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Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: Jack Date: August 8, 2022, 4:56 pm
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in case there's anyone here who is interested, but doesn't check
MMSA on a regular basis, I wanted to mention that I have a new
series.
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51588&login=author
To be clear, this is NOT a spanking story. There are spankings
in almost every chapter, and I try to make them hot,
interesting, and relevant, but this is intended to be a high
school soap opera, where a lot of the characters happen to be
gay and many of them happen to be into spanking. Sure, it's
wish fulfillment, but hopefully it's interesting wish
fulfillment.
Originally, this was intended to be ten chapters, but it ended
up at twelve, and those twelve are over 70,000 words, so it's
definitely novel length. In case you didn't guess, that means I
did write the entire first Season before I began posting it, to
be sure I wouldn't become discouraged and quit partway through.
I have called these first twelve chapters 'Season One' and it
ends on a cliffhanger. I wasn't sure if I was going to continue
or not, but I've had enough fun with it that I've already
started writing Season two.
I also want to take a minute to thank Adric, who's been my
editor for this series (and other writing) as well as Zac and
Kier, who've been beta readers and helped a lot with feedback
and continuity.
Hope that, if you check it out, you enjoy it.
Thanks
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Re: Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: Zyngaru Date: August 8, 2022, 6:55 pm
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You will want to read this one. I mean I love everything Jack
writes but this one is special for a number of reasons.
One it's new. How long has it been since Jack wrote something
new? I don't know.
But the main reason I'm having fun with this story is that Jack
is going to have the entire student population in this thing.
(Exaggerating) (I think) and yet each and every character it
distinct and most importantly you can keep them all clear in
your head.
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Re: Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: afinch Date: August 8, 2022, 10:55 pm
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It really IS excellent. So good that, having beta read it, I am
rereading each chapter as it posts on MMSA. I can't wait for
series 2.
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Re: Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: Zac Date: August 14, 2022, 4:53 pm
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Chapter two is now on MMSA
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51589
It appeared a few days ago but somehow came in under my radar
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Re: Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: Jack Date: September 5, 2022, 4:53 am
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The first five episodes of this series have now been posted, and
I have to admit that, while I'd love more feedback, I'm
extremely happy with the number of readers who've stayed with
the series this long.
REQUEST AND DISCUSSION:
It's interesting to me that, of the five episodes currently
posted, three of them received a staff recommendation. Now, I
don't know if these were all reviewed by the same person or not,
but I'd be interested in hearing what anyone thinks about
reasons that some of them were recommended and others weren't.
I have my own ideas, but I'd like to hear yours first.
Thanks,
Jack
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Re: Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: Zyngaru Date: September 5, 2022, 10:29 am
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[quote author=Jack link=topic=2702.msg25466#msg25466
date=1662371632]
The first five episodes of this series have now been posted, and
I have to admit that, while I'd love more feedback, I'm
extremely happy with the number of readers who've stayed with
the series this long.
REQUEST AND DISCUSSION:
It's interesting to me that, of the five episodes currently
posted, three of them received a staff recommendation. Now, I
don't know if these were all reviewed by the same person or not,
but I'd be interested in hearing what anyone thinks about
reasons that some of them were recommended and others weren't.
I have my own ideas, but I'd like to hear yours first.
Thanks,
Jack
[/quote]
Jack, I find that same thing with my stores, especially the
series.
Some will have the Staff Recommendation and others won't and
they were all usually written at the same time, just broken up
into series.
My thought about this is that it depends on who reviews it. Now
I rarely know who reviews my stories. Occasionally a reviewer
will send me feedback and tell me they reviewed and liked the
story, so those I know, but most I don't.
I do find it odd, when I will write a story in two hours and
send it in, and it gets a Staff Recommendation, and I will spend
weeks going over and over another story to get everything just
right and no Recommendation.
The only way I can explain that happening is different
reviewers. Which makes sense, because each reviewer has their
own personal taste in a story. Being a reviewer, I would assume
that review stories that aren't their personal taste, so it
would only make sense they wouldn't put their own recommendation
on a story that isn't of their taste.
I know I could never be a reviewer. There are many reasons why,
but one of those reasons, I only read stories that I find
personally desirous. I mean I read stories from a lot of
authors, but not all the stories written for a particular
author. Some stories are in my wheelhouse and others aren't,
even those written from the same author.
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Re: Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: Jack Date: August 9, 2024, 5:09 pm
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I just wanted to make a couple of announcements here.
First, let me remind readers that the Raven's Guide to CPHS is
available here -
HTML https://docs.google.com/document/d/19-Q08ldlpMVjux2_Pg2VSkCtISrfyUoDDI0jnDjHGCQ/edit?usp=sharing
Second, I'm happy to announce that all of season three has now
been submitted and the last five episodes should be appearing
over the next month or so. S03 is actually longer than the
first two at 16 chapters. A lot of the reason for that is, I
burned out while writing season two and just jumped to a close,
rather than leaving things hanging. At that time, I really
didn't plan to come back to it. However, like Dad and Me, I
really enjoy these characters. However, that meant S03 had to
explore and explain a number of things that were supposed to
happen at the end of S02.
Finally - I'm also happy to announce that I started the actual
writing of S04 today.
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Re: Central Point High School - A New Series by Jack
By: afinch Date: August 9, 2024, 11:14 pm
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Happy to hear the announcement. Excited to pre-read the new
season chapters, and then get to read them again on MMSA.
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