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Double WHASS Treat at MMSA: Katz and Kellis
By: Kat Date: June 4, 2022, 12:13 pm
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DKellis has a new installment in his Family Saga series. This
one focuses on the younger brothers and what happens when
practical jokes go awry.
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51155
Katz has a new story called "Up in His Room".
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51163
Ken deals with the aftermath of a serious error in judgement up
in his room. There is a lot to love in this story. Katz does an
exceptional job of writing on this one. It has warmth and a
loving father-son relationship, but it also has elements people
will find hot.
Kat
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Re: Double WHASS Treat at MMSA: Katz and Kellis
By: Adric Date: June 4, 2022, 7:06 pm
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[quote author=Kat link=topic=2649.msg24873#msg24873
date=1654362808]
Katz has a new story called "Up in His Room
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51163".
Ken deals with the aftermath of a serious error in judgement up
in his room. There is a lot to love in this story. Katz does an
exceptional job of writing on this one. It's has warmth and a
loving father-son relationship, but it also has elements people
will find hot.
[/quote]
Agreed. Dave's story hits all the right buttons for me.
Beautifully written WHASS story with believable characters and a
satisfying ending. My kind of story.
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Re: Double WHASS Treat at MMSA: Katz and Kellis
By: afinch Date: June 5, 2022, 4:45 pm
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I loved both stories. What a treat to find both amidst the
chaff of what is increasingly MMSA offerings.
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Re: Double WHASS Treat at MMSA: Katz and Kellis
By: David M. Katz Date: June 5, 2022, 7:34 pm
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Many thanks to you all.
I want to thank Kat, Skip, and HBB for some behind-the-scenes
editorial advice.
I would encourage all of us here, who are the majority of the
MMSA WHASS writers, to dust off the keyboards.
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Re: Double WHASS Treat at MMSA: Katz and Kellis
By: Adric Date: June 12, 2022, 7:12 pm
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DKellis now has a terrific follow-on chapter posted to his A
Family Saga series:
Camaraderie:
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51219
Trying not to say too much, I'll just say that this chapter
covers a scene that anyone reading this series must have been
expecting and hoping for. The writing is outstanding, and the
grasp and portrayal of human emotions is awesome. Fantastic
story, and fantastic series.
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Re: Double WHASS Treat at MMSA: Katz and Kellis
By: Kat Date: June 12, 2022, 7:32 pm
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[quote author=Adric link=topic=2649.msg24922#msg24922
date=1655079175]
DKellis now has a terrific follow-on chapter posted to his A
Family Saga series:
Camaraderie:
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51219
Trying not to say too much, I'll just say that this chapter
covers a scene that anyone reading this series must have been
expecting and hoping for. The writing is outstanding, and the
grasp and portrayal of human emotions is awesome. Fantastic
story, and fantastic series.
[/quote]
I couldn't agree more, Adric. This is a series to get your teeth
into. The good thing about a series is how much character
development happens. Danny is a great writer, with a real gift
for story telling. Nothing ever seems implausible. Every passage
of narrative and dialogue feels natural.
I don't want to mention this at MMSA, and I don't suppose it
matters to Danny, but I wonder why the stories in this series
don't get shields. This story has an important development. Even
if a reviewer didn't want to rec every story in a lengthy
series, this one is special.
Kat
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Re: Double WHASS Treat at MMSA: Katz and Kellis
By: Adric Date: July 18, 2022, 8:33 am
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Another really good chapter from DKellis: The Bust
HTML https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51486&dark=yes.
Fully appreciating this one requires a little background from
previous chapters. My recommended solution to that is to read
the whole series, A Family Saga
HTML https://malespank.net/listSeries.php?show=50940&dark=yes.
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