Gradson
By: Kat Date: September 19, 2022, 3:24 pm
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It's a very well written story. Like Kier, I could identify with
Peter. However, unlike Peter in the story, I don't think I'd
have accepted any affection from my uncle and aunt or come to
any sort of resolution with adults who are such nasty,
authoritarian bullies. Peter comes off as a pretty typical
adolescent, who is hardly deserving of the degree of harsh
punishment he receives. I commend Pete Gradson on developing his
characters so well. They certainly evoked an emotional response.
Kat
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