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#Post#: 83901--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: AbidingDudev4.1
Date: March 23, 2022, 12:26 pm
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Rizzo can't play ball on opening day
Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
#Post#: 83908--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: LabPartner
Date: March 23, 2022, 12:41 pm
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Rizzo can't play ball on opening day
Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
He did the "science" on his own
#Post#: 83914--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: animaniactoo
Date: March 23, 2022, 12:47 pm
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--- Quote from: LabPartner link ---
>
> Rizzo can't play ball on opening day
> Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
>
> He did the "science" on his own
>
--- End Quote ---
BUZZZZZ! Too many syllables. Please resubmit with fewer
syllables. 8-8-6-6-8, and you can get away with an extra one if
you elide it. But 8 syllables is a no go on a 6 line. Yes, I'm
gonna be a butthead about this, because it throws off the rhythm
when you chant it.
#Post#: 83917--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: LabPartner
Date: March 23, 2022, 12:52 pm
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--- Quote from: animaniactoo link ---
>
> [quote author=LabPartner link=topic=702.msg83908#msg83908
date=1648057280]
> Rizzo can't play ball on opening day
> Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
>
> He did the "science" on his own
>
--- End Quote ---
BUZZZZZ! Too many syllables. Please resubmit with fewer
syllables. 8-8-6-6-8, and you can get away with an extra one if
you elide it. But 8 syllables is a no go on a 6 line. Yes, I'm
gonna be a butthead about this, because it throws off the rhythm
when you chant it.
[/quote]
If you're buzzing, why didn't you buzz our limerick that
devolved into free verse?
--- Quote ---
> One thing about this limerick crew
> We have a very clever point of view
> We can turn a good phrase
> In ways that amaze.
>
> But don't expect us to make much sense!
--- End Quote ---
#Post#: 83919--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: muskrat
Date: March 23, 2022, 12:55 pm
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--- Quote from: animaniactoo link ---
>
> [quote author=LabPartner link=topic=702.msg83908#msg83908
date=1648057280]
> Rizzo can't play ball on opening day
> Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
>
> He did the "science" on his own
>
--- End Quote ---
BUZZZZZ! Too many syllables. Please resubmit with fewer
syllables. 8-8-6-6-8, and you can get away with an extra one if
you elide it. But 8 syllables is a no go on a 6 line. Yes, I'm
gonna be a butthead about this, because it throws off the rhythm
when you chant it.
[/quote]
Counter-BUZZZ! IMHO, As long as line four matches the cadence
of line three, the # of syllables of line 3 is irrelevant.
I vote that line 3 should stand as is .... ;D
#Post#: 83925--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: animaniactoo
Date: March 23, 2022, 1:09 pm
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--- Quote from: LabPartner link ---
>
> [quote author=animaniactoo link=topic=702.msg83914#msg83914
date=1648057636]
> [quote author=LabPartner link=topic=702.msg83908#msg83908
date=1648057280]
> Rizzo can't play ball on opening day
> Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
>
> He did the "science" on his own
>
--- End Quote ---
BUZZZZZ! Too many syllables. Please resubmit with fewer
syllables. 8-8-6-6-8, and you can get away with an extra one if
you elide it. But 8 syllables is a no go on a 6 line. Yes, I'm
gonna be a butthead about this, because it throws off the rhythm
when you chant it.
[/quote]
If you're buzzing, why didn't you buzz our limerick that
devolved into free verse?
--- Quote ---
> One thing about this limerick crew
> We have a very clever point of view
> We can turn a good phrase
> In ways that amaze.
>
> But don't expect us to make much sense!
--- End Quote ---
[/quote]
I may have been gritting my teeth until it got to be too much...
#Post#: 83970--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: oreally
Date: March 23, 2022, 2:32 pm
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--- Quote from: animaniactoo link ---
>
> [quote author=LabPartner link=topic=702.msg83908#msg83908
date=1648057280]
> Rizzo can't play ball on opening day
> Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
>
> He did the "science" on his own
>
--- End Quote ---
BUZZZZZ! Too many syllables. Please resubmit with fewer
syllables. 8-8-6-6-8, and you can get away with an extra one if
you elide it. But 8 syllables is a no go on a 6 line. Yes, I'm
gonna be a butthead about this, because it throws off the rhythm
when you chant it.
[/quote]
It took you a very long time to throw this flag.
Now back to Rizzo...
#Post#: 83972--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: oreally
Date: March 23, 2022, 2:42 pm
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Rizzo's can't play ball out on opening day
Is he hurt or no shots did they say?
He "scienced" himself
#Post#: 83973--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: oreally
Date: March 23, 2022, 2:48 pm
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With some crap off the shelf
#Post#: 83974--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Limerick Game
DIR By: oreally
Date: March 23, 2022, 2:49 pm
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And now nobody wants him to play.
Sorry, peeps. I got carried away.
THAT IS NOT THE NEW STARTING LINE.
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