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       The Truant Boy's Tale - MMSA Poem by DMK
       By: David M. Katz Date: July 15, 2022, 7:58 am
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       "Stick to writing stories": That is what the one ( and likely
       only) piece of feedback on my latest had to say. To which I
       politely replied saying that sometimes I write solely for my own
       entertainment.
       Yes, my latest is NOT prose. For the fourth time in almost
       twelve years, I have ventured into the world of poetry. Why?
       Because I said to myself, "I want to write a poem." I like it
       except the meter got away from me on this one but it is still
       very readable.
       "The Truant Boy's Tale" tells of the woes of Chuck who asks to
       stay home from school and what happens when he is denied. It
       seems though that Chuck cannot take responsibility for his
       actions and wants to blame the three spankings he ends up with
       in the course of a single day on some force other than his own
       actions.
       It has been made part of the collection of my other "Tales" in
       the poem series "The Bared Bottom Tales" where you can find all
       four times where I should have stuck to writing stories.
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       Re: The Truant Boy's Tale - MMSA Poem by DMK
       By: Kat Date: July 15, 2022, 6:03 pm
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       It's very enjoyable. It also tells a story, albeit not in prose.
       Good job, Katz.
       Kat
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       Re: The Truant Boy's Tale - MMSA Poem by DMK
       By: afinch Date: July 15, 2022, 6:35 pm
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       [quote author=Kat link=topic=2684.msg25154#msg25154
       date=1657926189]
       It's very enjoyable. It also tells a story, albeit not in prose.
       Good job, Katz.
       Kat
       [/quote]
       It's very well done.
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