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Comfort or Dis...
By: Jack Date: September 8, 2019, 7:19 am
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There's no right or wrong answer to this, but I'm just curious.
One is perusing a story of corporal discipline. There are two
protagonists who are cousins, and the story has made it clear
that the two aren't able to see each other on anything like a
regular basis. Then, it's realized that the two have
transgressed. One becomes excited as the heroes fate grows
clear. Is one hoping that
1) the cousins are very familiar with each other's bodies, and
aren't at all uncomfortable with seeing each other undressed.
2) though used to seeing each other, they're not accustomed to
being disciplined together, and they're both very worried about
their cousin seeing what's about to happen.
3) one of the boys is an only child and, while his cousin is
used to being disciplined with other boys and not too
uncomfortable, the only child is really upset with it.
4) both boys are shy, and they're upset enough with the idea of
the other seeing them undressed, much less watching while
they're disciplined.
In other words, what level of embarrassment do you like in a
story?
I have to admit, it doesn't matter too much to me. I don't like
situations when a child is deliberately humiliated, but a
situation where a boy puts himself in a situation where he is
humiliated by his own shyness (for example) can be a real spice
for me. On the other hand, it's not something that makes or
breaks a story for me, and I think that in most of my own
stories, the boys have a certain level of comfort with their own
bodies and with being seen by other boys.
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Re: Comfort or Dis...
By: Zyngaru Date: September 8, 2019, 8:25 am
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I am a number 4 type of guy.
I prefer humiliation over pain in a story. I prefer the
emotional side being detailed as much as possible, rather than
the painful side being detailed. In this particular story, I
would want to read how each boy felt and what he was thinking as
each piece of clothing came off. How he felt about his cousin
watching him take each piece off and how he feels about seeing
his cousin undress. When it comes to the spanking. I am more
interested in how each boy tries to put on a brave act in front
of his cousin over knowing how each swat of the implement feels.
How when one of them begins to cry how he feels about his
cousin seeing his tears and hearing him crying.
As for stories about humiliation. I like both. I like the ones
where a boy humiliates himself, like diving into the public pool
and his trunks come off and he is left in the middle of the pool
naked and has to try and find a way to retrieve his trunks while
everyone is staring and laughing at him. I also like the
stories where someone else humiliates the boy. He is at the
pool and another boy comes up under him and pulls his trunks off
and swims away with them and he has to chase after his trunks
while naked with everyone laughing and staring at him.
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Re: Comfort or Dis...
By: Adric Date: September 8, 2019, 8:44 am
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I agree with Jack that this is not a big issue for me and all of
the scenarios he mentions work well. I might have a preference
for number 2 but it is not a strong preference.
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Re: Comfort or Dis...
By: squarecutter Date: September 16, 2019, 4:55 pm
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As I prefer for stories to have some character development it is
not the question of embarrasssment or discomfort(we're talking
about spaning much of it bare after all,) it is whether it fits
in or enhances the story that matters along with how the
characters involved deal with it
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